锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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" I% i) U: r& R/ t' A0 G　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

" r  k% N3 q3 ]7 L3 v( T4 G　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

; Q0 B' h/ `; {; L) k0 V　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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8 @) y+ D% a5 a3 B# j　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

! {* z9 L- }9 Q: r　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

/ e$ m& K) \! ^  T5 d+ e8 l6 m　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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  k- @2 d2 h9 d' v　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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; O1 E. y% n$ m　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

2 C4 w% O: }# E* z. ]' a　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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* Q* n' K; J# Q2 K# c) T+ ^2 k　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

) ^& B: Y4 e% T- s7 V. ~% a, j　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

/ G' b2 [4 {9 K* y  {5 q　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

! \- k7 J7 d& H# U( F2 X0 i　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

* M9 s/ P7 f- a& G' m" y) p, g0 Q　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

) O7 ]& V4 A" }- [1 G" Z　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

* m; B5 X0 L) i$ l$ [4 l　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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% d8 E5 w9 o% T4 `; n) S1 f7 j　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

% d0 ?" _; T; K  {5 K9 A　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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2 ^- i5 ?& O" x* E4 D) e　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

/ X& v& b5 M6 G& Y4 s/ y　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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* G$ u! q6 y. e' J; \! X; `# [　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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' G' `* N( K$ x8 U# y5 J+ I: j　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

4 V% Q4 s" x; j: u　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

: i/ O- Q0 V2 k$ {  K' t　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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& u8 H' k, E% C　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

' Z! \5 V' z- N1 T　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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, i2 J. j: e* Q0 h9 a  W　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

# c6 Z/ x; f+ q　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

! W) w0 G* y+ b# ?  W- W1 i: G2 B　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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: Z% a% I5 ^. d( h7 u4 ^+ k5 l　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

) e; S5 o5 _! `' I( E" D2 B5 o　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

( r) U& g/ p. a1 d4 T( Q1 `　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.

3 `1 \# D  c2 y$ d5 A　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

5 c) `6 A: S5 G9 l- o　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

+ x7 S3 s5 e# W　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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6 y& s  k" B( A+ w　　38. No one knows all the things.
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5 t% y1 N# U" e6 R6 x* R/ f　　改进: No one knows everything.

; `3 z  ~% A6 ]9 t! y　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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# j  S& t* W. H6 u) a2 T' U6 E2 i$ J　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

* p9 c7 u5 [- o# R' @4 C9 a　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

2 K6 X6 v. @6 l/ F7 M# O　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

9 j$ k( Y$ N  W& V　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

+ |  G% U+ q* V3 {% |7 U$ b" f4 J* ?　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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9 [% n# c7 `8 ^( p- q- \　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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8 k6 D1 C3 r& I: ]6 Q　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

9 u! p/ H  A" @　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

8 @, t$ A0 o3 a$ J　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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0 u* J8 [% }$ G& p　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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  s( m5 s! h5 z1 c( H$ \5 @　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

3 }: Y9 V, h; k& S! X　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

# r6 _$ \1 u8 E  w' _　　50. I felt alone.

4 N0 W. N7 \6 T+ `1 m9 l0 o+ S　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka