锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

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4 c4 K  S! Y  @9 I! @: y5 S% D: m; P6 j　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

5 U1 `- u- y4 f+ P/ k　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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- d, X/ n$ }% u  ]) H+ p; x+ k, p　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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  M- A! l; R& a4 G　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

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/ K6 u9 M* o* f; E8 ]/ I　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

  x8 g! H2 b$ z, h　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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, ]$ O$ L* Y  |$ K; P- U, a6 K　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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  B0 d9 }  A$ H) t, M( O　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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, e6 o  X, j- t7 t. g5 Y$ ?　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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8 b. T4 T! K2 z　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

2 s$ X% i! y; ]) Q: `　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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8 N5 I2 I" s) f% m　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

5 v$ c, D' V6 D5 o+ \) k: R　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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% [' T* @& v& f　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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8 k9 x6 N' d3 D　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

0 [5 G# J0 ~2 t) u- _% d; t　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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. F3 ?* z8 ]2 t- w, _　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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5 n, ?5 L1 U" @! }3 ]　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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$ n& o7 h  N2 d% K8 v" a　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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; t$ ?7 d0 j4 O　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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6 o2 S3 l4 f. a, b8 g　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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' b4 H. ~$ l- s3 Q　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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, v8 j- o* S5 X$ L1 e: p% J　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

5 W: R3 W9 p: H) C% {2 h+ D　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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6 H. f1 T1 }; ?5 M/ i3 Q6 g" ^8 v　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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. k, ^8 B  |2 a  W  v　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

3 Z3 o% G# Q% f5 Q1 S. W7 i　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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+ l$ ]1 L+ ^7 Z8 d; ?( P　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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4 K& @; o% O( o9 q　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

5 @/ V* v) p( l8 M8 I　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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  B# Q' b5 M8 r1 }0 v　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

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9 {! I: a+ ^0 m; Z! {- E# s9 o　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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; e% r& h  F9 J! ]0 c$ ?+ H  r　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

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' Y7 C( K3 X. R　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

$ \# H$ k7 @3 v5 H6 w　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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, \2 h, H  B3 A4 S/ U' T, `　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

0 \& r3 ?. t/ M% t8 w　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

4 ?8 \* e! L8 Q　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

$ u7 T' X5 Z. M& v+ [; _& Q, H& b　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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9 N: |2 j: E$ m, f6 D1 E% w; g　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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" B/ f8 I- c& E  [; g* l  P, @) r　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

3 n0 j  |+ c+ ]7 M6 ^1 o4 m' N6 B9 z　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

! ^5 _7 H. {1 T" x& c' A　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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4 {# {/ y: J7 N( e　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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/ t, p, K' [! ]  B$ R( D0 O0 ~, g　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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0 l# F6 o! W& f/ z8 g　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka