儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
0 d$ F" x4 u3 @" h; I; lI have written you this message because:

$ w/ }0 d3 _, _0 ?I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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9 \$ s3 c- f- f% q# gI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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2 |: u% E6 M  f0 x% h5 N7 g4 UI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

% Z' B9 U: n: mI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

% y: m" s8 U8 K2 fYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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9 d' G) B9 J8 G8 G4 aI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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8 z) H# y9 m! k% wThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。