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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
% s! z* U( z- hI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  3 I$ u! ~+ t# ~: ?
Dreamers/ ^5 @( m0 g; R" |! M3 ~' a
Savages, v% t# [3 j8 i; f
Poets
+ }  I2 t% V6 E/ sBuilders of canoes,
" |4 U& V3 r! rBlack smiths
  L2 E4 ^0 q" D8 r; I2 I8 I% fMurderers,
  l5 S, U/ Z1 l- B, _( g# v0 ~, pRisk takers,# M8 q" g! ^6 i
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder / S( w, Q! A1 @
As I think of what could be.
" L& j1 N% W/ K; _" y1 q1 @; s+ xThe world is so big to me # Y+ c' Q; W1 x) _4 z3 e
I wonder what it means to be7 Z& W1 ]# o7 Q- r( h* Y( L% f
I looked up at the star and smiled ' ]. J/ q  g( @4 ?: c1 F' Y2 T
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。2 N1 z9 h; z* q9 _) a- P* R
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
) l8 d& y4 Y7 I6 B$ B顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
  E: D7 O* H% q, EA poor old Guy;
, z6 e2 X4 \& a. J! K0 ]Legs in a bonfire,, Y- z- \* `5 I- Y% u% h, r/ q
Head in the sky% I3 N! H8 v: S$ Y9 Z  J
Lonely, with the feel of betray
' S* B0 I5 t' m; z! B+ F  KHeart empty and hollow
) _/ m. ^# K5 j6 q& H' ^! NAlone I stand
' F* F2 H& L4 k' PI am useless to all
- Y( R4 f+ a% OBut I wish I were a dove
2 L4 ~( [! n& v* J) l  c( EGiving myself to the world, to the fire
4 b/ @$ [3 t0 i. X0 TI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind4 F4 h1 M  c' m4 a. B
I sent prayers to my god% ?+ B% x: p% P, \7 C6 b, M
Though he does not answer2 a1 n6 m: m- r+ c1 u; b+ r  ~( J
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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