锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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9 K, |; z0 r0 I0 Y　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

3 C) n7 ?' S- Y: t6 y9 n　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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9 Z$ ^4 Q/ ]2 x1 H　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

8 b2 t) k( K2 g  ~  J　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

& _* M0 c' m, A　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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4 u) t5 |/ I. `: q' E　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

& i: w6 C: ^- r3 e3 r　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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9 H- H2 F8 {& l6 R* P7 Z　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

- M( U( p6 \7 [　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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$ @. m/ L' K1 u' N5 X. o+ B　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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, N2 b  C6 f" j" I6 H- m1 J　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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; z8 c3 d( U- G　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

  y1 E% j( l1 d6 R　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

. r" K% [( x8 d  _1 W6 J　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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$ k2 u- k/ K* @" @9 n0 M9 \　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

3 W% ]/ v; \8 o: [# X) `( D% ^9 {　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

  X( G; k5 z8 c1 {3 ]3 u, z+ w　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

4 l1 T. S" Y/ B; t) b* x　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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& F. X) r, m4 a- Z- N; L( V　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

5 _( ~, N3 G3 W+ n& c5 ~, J　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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( \9 N  s6 j) ^( Q5 V! W　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

9 S' S" c" \6 ~+ N, u! }　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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* W6 k/ B& k5 V0 h7 K$ D　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

$ U: v" X2 u5 H# Z　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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% z& w: \& `: r8 Y" O4 i& [　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

; `1 c5 M& O3 C8 D9 {　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

9 P' z4 m9 z9 p) w　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

. R" N9 u( N6 t　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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  |4 o: E7 x1 I* ]! n0 w# L+ s- K　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

9 ~5 u5 D. U1 Z6 \9 @/ y　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

9 R  ^- @  n, l0 P* Y# I　　改进: No one knows everything.
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4 Y" x# ]7 K6 u& ?/ m1 ]+ r　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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' ^7 }' U& j9 m9 T! t　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

/ @2 g, Y- E4 ]9 o& q& F$ V7 h1 |& K　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

4 T$ l. s( r2 R8 v　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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; h1 _0 A: b* c* E  Q5 I　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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' A7 Y  i. O9 y. p( T/ R+ o　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

( W3 D! [7 S5 s) U- c　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

( i6 d% j0 r: f% V( @　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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. S0 U: N3 w# y" k( X- }　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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/ c/ }1 X$ I+ z5 m7 e2 }　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

, A. i# F  }- A6 w" b$ v& @+ y　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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3 P2 T4 i2 d( H9 K+ j7 _, m　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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. }9 ?* ~5 O$ o: \. X; Z! d1 B　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

: v, I6 X; z  U# c! {　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

& H0 \0 u* o+ Y0 U- s　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka