作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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2 H$ z6 x. v+ }　　　　　One day I always remember

, s: T% d8 O" [0 X3 u　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

* H' T9 ?1 `# u% u1 d' y/ sput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

& ^. ]! \3 S. ~0 e3 w6 G8 i little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

5 |1 e9 p" h/ u, f was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

( R% e( j, f! D3 D1 _trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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& A% q- A0 {* t! K2 d& y, Hthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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0 {. t" a5 S$ c7 K on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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0 \! A! E) j) Z: q# v% KAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

* c8 C: I* J2 P+ @$ q& e- Z/ G* Q never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
# k% ~- @3 v$ {! r* Fwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！