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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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7 s6 @* A) S2 L; q: w  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was  U6 J, ?% I! S+ d* ^/ z* E

. j3 a; c) n! {exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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, B& N0 U  m% t7 |* [put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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9 V: [2 h' v+ t! G& D7 {3 ?' l/ j little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,# Z; B. x9 q: w9 [" _  q0 L5 i

, y. n% r, [+ T' p/ w every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid2 M4 E1 v& u: z0 r! Q1 m
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 1 y* y6 {/ ?' \- e0 D

% ~+ [8 _, x6 q6 htrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since   e" w) N" I0 B. a7 w" t0 m7 Z- Z
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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1 B5 ]! w4 c; A0 v6 E0 M on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 2 n) S. y! f4 f; R' d
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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0 u/ C; h* W$ S+ x. P+ Z1 {After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will5 Q+ D6 Q  p% [1 G$ B- n

% e: t" O# [5 T3 i7 f never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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( n9 Y: S& r, E, K, r- P+ A3 Z% ~2 t& @[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
4 `" R' [; q; d9 \7 hwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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