儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

7 K, C1 \* o6 r0 E8 `. }9 G$ mI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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# b/ d* d9 N( I$ {& x7 EI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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; i9 o/ I+ H+ r! x) P; ?You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

. r. `  G, @' y$ lYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

; K) S" ?$ d# e; p5 x; mI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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2 v9 l9 Z/ t4 n( |7 sThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

9 \) t% y# N9 [) L, Q7 lYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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" Y# Z! R- {9 |' O0 WI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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& a' }6 @0 V5 C8 aI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

% `; c& q: y6 _9 lYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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: S: D$ M/ e) `+ R1 I" g# D  CYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。