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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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3 t; i  {! W8 b0 C' {# \1 y     One day I always remember) I% m, p2 S5 u/ C

3 A! f( J8 i4 H! ^% \& @  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was+ q4 `5 z0 E+ N

# P6 o$ n1 g+ n' x% ^exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my# ~' l! u0 F5 T0 D( ^; B
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid4 ^' N. d& h1 z

- V) M( W/ Z& S8 d+ T$ Z, Z1 o was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ! h$ ]6 |$ D+ W
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my * E8 R  s: R1 {; H$ U3 A+ N
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deaest daughter.. t! g0 [: B. `) l: t

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.* j5 y3 V: l, a" q# c

* C( o, \, L9 i[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!( T. _+ y' J) @' k2 _6 A5 q
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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