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儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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发表于 2006-1-13 10:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:# P2 M+ ^5 T: Z) Y9 ]
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
+ b* \6 Y' M, V7 i, N& W2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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+ t$ F0 b) s& f/ m, h6 D7 O2 e+ MHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
" R  y$ X; D2 u) JI have written you this message because:
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- m# p; |) S5 P2 F: \I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.3 [; Q- y: R2 n8 d

2 h- P6 c7 T' t& q1 \. \+ w- {I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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( u6 m- V7 m, n5 Q/ B5 @  VYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.  u7 J: R. R8 `. `+ d7 x* B) R
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.7 O! f* i+ C6 y; C+ N

  g7 L) H5 L' z6 P3 Z8 e, sYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. * B! O6 s5 N( u. T# {5 t

2 P$ o& P: m4 h, C. V+ s9 NI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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发表于 2006-1-13 19:18 | 显示全部楼层
I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意,小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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/ G3 |( Y6 O: u1 c7 i1 z. CI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。( R$ A1 c% s8 ?' m, J: u

" l5 v3 R* z! l8 A  x( {5 bYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。5 J, p0 k/ q% k. P: _

/ A( q# U7 |3 E5 BI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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3 A) S4 N: D* H, `2 h+ H! x: X6 yI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。, e5 }$ n5 S6 y' N/ |
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。. s4 I+ `! z& w3 I* S

! g; [- a! {) X7 {I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。; s: w; L4 U: D* y, y

  c) Y$ Y7 x! T0 R- fThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。
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