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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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0 ]4 F$ e5 X1 ~0 {- \4 E6 K7 h1 g     One day I always remember- c0 p8 ?9 B+ m" X, \  `# m& u7 |

/ \6 ?% r+ J& [  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was' _3 I% `' n2 x& N" ^
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 g( ?6 h% c) s8 F/ @  w; G3 ^

; P. ~) A8 A2 L: ~% d* p' o+ b+ W was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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. k9 b+ [% O, y6 V- Dtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since : q6 E. [/ G  U, h

  ^, p1 R, z& B1 nthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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9 A+ N0 r0 ^9 V8 ?for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will, z% Q( Y; N/ {; r/ j

  ?/ P' q+ a: Y2 p* c never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!  W8 H# t$ ?7 V7 N
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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