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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
. }; i6 o$ }. i9 D. r* iI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
$ u) M6 w' w, M! z8 MDreamers
; A* j% X) ^& q- {0 V- QSavages: r. K' T7 ?+ j" p$ E' r5 h
Poets
! D' {1 ]7 ]* T( sBuilders of canoes,/ R$ {0 ~# |0 O6 H
Black smiths
5 {! z+ [7 m  x2 jMurderers,  H! U8 A% J' r9 [; `7 Z2 u
Risk takers,
/ d% B$ s) L! f% }3 y7 i8 cMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 M1 K1 O% f" Q3 U& ?1 q5 u9 G* X: K0 d
As I think of what could be.
1 @& A, r1 l& u# O" Y3 NThe world is so big to me
" ]* h; M3 Q$ K, uI wonder what it means to be# \) ~' @: \; u; ?, Q
I looked up at the star and smiled ! L( }6 Q6 v" n( H: R5 A
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。5 |1 r" ^# W* J$ ?4 e* ]0 A
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
' l- p3 Y9 _) u. O; F1 X0 {/ s顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
& _2 X2 w0 @8 \3 c, ?) }A poor old Guy;
* I9 d2 Y3 T, l1 j! h1 X. N3 TLegs in a bonfire,2 Z- f- C# s9 V* j9 D% j
Head in the sky
% y( }: n* R* @7 y% KLonely, with the feel of betray
9 v  \7 U' s) E; y# }! {" Z4 KHeart empty and hollow
+ c4 h0 \! R# N; L/ k; {Alone I stand
2 [' M6 E- G7 LI am useless to all
' _" ?0 S' ~  U9 k2 D! GBut I wish I were a dove & C7 N$ q! Y4 G3 T( N# e
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
6 T% n1 |5 {; Z( a% \) S; iI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
; I8 `! y! e  EI sent prayers to my god
9 _6 }& H' o& J# h" i. r) KThough he does not answer
/ j* P+ {2 {" A5 s7 _1 zHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
0 Q% i! Y  k+ K$ r加油加油,经常写写!
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