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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. 8 d5 c, C; C Y8 c; u( D+ G
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改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. 7 i! O8 |2 l) F" W4 h* j2 {
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. 0 m" Q+ W5 \7 p4 E% i5 b
, c6 M: y% @8 n' _ 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. P! N, s) B- i& |4 I
0 Q2 s1 b4 u8 {. o- |. J; t/ a 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 6 w7 {, I, K1 [9 s" x2 A
: n8 U Y5 r: O5 d# t( Y 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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7 f$ P; L! c, W4 p# c 6. Their brain is still very young. 4 E8 x3 U: b$ a! Y( W2 w
2 K: Z$ |' n( ? 改进: They are still immature. / H6 `2 ~& y$ ~! D
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. ! H: O) l l2 g! ^' J9 o# E) ^: M2 } [
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 3 Z; q1 K0 ~9 o. `$ i2 L) \
/ W- x2 o& t) }% B& v! _1 { 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. & V2 B! h. D0 \+ \/ V8 _1 I" A* x
9 \# M% G: s6 X* u 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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1 B& O+ |' ^2 d3 M; V' M# | 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. ! W4 e( n+ ~0 d; r6 r5 A' V9 K
1 V. m+ H9 n( x1 q: o' b E. l 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. - d* z6 x. _0 f) f1 l
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 0 p G8 a: x& d. m- f; ~
& K2 w# q) J3 d) c2 p 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ c8 t) |- p9 D3 p0 X 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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9 K( R/ h K7 \" B3 H4 b9 m 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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: q: r* b5 |; h* H 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. - B; {$ s0 _6 ^" T' q
5 d, x( }7 M4 X3 p" u+ C 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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7 u2 L \1 R# o) [2 f3 Q7 b 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. ( c& c2 \4 r# q D
6 ?, X- q/ J" M2 x0 y# t5 D 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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3 P# ~& ^2 J$ I/ n3 {4 q 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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( _# J- C, r& _0 S- F 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. $ O$ e" a. P% B0 r
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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改进: This knowledge will become part of you. - [9 i0 {/ D" O: n/ l
' g5 C2 i5 m1 X3 K7 O# g) b 19. They cannot think clearly.
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改进: They cannot think straight.
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( u9 a9 e' x, ]0 p( j& D | 20. Money can improve their living standard.
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改进: Money can improve their life.
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. ( g9 |) z! r7 Q6 a" n3 T
5 i7 ^0 u/ K$ c4 _! a 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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: h) |' T. M/ n, ~) x 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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# ]$ s* ^) _# O" X7 z; K# v 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later. + X" D8 t/ Y# G9 H, @
) \2 Q9 ^0 ]2 w8 ?& x/ M u5 P 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. , G% `8 ^* `' S% K1 p& Y
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. 5 k f$ J4 f2 G6 v
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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( l) _* }6 c6 j p( `/ A; D 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 3 T% R/ q! m; P: a3 I9 Z
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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3 O, c/ `. N% e% W ?! B/ k+ G 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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& G2 r7 ?7 o# F. m 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. o+ D+ R0 O& F4 a E. l4 f- }
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+ m( r8 V; Q6 G2 I. S 28. What's about nonsmokers?
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1 q: Q: f! X0 S: V- u& e7 Q, Q 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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. @6 Q6 m3 j. w 29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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) a" ]! L" ]9 w2 Q U7 f7 V 改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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0 `+ r8 d' u5 p7 V* S 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 2 `$ \0 K1 U! l) _# q3 K3 ~$ @. N4 `
& Y" K3 L& V# K1 M 31. I am not good at maths, but English 7 L: n$ F" ~4 P& b, b! F
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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33.It is children who clear about their interests. : X$ S8 G: e' E" W5 U- w. x( a
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 4 X! R. b+ w) _
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34. I agree the latter idea. 6 |4 }) K$ T5 ]9 U9 T g; u" T7 X
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改进: I agree with the latter idea. ) M$ Z" j* o: a! x. }0 k, o! `
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35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. # b" m- V9 `; _9 x& `8 ]( h
# ]/ x+ d( C/ t j. h/ ?6 S 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. 3 Y" u0 E {' z& M; {% \# x
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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, z) [' G Y5 D+ z: W/ @. d7 ` 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. ; H3 d2 q( i( K# g3 Y
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37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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/ U* ~/ H9 B' T' r$ w 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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" O+ p( P8 a$ B6 c* a8 f" a! m( _3 T; c 38. No one knows all the things.
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. $ t" r) r) \4 @
3 n& C: _ {" d. ?# o 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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8 n# `' F+ d2 t/ l0 t 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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) u% c$ e/ [5 ]$ ~2 i! b 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. $ y: B: E# |$ V, A D
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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& Q( H7 _5 `) `5 \, O- D6 b9 ] a& f 43. They will learn the bad habits. - b- i$ f1 O$ O/ v+ j' F4 R2 P* q
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改进: They will develop bad habits.
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44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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/ r& \. N0 A1 F( m2 w* [ 改进: In this cycle, people make progress. " K0 p; g! j# U6 z2 A
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 2 ^( G5 X" c# `% [# T
|$ T& ^$ N# O- x+ j 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. + @' ^2 ^/ L6 T4 q1 L: ^; W
+ O$ U3 J+ Z8 l. E; V! @5 ] 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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# w8 }( }; V& N% _' t0 N6 {/ p 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. ! O& _) {$ T1 E& U7 \0 ]/ j1 U
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. & x4 a& N& C3 j4 M
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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}( \! _) s# l- C+ s4 ^; q 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. 8 C w) x- g) E; o# o3 P
% m; c5 b% H/ J8 ~4 k 50. I felt alone. % e) V2 G5 z7 }+ I& x' _5 V9 U% R6 U
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