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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. + Y0 K1 b! s- |5 x: i
6 ^1 m1 b# w7 J9 o2 u4 p/ p 2. For example, you work in a big factory. : [$ p* @* S" y
* ?, e, [3 n9 X6 {% @ 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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: {4 y: _4 g- ~, _( ]! v6 k 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. $ f4 j8 C" c9 U+ `8 q
( q+ h8 S1 |7 p& A 改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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2 V& g$ k8 l1 o' N. s 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. & g( ^: L& h% E
/ Z( F1 ], O# x4 S0 o' U! i& k- w# u( d6 r 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. , W, |6 x% z4 E) `8 B2 l
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. " d" f9 E# h8 l% z
5 D- w* V: m+ D 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. + E+ @0 b. S3 X; B9 \
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6. Their brain is still very young.
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改进: They are still immature. * U$ O( d9 f; C
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. ( g2 e& P9 }" V+ r' I
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 2 u" b {& T; K) {1 ]8 f
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. $ y: d% Q- B5 X5 E3 p( n) H$ m
' Q: W0 f8 s' q* {3 n7 C 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. Y: U0 t, T/ l/ |$ u
5 C% ]/ S! w# b 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. + T j5 b o6 ~+ A$ _- ~8 ?) ?
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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$ w1 G# B5 N- t9 j% c2 r 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. , _1 ^5 ?" y* \- G, e8 U8 M
8 v2 C2 f8 E! g9 V$ E 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. 8 T( L: I; ~0 y# t0 G5 x
0 @2 J' X( s7 U! W7 ^* K1 J* T 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 5 K& t# {% }* {; f6 \) x: P, S1 k
2 b) E5 q: k5 z 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. . V4 f! b3 J0 }; L; x/ V
3 C" J& B3 t( b1 |. e' e 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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( E2 F7 U8 F9 ? 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. . C' C3 B# m& T/ O3 k' L4 ~
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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$ m0 ]# j) A" B' d 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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% a+ ]: Q1 }9 W$ G* ^, ^0 s 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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! W1 L* n: j4 Z5 [ 16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. " X) K9 y7 @& f: l+ j
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. / o; ~7 s- \9 y) T" B
7 ^, Z+ X3 r" K' y8 C( N 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. & G" B% t6 Z* Z! N: G
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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' E# j% n/ J: d' y6 ^ 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 4 d, Q; p% y7 @* }# s. T
5 u+ O1 e8 s- o% b( C4 @8 N* Z 19. They cannot think clearly. 9 m5 _' Q2 r7 Q( I( M
1 S/ W& N+ W T0 [* s" | 改进: They cannot think straight. # ]' j) W- H$ a
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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1 n: @; c3 J$ C5 v4 q/ e* [: g1 G 改进: Money can improve their life. & c0 q/ y" u' K" N
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 1 }/ L- q9 ~+ t
% t" N1 T( t4 N, s 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. . S3 Q: k( r; ]- W% ?% t
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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) j; ^0 ~- @6 u" Y9 P 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. 3 j/ }8 o9 g# N2 ]* y
' K* V1 J5 b5 ^2 b( E' y 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 1 o7 p, y/ F/ X
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. ; x/ o+ u7 E' I7 C
$ y$ N$ G; s \0 j: Y3 K. n 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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+ D- i |7 l `1 B/ ~2 K8 x6 y 28. What's about nonsmokers?
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- p& P0 J1 ~6 n% E% n 改进: What about nonsmokers? 9 ~5 d. ?* d# [8 v" r1 u
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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K9 M9 |, t- D4 T0 ] 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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6 B, p, D$ D! L& u% n 改进: Everyone has friends in his life. ; t( W2 I" X, D1 P0 W0 o, |
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31. I am not good at maths, but English 8 g- c+ S$ o% t* g
: X( v4 F" a/ q& `5 y3 j 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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% z# z: q* |" ?% D 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? 0 L. N/ w9 D- G( J, i4 Y- |* W1 U
* z! X2 v/ Y0 d! o6 | 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? " V, k3 i& f% z) r8 E' x
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33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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34. I agree the latter idea. + b8 s4 o+ ^3 p% B0 `
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改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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; n9 H6 ?, w' x! L- Z- k* \ 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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" }- g5 q- \8 j5 }2 o& Y 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. # E5 y& x i% T- u7 B3 ]
' P' o( q% o n% B$ j, O5 ~ 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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; _7 c2 l5 c2 v9 n/ ? 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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9 I; F1 w: X4 I8 p3 m& L( b 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 7 J. u& N0 x' \) [/ Y" d, p
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38. No one knows all the things.
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2 F" n: j7 W. s2 E: R3 J 改进: No one knows everything.
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, Z' J2 D, m, Y8 i9 s H( q 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. 4 \3 Y& G5 t9 G! c R, `% Z
/ m _, h' H% } n) |1 h+ ] 改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 1 Y) Z) l, W3 r, x' K
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages * `! } u% o4 Z$ G; |9 ` s2 h
/ n6 N# {& b0 u0 {8 A. z 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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' V7 C: G, C: z3 E& _ F8 _: y% I 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply ! z3 f# F9 p2 i' f
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. ! h- L9 U* k; l2 j
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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+ x) Z0 }5 W: f$ }- Y' _% L' g2 u8 ~ 43. They will learn the bad habits.
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3 J8 f/ G3 E+ b+ e2 v: W 改进: They will develop bad habits.
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44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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( a' w8 m1 A. `, g' Q9 ]6 M 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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6 J' Q. L6 P; j% J: j 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. ( X6 e4 p" L4 {4 i8 O; `( V
! h% \( E; S/ M/ s 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 6 ?; L, l$ {' o2 u
- i! J p- x9 I% J0 l5 i9 ^ 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. + u. I) x+ T+ o: O4 f% f% y
% C1 W+ V! \0 R9 ?$ c 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. . r9 b' ^- E& u7 B6 p3 x
5 _- u$ \: I+ K8 A, z 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. # b3 y. f/ u6 `+ y/ c3 Z5 [; O
# a, J$ C. T% o5 d 改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. ! J1 ]1 R. l3 {7 i1 }& z
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. ' t* B/ X7 E% H7 S0 n/ h
& {# _5 A1 c/ d$ y- J/ v& h 50. I felt alone.
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