我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
2 L9 k) V. ?' s( G是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

$ V' K; ^! k3 CFaster, hotter and sweater,
3 I2 S5 |# J( w" ^, R' JSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

- w& B8 i: e$ X! y% iFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

7 l" q, e" V: o" }# c7 n' H  k  c8 B' \' GGood-bye, my happy spring;
, A9 J. D6 Z% \0 j2 cGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
1 I$ E( k& |6 n' k( O& m
一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
- P& R5 p% F3 H& o夏天来了