我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

3 B' s) A% S7 m( y8 p" bFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
8 U8 V+ {, J. I$ |% }From the colorful nature
  u" U6 {5 I4 M; t7 |To my life and dream.

* L  {3 w' f+ a) ~" s9 G$ eFollowing the summer's step,
2 O9 N: O; \8 e. a( HLet myself go ---
% Q* X  i* v2 P2 m2 VGo to the wild rain
2 S+ A( g: V2 s. L1 N; w. uWashing my heart and soul.
+ U' p4 H/ b9 k% o: e$ K' }  c& V
Good-bye, my happy spring;
9 \8 M# A" N/ I$ f& HGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
+ B3 x' ?+ }; ]4 ?" A) V8 ]' VMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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7 q, O" f( M6 n' S! B) H& j+ w! G一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
  a+ x4 G" m; D2 a5 k7 d- t1 t- ]) aIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
) x" i( @1 q. v6 f) W夏天来了