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jsw 发表于 2012-3-16 20:45 p1 a+ r# r; g4 h) |
Hehe. SUV has a poin there. 4 ]2 s" p. Z: i" T+ n: a3 q$ v
理论联系实际,either part is needed. : w+ } k- \6 o# r. W* c 2 N0 d7 J4 Z; F7 i1 g
I will try to upload my reading very soon...
% B8 B; P, a1 K, b + i ]) J& s( D# R% F你似乎在国内哦,你上面的英文写的有些怪。 G0 R: e5 m# y1 n9 L, x a- o你马上上音频,我听听,点评一下。我点评不了,就找翠花。
jsw 发表于 2012-3-16 23:37 , ^& H: p4 u* {( E8 K" B I
音频上传了。没稿子,就那网站上顺口读的,是第二遍。帮忙听听。* G; v# s7 J9 ]& p6 @1 f
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Hehe. SUV has a point there. 9 d6 M0 J1 C: _5 l+ Q5 c* ]either part is needed. $ U7 s& i$ \9 S. [+ K \7 q( Z$ PI will try to upload my reading very soon... ) H# A; `) c% `. o1 \$ l) G4 h$ p+ m: W: j, A( a/ s
我建议修改为:$ |+ Z- F. Q' a! L' A+ b$ g
Hehe,SUV gets/got the point.- o8 W6 L* X# j
Either part is necessary. , [! G X3 Q: k E6 }- [( e/ VI will upload my reading soon. (不需要try,very)$ N1 A( e' J! q& \4 S
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