儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

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6 A' ]' p" R) e& _: e# h( C/ BI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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" M  i2 P) ~( a8 y, y) BYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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# \# w' q4 k& ]I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

( X% \! e9 D) J+ e& {You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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  [3 S3 u2 k8 x0 V4 L2 d8 Q% XI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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' m0 }+ O/ N' ]3 }, l8 ZI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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" B6 b' w0 ^; x9 x6 eYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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5 S/ C7 t1 r, E  R; Y# G5 eYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。