我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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Summer's Coming

; V. y& C* J1 [+ q* \3 zFaster, hotter and sweater,
# j0 c, K; W3 |) b  pSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
; y: y- ?% T: {3 AFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
! F2 \: @  Q. v1 {4 S/ H# @Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
. V5 {# O/ \$ r+ T% A- a, B. h: ^Good-bye, my childish dream.
; ?! x4 ~9 i6 T: m9 L( M) s9 Y# @I can prepare nothing;
! L" Z' Y# G0 I; JMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
* I7 C. @% y: T- ?5 T+ {but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了