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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
. C: B6 U5 S- x1 ?' S: LI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
& w$ ?- u/ j6 ]Dreamers
# [' f2 n) K& ]1 ySavages. a. s. N9 I% \% m9 U( C
Poets
) Q+ t- B& M9 aBuilders of canoes,
! B% |6 Y( Z! }4 c  H( i9 y- [Black smiths
2 @$ f1 G1 a" r+ X& x& f( hMurderers,7 M: X) E. H) J' q
Risk takers,
# {; U5 H, b- iMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder % e# p  N- y4 [" D3 c7 B  P% q$ M  X
As I think of what could be. ' U; b* B3 ~; w  V, y$ ~
The world is so big to me
: r: {" @0 i# n+ D# aI wonder what it means to be
  v$ C2 x' U' T: GI looked up at the star and smiled 9 e! V1 K* Q$ p% g+ p# S# D0 H! f
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
: G  G, z, X, ^- O评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 G4 B7 e7 p$ `顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
5 P3 q, n" m. Z  }6 ~& h6 X6 iA poor old Guy;
* K- z6 a* n% b+ K8 aLegs in a bonfire,: n/ X# A9 {4 N
Head in the sky, m9 ?5 y$ ~  T, c  O# X
Lonely, with the feel of betray  U# g1 ]7 r* q% n' d4 m
Heart empty and hollow$ W; M! O1 h) e* t7 w0 o2 o0 z
Alone I stand# U+ ?, q3 B" l  n3 D
I am useless to all
' g! @, k/ ?5 Y6 f0 I& \But I wish I were a dove
# ~+ w0 y2 Y! k! V; F# {  UGiving myself to the world, to the fire* R/ c" r; f2 \) l
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
: C" m/ T# t. R% E  @+ [3 p9 ^I sent prayers to my god
7 n4 P& v8 p( @8 R' b9 XThough he does not answer
% i) r/ s% L* c2 S2 K3 R8 ?He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。+ q# u0 N" B9 c, R( }; h
加油加油,经常写写!
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