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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)# E' R9 K$ _' J1 Q: H
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was3 Z$ f" p# n2 C7 h7 R1 j2 o/ F/ O

0 ?% \& e& e' M$ t' z* Kexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to$ x. p4 n5 ?, B$ s: n- O

- e" \. e; w, Z& B/ }9 hput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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4 T  }4 I( p1 |: o8 P* N3 ] little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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$ M) M. K( t& B" K was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 5 M. P" F4 ]3 t- i# C5 F/ J
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard # R: J* D0 n' G

3 p& N; d1 i" _/ ~7 t/ nfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 7 M+ d# V- R7 S

; e. m, J) `4 E' Mdeaest daughter.1 W8 c- L( Q* @; N# q+ K

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+ X7 e, g6 Q( @9 B/ |After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.# Q7 D7 }* U2 r3 h  r
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!6 z3 h7 b0 }; ^$ r  }1 T# L
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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