儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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3 I# G9 V' D8 nYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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155 words

老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

$ Z( ]6 G0 j/ E) [I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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7 i2 ~+ {" h- pYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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$ D/ Y7 T# X) n) q& M0 GYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。