我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
% C5 x7 k8 Q' v" z$ o3 }, U. K9 \* ~是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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1 Q! w' J7 L: j. u* fFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

) |, c, C6 ?! J; h1 t  ^, xFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
2 b( i) v# c# `& g" A$ KGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

; n: _( k* e0 Q一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
; v. l6 S, P1 b, R7 b& a( dIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
1 J% z0 m' ~+ h! S' k夏天来了