我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
1 n' {3 e/ h$ x; a- d是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
$ j0 i. q/ u4 ]% w; pFrom the colorful nature
1 Z/ i! m$ T% G- D0 X, oTo my life and dream.
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6 g  D0 d4 J( ~8 I4 m  b# x9 SFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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2 ?7 O' n) F/ u" CGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
) J. ]- u% o4 m% W5 c" U- |I can prepare nothing;
, s4 B+ s, `3 L0 G& m& X' [My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

' f. T8 q8 X- v" {! F  [一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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* K" @9 P4 q8 A6 g( s& ^4 k[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
# a9 ~# F" w/ U& {1 {- \. a夏天来了