天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
7 a* G7 p; ]5 A+ R& n% e5 OTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

6 s% Z3 f/ ^* Z1 i$ T; l/ ^鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
( x& H; V% h! `9 {. VTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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8 J' U9 [1 m0 {$ x, z/ k6 Y鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.