SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
3 f) u& m% U& }. DTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
% f0 \* Q( z7 H( ]2 ?Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
" K; R' _, W* h; g% {. ~" \4 ]Central control locks,doors,windows
' J3 J! Q( ^, n, APower locks
Power mirrors
' S( u9 L( t) W) L2 i# uPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
# Z9 [6 n! t. C9 {2 }- ~# E( uBluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
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Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

1 j1 E4 y* F) I- l& j**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

' A2 n7 ~# B& Q8 nIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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! e4 a$ Q! D# P2 P+ |/ IIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

+ U& I$ O1 v1 U8 h& z4 [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

3 R3 ~5 q$ J7 M* r2 X* j6 Z3 |9 Z这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

+ M& `. e4 ^3 OBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

: h$ J" P1 n8 q+ q7 D4 ^+ V9 Z哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

! o7 M6 H9 c4 }6 l6 r+ VFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
! j+ V* o: T# W9 U/ ~/ TThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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# n, M8 o' j, h$ xSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
. E9 ?$ k! W, W) }2 ~/ J) G3 IYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

6 }8 y5 _: }* ?6 b4 F; HThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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