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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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4 I* ]- Q" o; g  E8 J     One day I always remember3 v! j- J: \& _+ p2 h" F; }! u

. i. z& e- U0 e& Y% r2 T6 c  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 z. c" y- t3 G- K( ^
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,% I/ p& d. b' L! L) g; \

: h$ A# h$ t! t% j/ r7 D every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid. x7 S: \- G2 k: C

+ Z' [5 b! [' b was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely $ N6 U4 B, Z' ?& {
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 y* l" Y  c" Y$ O: @1 J; B( p* x
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, P( x1 i- j; t- k

4 a- k& F4 G3 S1 A, u8 d on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard * x- z+ V+ W! k# ?4 }6 y( `+ \" o

9 C: V% O2 d: Q( q3 ufor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my   ^5 b  z; X* {  S6 r
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deaest daughter.
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2 L9 M1 }! |' k6 H# H! s, C8 eAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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* W5 b& y- R* r" z; J[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!: l8 A+ t- b+ L& Y% Q. `; G
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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