儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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/ C" U# g+ h& s) M3 T( Z儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
7 v7 J: O1 U" {% y$ O2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

9 r) n# h6 n% yI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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, w  J. w# ?; C, lI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

: A3 R0 t% j! V9 _I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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) S+ S* w5 p$ M5 p: F: A) iYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

The last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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5 r/ v- U7 n8 ?. a" r: o2 PYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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6 |  X) y1 _' j- ]  DI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

  [: I2 ~0 {* _- g+ Z! l: KI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

: L% w  Q1 P5 t  b! FYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

7 f- U1 _" X* v2 s5 E& M" p0 w) t; yYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。