锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

1 h$ b1 A, q) F) T7 Z  S8 m　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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+ L+ ]2 f3 v/ W9 r　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

* }7 k, b5 k) i　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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1 O( y% p* x3 ^1 w; [: w5 f! @! M　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

+ P  ~, `: W" B# L　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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% g# a& ^5 @5 @, {5 r　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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8 D7 {4 e( X$ J; I4 f9 Q　　改进: They are still immature.

( g1 P% c9 U' B) \# x' C　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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  a# B  g1 n' A: {& J* d: c　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

1 M# L) c5 u4 r0 }) v　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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' a: _# k2 v8 {6 {/ f　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

  I5 B6 i- {+ C- Z4 p　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

$ {# G4 _: A7 R( j( p　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

8 i& B% n6 ~: @  R　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

1 f  G. N1 b: x  j5 J  ~　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

% a$ c3 W0 D6 E( l　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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& v8 {& d- x* |9 |　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

3 t% E% |1 U5 _  J) L- I　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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6 N7 u$ `6 c* V: [) t8 W& k　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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' z/ Z7 F5 l9 y. K　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

+ W0 J1 l$ M1 K8 D5 ]2 y; ^　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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) \2 E' A7 Q6 |" r3 n* Z0 M, P/ Z( l　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

' _# T. V2 ^8 r5 |  |　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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& N! g+ {1 `% ~% U( Z2 t0 m1 y　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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) R2 Y& K" B6 Y& {0 v　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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, Z% z7 V8 u* U, L1 S2 v　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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1 V: u- R, A5 X9 d( U; T　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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% X) M  E7 a* X# [9 p* U* M4 |, N　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

% K6 f$ k  Y; y( I7 m2 f4 x　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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0 Q5 }9 b2 x/ i) T　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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. v" G! {; i5 v" {: P　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

" k9 J5 }2 j" J3 j2 N　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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0 C1 Z! M* @) C  N　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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, O! R% |, E. R7 |6 }　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

' W0 g4 r- {# |0 ~8 x. E1 h2 _　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

: e2 Y1 s1 @$ |+ T6 x0 v1 O　　34. I agree the latter idea.

) `& U1 [, t* ^　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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0 b4 I7 d4 _+ C% G2 ~4 w　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

4 X. u6 `) e  q1 M　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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! s, X1 j3 J+ g( M5 @　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

& v! ]  k! Q8 M  U: S( J% W  a　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

, ~' n7 |/ l5 C, T2 F: d　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  e' R- v+ u( N* {　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

% h& c; D% e3 R　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  C  }: G/ V* S7 N2 e) X( N　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

& X# s; \$ V  n  N( d　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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' s# g% N5 ^% j) I　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

# h5 X% v: e( A) s- W　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

" |7 X( K& @# m* a* H　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

9 @3 f( H4 I7 t7 A, E+ E　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

1 {" R$ ?' T! D% Z, u　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka