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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
2 G! _* z' J- X- l& ~! l" t" WI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( ?; F% [7 \6 W! g( K0 S
Dreamers
: d7 S8 g, e# _, }& x2 ]# l# DSavages
7 g( i5 ~! q- b4 B4 P, l5 pPoets
, c% X2 H  K  X( C1 _Builders of canoes,) z( C/ x3 n* i) X* i
Black smiths& H  a& q( M$ |& H
Murderers,& @3 O! ~1 X5 F  M% q* o5 `
Risk takers,
7 ]9 _3 M! Y* j# y* hMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder ' V- Z: |, s+ j& G; G, o3 h
As I think of what could be.
/ C8 I' z- E6 i3 \! LThe world is so big to me & G% o% S8 }$ U4 ]
I wonder what it means to be% b, L! @4 V0 A+ A
I looked up at the star and smiled
$ _0 r! }& e" {( jThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. / ~4 e! \* _2 P# `

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。8 g0 Q0 U, J) ^5 K: J+ x: h
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。$ X- I% `8 `2 u* e6 X7 g
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,0 [) o# ~2 E' X4 e/ W
A poor old Guy;' x- e8 ~, E1 I' ?; K
Legs in a bonfire,
! f, H- o& I7 W+ wHead in the sky3 k0 S! v, b- z9 k
Lonely, with the feel of betray; O4 w/ z8 ~! Y9 e/ ~4 O' ^
Heart empty and hollow' R% h) o# D; G7 d8 h8 Q
Alone I stand
! w; C, `) j# \& a, K3 @5 fI am useless to all , n; k: z9 D# t1 s
But I wish I were a dove , h" C( G8 ^! f* P+ I) `5 T
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
( ?0 a: P0 X  _$ N8 @$ vI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind& G' \1 q" a2 i5 f  D  W, Z4 w6 B8 j" m; f
I sent prayers to my god% J/ [" f0 v, a) G0 G4 s
Though he does not answer
7 S0 y! ^2 h' AHe bless me with the gift of hope   v4 k, T! J6 b: V, ]3 r5 v! f

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。4 u8 J- m6 j  S- _" m
加油加油,经常写写!
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