儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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, v1 B! H" K% ~* b* I: |I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

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6 ~, u+ W1 f  C& n2 {I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

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The last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

0 S5 n9 c) F' t3 l( G& xI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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0 R/ D% M1 e' D1 M8 J; m7 ^I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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: K7 A' e( v! w  c" I2 L( UI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

# z- [2 }, m, gThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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7 @, M+ n7 }9 B  FYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。