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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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+ L& g# G/ k- W# G. T  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was  o% r6 I' ]6 Z' W4 ]/ g: k! f

6 t: z, m( u# Q: t* c% h8 ~, Uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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+ C8 p! q- T3 ]. ~$ P+ { little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,; `9 M6 J5 i+ {* {9 X- y/ q# T8 z

6 g" |0 G$ P, V% M- b; ^4 g every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid. T( K8 Q7 E" f, U9 }

- W9 X0 ]; X3 B$ b was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ; O8 S7 b+ T9 v& ]' O# E4 F0 r6 U0 t( e' ^
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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$ w, u3 T( Y8 U/ G3 j on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 5 y. s% f7 U, j( _- M2 D) G) r

4 \( W4 C8 J" l' r% h4 n+ yfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my / g+ Q% a* b4 O6 X
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deaest daughter.* q5 J6 a3 \0 t0 ]/ N! l
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$ ?- l; D4 O5 x0 i$ LAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
0 |% `2 c9 Z) g" y0 g3 Uwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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