SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
$ z" c% l% T+ ~1 I8 {( Y7 l) Z9 aFour additional tires with rims
6 I. p4 p, S# }1 O# x, xAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
  @7 W1 S# k: n0 m1 [! D% ZInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
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Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
3 x, w: q" p) W8 K1 KAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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# B2 v6 D' Z7 u- y# rPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
: c5 M. l# z$ Z) x( E- w1 mPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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9 V) }/ W& X5 ?1 I& C$ [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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# h. h" Q# c6 k( fIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
1 L8 I! a8 ^4 T1 V6 V! [0 } IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

: Q' P0 |0 S, y+ I6 p3 H1 n) E哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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7 I' ^: s0 i* M* HDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
) {  F" W/ H" u# }. q4 ~, _7 g6 lThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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% _, \  ?. X) B- k2 z' k! O0 V  O3 lLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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! N8 o5 ?; U  H2 Y: o9 f, ["NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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) }7 a  Y, ~4 \7 I6 K$ |There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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