天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
, }8 |" d  h* P7 ^7 }Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

' _1 D5 Z; ?5 \" A" b, V# R/ h鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
9 L4 g& r" N( X) r) e/ m) HSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.