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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

5 s! p+ ~9 W, T) n　　　　　One day I always remember

& J4 w: w! q/ k6 S0 Z# L$ s　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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& }0 a" v/ z$ sput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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: A; U6 c6 }9 z) }5 ?3 f: I* h little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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' |, ?5 y$ G8 K: ~* f every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

- V) B9 x1 w6 Btrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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0 W, D/ w1 H3 N/ X" n. fthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

- X% R* K8 U; A' ~ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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- \' E% |) Z& N0 o! Z. hfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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- }8 p7 Q4 M& ]* g# ?After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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6 ?* O& R$ D3 ~! s* f* \) X5 I never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！