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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, . c4 n( @# v% f4 Q
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
- n3 C$ ~8 f* J8 k$ ?6 eDreamers
: D+ @7 f9 E' C  J1 sSavages
$ K3 {& v7 b5 X2 r5 Y# \; F* _9 ?. gPoets
7 _# E3 u% N, \Builders of canoes,8 Z3 r" O" ]: n0 X4 D
Black smiths
4 H- [$ O& s- s; j/ iMurderers,
& c# t( Q7 {: P4 k6 h/ z+ p$ QRisk takers,5 e* i5 U1 X: k) c- w
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder * V- N, ?8 A! }. }8 ~
As I think of what could be. $ c1 L; k9 G. \6 n( f/ s- ?9 Z
The world is so big to me $ o' s' \8 A, ?2 |3 ?" r) @8 J
I wonder what it means to be
! a6 i8 L( S- LI looked up at the star and smiled
$ g. \! S. I- Y8 v& aThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 8 ~# h# F: C5 n3 C
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。: u. Z3 S& r: t* ?+ P) a( O
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。# N7 T. Y$ A( t4 z; r( n
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
' N% t* J$ i4 ]) X/ RA poor old Guy;
. X+ _8 H8 b' E  y" nLegs in a bonfire,9 K+ O& B" g, }* n& W
Head in the sky; M6 R! b& z7 ^+ {. q/ t
Lonely, with the feel of betray
) S( S6 B5 Q! T, G9 rHeart empty and hollow0 K) e2 k( ?! M  f. y9 y
Alone I stand! g& l- M$ {  s! C0 y
I am useless to all " ]! [; r/ [9 R* q, a0 Y
But I wish I were a dove : c: o5 T& q& [/ d# J5 {
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
3 y* C- {! ~" g2 j9 p. _6 eI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind: F/ L( T6 y- t
I sent prayers to my god
! W6 A" o, ~3 r  N- [& C' M( K+ R' l& @Though he does not answer; a4 N6 H/ r- `! `& T
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
7 l& E& M" I/ ?% Y加油加油,经常写写!
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