I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
6 q9 o2 c8 u( A4 p3 N白云过山峰也可传情
莫说水中多变幻
- [  \% s: E4 P  s) I* F# o水也清水也静
0 a7 F" ^/ o, n% n! C6 [/ D" \* ^柔情似水爱共永
# f4 E7 k, H* w未怕罡风吹散了热爱
. J5 ]' t, _4 A7 B$ W万水千山总是情
聚散也有天注定
) I9 l& E: u( u) y不怨天不怨命
3 X$ N! H9 A) w但求有山水共作证
3 f( x- w- z) A# p7 C; I* XThere is love everywhere
Option1
Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
( w3 {: b0 D! S% U1 o1 jThe wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
! L2 _+ L( M' |6 DMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
' h" I$ [4 F* D0 TOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
, e: T0 G! b9 i3 hIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
We do not worry about too much future.
Let’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
* C! ?4 x. U$ W% _难免曾经跌倒和等候
2 D& b7 ]4 |8 c, F* \$ R% B  d7 G要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
) k5 n& I# t1 X6 s愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
, {  d' I' L. {+ c每一份希望在你手中
阳光总在风雨后
. e9 ~% H* E2 [+ y! q  z请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
, E2 Y2 V" [% R& a$ s我一直会在你的左右
There is always sunshine after raining
% I& P6 C$ `. sThere are happiness and sadness in life.
, ]1 K9 |9 B( H: S) hI will share with you everything.
2 f6 U- `8 b* eIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
( D4 }. Y& e2 XWe get together and bravely face them.
# W9 I/ `& \' VEveryone does not want to have a common life,
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
8 v% {  }3 y8 `! w4 O) ^I am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
+ x  ^2 g) I  IThere is always sunshine after raining.
, _" g- A$ h2 T" F  ~There is sun above the black cloud.
$ I  g1 N& k; k8 N# @Please cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
. ^* z2 F, N# t1 t; QWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱

轻轻地捧着你的脸
- j3 U0 W% e/ F& _为你把眼泪擦干
# K. \0 ?# h, m; E0 J7 U& A, E$ r这颗心永远属于你
告诉我你不再孤单
0 ^6 x' Q* o% U! N# U. ^$ Z( {深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
紧紧地握着你的手
/ n  W/ ^9 r+ o$ {* ?0 ]! ]' z! j6 R这温暖依旧未改变
/ G7 t* a9 I2 g我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
无论在眼前在天边
真心地为你祝愿
6 B2 R( }: t5 K8 r" L8 }祝愿你事事平安

Let the world full of love
6 h1 y+ _7 q3 H4 TGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
( V, {$ A+ u0 c3 X3 i: T9 O$ JStaring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
% f4 V5 s& V1 M, k- ^# P* qWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
We have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
' }; i; R, T, {! }1 _5 S  qWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
I sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
" G1 o" E" T- T* k- G轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
. o4 n9 ?+ V0 u: c3 O( K* }6 @是否依然孤独的转个不停
春风不解风情
# p8 q# y$ a6 F吹动少年的心
6 _. U. v8 }3 e( X3 Z2 L让昨日脸上的泪痕
随记忆风干了
  j$ N- i, k& i! l( r/ q抬头寻找天空的翅膀
# A, J9 F; Y% M7 m* L. @. ?; `候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
无情的战火依然存在的消息
玉山白雪飘零
! V- C5 f" _$ b& U燃烧少年的心
. i/ _; Z. a2 i9 |& B+ ~& y使真情溶化成音符
倾诉遥远的祝福
+ g8 t$ |8 L7 C" ?7 k唱出你的热情
) R: T! a* J: w# _. e; K1 t  C伸出你的双手
0 c+ U6 V% F- U2 L# T$ ?- H让我拥抱着你的梦
( [4 l$ [; N9 G  r让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
6 ~# Z; j* {! @- {$ X2 m9 }3 x充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
9 |7 E/ b4 X3 D, l" M$ _谁能不顾自己的家园
抛开记忆中的童年
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
4 r# ]! v+ b- y  A% V: U1 S: T0 i带走我们的笑容
青春不解红尘
. @' ?" n5 v: |1 k/ @( o3 C胭脂沾染了灰
让久违不见的泪水
滋润了你的面容
( |) J4 _( C8 C& m6 H+ \唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
. E* Q* L$ a) ?4 Z2 d/ M充满着青春的骄傲
1 l) I; q  F+ \$ U" e7 o+ J3 {; Z为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
. J8 J" |8 z, a0 Z+ W; b让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
+ ?7 d4 u3 l! R8 ?! {3 Q唱出你的热情
9 R& H7 e7 ?: g. y7 c6 t/ B伸出你双手
3 v; |& V: E- r* o6 K$ z. q5 K让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
& G  N& K4 x9 p3 f; v) g让我们的笑容
% _: D, s: `% k充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
! t( X8 K) ^' A: L$ l& E, ~Future will be better
/ K4 k+ ~$ ^* O' EI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
3 P( ?! |: I1 A- f7 @  Y* ]8 P2 AI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
* {( u, ?* x0 V% n+ W# L3 UI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
, ]6 I6 ]# [4 v& H' z% N, z5 a% y! K8 fIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
) Y/ K  ]1 J. D9 u& p5 Q! h" QI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
0 x! Y/ V) w- [Let’s sing with burning passions.
0 ~; e' C" |1 P- U4 kLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
8 x+ ~+ E& `1 {& ]$ I6 y) OLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
5 {7 h5 m: L4 OEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
. b3 M; n2 W7 p+ h1 z8 f; x6 fNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
7 {! ?& w9 F+ g) I# B% P/ v. i  JWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
6 U  `1 Y3 g/ |6 }Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
4 i1 h# y  K" k6 ^Let’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
0 u3 G5 V, [0 |/ eI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
, b9 [5 g6 R- |+ Z. K# CAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
8 q- p* m" A" h9 HEverything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
( Q6 R! t$ g  MLet’s sing with burning passions.       
  K' R" M7 p1 ~8 ]* ^Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
" @2 _% Z& ^- |1 `5 PLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
$ Z" e( ]4 d; lLet’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.