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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一). o3 \9 k( a7 R* R, [

" P9 j- M) b: j. C2 H( Z     One day I always remember' P5 V7 _* X! y* Y, @5 F; ^
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 F+ N# V1 m$ m/ U6 n$ T, \  t

7 T1 i! P7 I8 V- r6 B: n  Cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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0 `$ ?6 t0 K* e# X, hput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my' ?6 t) W! H9 Q9 u" E% ^  B
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse," v! Y, ~# Q. h/ b$ k

, X8 w* B: V1 Q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid0 F% \" y' a: Q
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely $ n$ w3 ]. f+ X) ~0 ]. M' J
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 j) d! X' C5 D1 m' L. S

7 f- [3 N8 q5 ?+ |that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing. G) Y* S. L0 H: r* E0 @

7 I' r7 v; r/ l5 v) R on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard , ^; L" Y: v* O4 O2 U$ i
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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( h: i0 D: ]0 ?8 M) E  ]) CAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will! ]! l& l" t8 \6 U+ A

2 g& ?: {- Z: _ never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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$ f9 o: M' d  `1 `7 I) U[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
% C( ], _2 j3 a7 w8 H5 zwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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