天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
2 m% b9 e5 q* \- ATouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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4 n# l$ N! i) g鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
. i  `0 ]5 h. N( V8 t! zSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

8 z0 w7 [' N4 G8 b4 g2 ^) j& Z+ u& o哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.