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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  O( N4 U$ Z) ?0 vI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
; o1 N% `0 [$ X1 a2 hDreamers3 M# i% l* R, e! V4 l# W3 z
Savages" G. \3 {9 c2 _% G0 s8 K) ^
Poets
' t" n8 j; r4 S3 T$ S) p* DBuilders of canoes,
1 Z0 Y, u& G  I" mBlack smiths8 f/ I# o2 A/ d9 D9 s; h8 O* T
Murderers,' @3 [7 b4 ?8 t) @
Risk takers,5 ?& D- N9 g# W$ j. j5 [
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 W, F% f, e, E
As I think of what could be. * l9 B# F/ Q0 d* C
The world is so big to me
' J, B2 m; v6 m) tI wonder what it means to be
! z2 _: C) i6 E- i  b$ QI looked up at the star and smiled
( C" v4 Z- @$ M/ z& g3 R9 D, kThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 5 f: f  t0 a2 j4 e. R5 ^4 ]; P

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
2 n$ ?3 J4 e2 d% P$ i- W- a5 Q评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
/ _0 t0 s: N5 J) }/ `7 Q, c: l2 `顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
9 ]% y- K/ l; N6 nA poor old Guy;
4 a9 N7 k* k9 w1 ]7 w" T" cLegs in a bonfire,# Q. n2 l0 p# ]% \, `
Head in the sky
( X2 `' u* ~; \8 X) L! g  DLonely, with the feel of betray
2 M/ N: `" }* f* N! uHeart empty and hollow
: d6 e( `: {; E5 ?- b" FAlone I stand
* Q4 l3 J! G8 a- B1 WI am useless to all ) J( F4 Q! D& w6 c  Q0 a4 F& c3 i" B
But I wish I were a dove
8 J. a( x: L. m/ ]7 T3 U  SGiving myself to the world, to the fire! t* `4 W4 ~2 U" W5 @6 D% D
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
3 |5 {9 W4 R# X3 M$ gI sent prayers to my god0 G( o) X& A( u; ]$ B) Y0 ^+ [
Though he does not answer% T. }+ E# i8 d
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
+ M( E" S; R5 q# H0 j加油加油,经常写写!
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