儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

: X) N3 a- ^$ S& D, [Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
8 I- d! `2 j* [# V3 W! q6 j, h4 gI have written you this message because:

3 B5 b' n: Q3 T: ?I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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4 `! d1 V. e2 ~9 c" ]I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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# Y# l7 _' q9 W& I' g! dI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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- I7 D& w6 q7 N6 b/ B+ Y6 w% }: [I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

3 A- V+ G) j. D1 g7 vI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

; T$ o8 G% G9 Z7 BThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

6 O. [/ Y4 s8 f8 M! O2 SYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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155 words

老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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* z8 ]% P, u2 ~. ?You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

# m8 r1 |* O# |9 v  i7 M: O6 |  B9 II would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

, K. p# q; q$ w5 bThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

) s; c' \2 c4 A2 y  EYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。