锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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1 {  w( L$ F$ K　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

& \, o3 S4 L- ~; I! a' k　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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% V2 Z/ |" `9 T　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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  ?& L& K5 v( \2 m+ t4 V5 r　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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  G. }6 a& s5 e" `. i  G　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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. x3 T( S/ B2 y+ \" ]  Q　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

. k7 |/ b  M; I7 @8 n) L5 {; s　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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* A$ H; E' B1 g3 P5 x# c　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

4 v* c  x" D$ _; j　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

; T8 E; C( |2 b  J# J- B  D　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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! O/ |! P8 o, q& j/ A　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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4 X2 _! j5 R' H- ~/ r# t% A2 k# e　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

" q8 m8 I; ~7 [5 M' x( ^" @0 r　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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) ]8 i2 b5 R5 S　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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8 i- V4 R% W. T: B! M4 D　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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) N& i* u0 s% R  V, H　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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  p$ c3 i9 ]4 _/ P$ s6 M5 G　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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- T. q5 `) c4 v( e0 P5 P: I　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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. W8 }; o- R  `　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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9 ]6 `) u4 ?& _3 W5 G3 W  W　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

6 k: k) W! i2 d' x/ A7 ^$ L　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

5 h1 c" G# T0 y; i　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

, S2 s" t1 [  S. c$ }9 B7 y　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

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0 {2 @% {/ k9 ?4 T6 r　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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( R; s0 T2 ?, N) g- W# R　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

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; X+ I( Z& h2 @& O　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

* F$ b- U! E( L　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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5 v& v/ R; P/ ?" k* `# H* b5 c　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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- n: H2 N& X* k, N% I　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

( k% l; u6 w$ I　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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+ U2 L1 F! X# r　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

: W+ K: ^' v$ O4 r　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

1 A, C0 m: R. M. ^　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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# O! u$ q/ a  t# ]　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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$ N4 ^1 c/ z' U! }　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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  F' c, t& j2 q) u2 g; r: ^　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

9 v/ q+ v- Y( M6 T( N　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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0 H1 \9 x/ P! o" Q7 I　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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. e( _& X$ i9 e& B+ E　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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9 q& x% G- m1 o; [# q5 v) K0 \' O　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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2 d) O% r" {/ X( _　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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0 W4 w- R% A# v' p; P　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

* T8 E; e3 \0 Q! a4 ^) d& N　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

/ s+ K7 F, w6 p( r6 f　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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1 u0 X5 d5 H# ~0 U3 N, N6 v　　50. I felt alone.
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" i! O# {/ q& a6 `　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka