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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
; G/ `$ Q7 ~3 D5 |  mI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
: ]: G2 F1 w* |% B5 y: l& x( x8 yDreamers6 Z: |2 @& w& {, U& I
Savages
  G0 T$ T7 x1 l7 M0 L% l8 _) k: R7 ZPoets
8 p8 t% X/ d1 ~7 r/ y4 ]1 u4 \Builders of canoes,5 U( u% z  _/ }
Black smiths
# D, z* ?! T# a" K  aMurderers,
' R9 c/ `' v$ U" ]  l8 k* gRisk takers,' v- C& @4 B% h5 q1 ?
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder ; ]3 Q" m7 V. [. H+ M+ `
As I think of what could be. : Y8 w( Y  U$ ~# Y; _& B# e) Q( k( g
The world is so big to me # D+ u7 I( h) T# T. K1 ~
I wonder what it means to be
: S7 r$ X) o2 bI looked up at the star and smiled 4 ?3 D' [( ]: d2 p4 [5 Z& E
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
0 d  X+ L) b- R评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。" O8 }% l- A. q6 B+ z
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
! k. o9 G( H4 TA poor old Guy;
  M- i1 _  Z9 u* dLegs in a bonfire,
# w! R! e6 m* D( W) H  o! y! X* @Head in the sky; z# f9 H. W5 f- }. x, m" j- Q. G9 H
Lonely, with the feel of betray
  I" H1 x0 R! ]6 zHeart empty and hollow, c, D& e1 W4 Z2 K3 v* t
Alone I stand0 ^2 l. [2 F, ~. E
I am useless to all % R5 a* j" A5 p7 B- w5 L
But I wish I were a dove
1 \9 Z7 N6 I3 {7 jGiving myself to the world, to the fire
8 w* J1 i; t; J' [, ]/ ]I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind8 _& k2 W5 U2 u6 q( O
I sent prayers to my god
4 ?6 t9 r" O0 @8 S0 x2 rThough he does not answer
) k; ~. ^6 t# ?( `  v4 b" d5 k" mHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
0 H/ y- @) L, T- S: M6 M  \$ z, q加油加油,经常写写!
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