儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
8 z, d3 @% [( x8 m$ `9 ^2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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6 X/ c$ i3 @9 `' C9 g" oHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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! A1 |+ C/ K3 W( u9 AI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

5 L/ q$ Q6 F# nI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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6 g0 e' o. F. m1 ~4 A- @You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

4 w! W8 e- ?8 m: @0 QThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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155 words

老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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, I' h* D2 t, A! ~: y' w4 T- X+ wI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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. e1 n# ^9 A2 LYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

+ G9 |, E, B* X2 _, ?I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

6 u% T5 i( v8 P% u- v5 S- \6 {# A8 pYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。