我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
& p0 `9 N' h8 D  w  f4 JSummer's Coming

: s' R3 I) t4 \+ {0 IFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
6 {# x% P* K, h4 ~8 ?" X. Z1 Q0 }: }From the colorful nature
( ]6 A  a+ H9 a* h! }To my life and dream.

1 e& z  z  I  zFollowing the summer's step,
. ]6 m; ~1 g) E4 z# I5 F% eLet myself go ---
# u0 ?7 `' e9 \, m* E* G! y5 ^Go to the wild rain
4 z5 K, W, [. }( {. ^Washing my heart and soul.

' _- X: m% `9 g* S; @2 aGood-bye, my happy spring;
, `9 r* S( i7 K; V; B  t* MGood-bye, my childish dream.
: C( e* c4 M" XI can prepare nothing;
. j; D" |! P+ VMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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0 H# _* k& ~8 g  ]$ k: H0 T: {一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

4 W  Z$ z6 T& v7 J0 w( O& Y[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了