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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)& S5 x* R: n& g2 z' F
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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; V" g9 r% E+ X2 w# W6 ]" C1 g& Dput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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0 e( l+ `1 r% n5 Z( ^& } every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 1 e7 F9 V/ p2 x! [
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard * i( T7 G" _5 l+ f

" ?* J- L8 [: c8 _  d+ Xfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ; m) n  p0 s& [% L

; r- ]9 S, N; y4 C5 mdeaest daughter.
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$ v6 i4 c8 g, C  p# B0 ]* XAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!; z: _8 {  a# G! i6 `- h8 E  T2 W/ t/ m
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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