翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞

Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
1 M+ z6 J7 }3 C2 X  Gwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
) E( j/ z  O% yeyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
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此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
/ x) _# R: O# |- a; m眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。
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Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
; L) v# U  K5 nSmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
/ W; N* M& q) E  [& khand, danced along the crazy theme.

酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
6 l! V( \. `; F$ ]: O1 C8 I: B4 l姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。

Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
% y2 n3 f; Q1 y: [! O8 g" O* d) n( _greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
( c  m7 x: e3 Lme. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
9 i$ n+ ^7 }0 A% N% ifrom God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
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Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
9 _3 O: c" r$ w* a9 B) w0 W( ?( e& u' tski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
! ^( n* E9 W2 u+ ggood-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
$ s& X) ]3 j1 t6 l- c6 sshouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
7 Q' X$ W" @1 x6 ]7 {/ J( {8 ^feel all the same.

往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
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于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。
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My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
1 R3 o. y7 @2 A/ R6 w* yflinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
" _; [. Z+ J  n- _8 rChristmas bell!

妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
% [3 ]4 ?6 D4 J/ m# ^- j' ]皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。

The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
+ b! A2 j1 }8 `8 X# O, z7 h( i- iSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
( n0 W+ U" ^) Y+ ?) Otrace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
3 w8 R0 N8 J* d! `3 z7 z- S8 dnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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$ {4 g' P( N' W0 S+ _/ Y钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
8 _7 \7 g0 O( |# S而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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Snowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
$ q6 o9 e( X8 @1 u; H, S: N雪花渐融，妾与君仍天各一方

三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表

你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
1 `8 N. h& I/ {, ]/ l) S! P不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
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8 G7 k+ p  q9 s# d4 A! j相信地球人都知道吧~~

7 m3 ^5 ?- q* F6 n& }其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表

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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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7 l5 |1 @0 P( Q% |3 B8 I/ ~. \是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

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; P  |1 c3 D; _( ?+ p) a- D0 v$ `我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表
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$ f% h6 A2 O* n8 J  Q我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
9 z$ r$ a+ E9 a. e+ Z! d+ E# _怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

不看年纪，看地位～

Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢