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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,( z( @% ^& G+ D5 z* v' Z
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
c8 I6 e8 h# }' i零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
/ \& t. P& T; ~% Q/ y% t0 W现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.6 c$ b6 a8 R/ l' F/ i- s
梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.% U4 D$ `# T( ^ p6 j" B
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.% ~6 d- ?% h! E9 B0 J
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.9 @+ Z% g' a4 j) ?
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
4 ?( {' i$ b# o6 F- g( k, h" @! o就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
6 c3 b8 D; I' x; g. A% ^) u- \我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
7 U/ K$ ^: t( y; Z那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
' S8 W( S' x/ \1 L+ [世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.6 h4 W8 u2 t" M; W; f5 o
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.6 X2 F, A) B q: V# o" a m
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
" m, }8 z' D$ ~# Q9 l最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
2 Q: w( e1 y6 d% A( w. g# d' m寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
; ?$ j3 X( w, G1 m- _5 I3 Y8 U醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
. R7 z+ [2 a9 o1 Y, d5 R, T迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
' C3 {2 ?. F( e最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
# {! w) m) [# L. z+ S多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
- G/ X# S' |) bWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….) |$ t+ P; H2 `. n' Y
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
* c V4 a& Z* x2 T+ `2 h# ?. U0 h不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
( h0 J0 k9 q1 z' ^* P多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
( N$ B. g7 }6 N) S, } Y为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?) K% H- S) z# Q3 W
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
$ W; m& s' _% z3 D# e永难平息的泪8 F0 W. [9 e8 i' ?# e! F, J
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
, p: ?' i6 K. T2 w6 k& }. ?~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.: j- b8 W: T4 |7 }- c9 p- ?. `
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
, M& F! M" ~# x+ {& t2 `% ~9 M让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,; c5 K# s0 x$ _" {7 Y' z9 K+ B# L
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
! k6 y+ K5 o. x- c* ~8 p一抹微笑;
5 W! A/ J7 O }, W+ X$ p M一个手势;( s4 E3 {0 H5 j7 z( |; d, N( U
一片话语,$ J+ s- I# [/ ~) X
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、- o$ ?, F0 N( U2 ~4 d; b
明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner! {4 x* o# a. R1 }+ c
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.$ q- `5 u. x: [
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
" d# X0 h5 T7 J" S+ a& i也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
5 s' @& e8 h U& [起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,) E" A9 T; T# C0 ] }2 [* {
我并不以为然。; S( @9 _3 w, m) R" A$ j
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 1 H: X. e/ G+ m6 d$ `! U J/ m$ s
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
! i4 ?( }/ y% _被一种情绪所左右,; W1 [, d' T6 s6 }1 u
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .$ n0 b F' z7 w: A. |: Y8 i/ L
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you, s5 g3 Q2 m9 Z+ |+ ?& f8 k0 k
也不问我是否喜欢你,. x2 l. H" V6 \# Q
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.5 j! z1 N# p, s- b2 s! s, v: b
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you/ l6 \* H/ U, X. z# P- a" S; c& t2 ~
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
3 B( J) m M o- q心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil5 U2 ` w6 N3 U3 g
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere # v+ }* Q% u) N& `
你的身影已化成一种氛围,
9 M' v S; J3 K: @ _) A# W记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
8 N( M# ?8 J1 J- D# x你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
1 Z5 [4 y2 B$ w" y随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
6 d% P9 K! K2 |4 k9 G哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
( c+ P* y# F9 O4 O* k7 w一种声音,and your voice+ q1 q. C+ d4 D
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.2 o1 D! ]! r# Q8 [0 j, _# C
掺杂著幸福的感觉。* W& D$ S& Z# J% S
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
4 R3 T# E" Q0 C7 q0 Z象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
5 i+ x: Z# k5 z! V& S倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
4 l0 T. }( \& I5 a9 z纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。+ }/ B; y+ g: U" r! r
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss( b% S" c, i. p+ y9 n+ x: l. L$ ]5 b
有一个能够让思念的人,% E' h6 B# @, J6 N% D8 Z) g) t; f
其实也是一种幸福。
1 W1 ~* p+ t U" o4 d尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. , h! v7 l' a' ^) F" h
柔柔的海风,
5 j4 m9 k2 U/ d! ?( E: p' P3 b甜甜的夏天。. h/ m1 ^1 Y F8 d8 l& c
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy 7 a! f- z0 Z3 ]1 s+ t
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
9 q' c! I4 p- s! d$ S仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
: O0 |, X* A; P% u$ s' f& o# e; z想和你有共同的情结,& i3 k$ p; m. Z c8 F& t
共同的心愿。- L! t& ]) @6 t5 Y$ {$ T$ V
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X* I, x+ v0 H' o2 R好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you, n) E: B: ]4 }" v
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
5 m: O, z7 {6 J: l或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film . O) C1 V/ v/ Y. ]' w
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
/ _: R, U& w# B! ]9 f: ?4 n『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
# x/ z, o8 ?2 j" f% {/ `我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
7 A i# [% ]+ i; @ j% _浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”4 d* I# U- E* q6 B: n
或是轻轻的一吻,- b8 ?, j. o0 \' z$ A Z- ]
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
1 }& i" {& G0 T: Q; N就足够了. That is enough.) y+ \+ m( E6 e4 R* [7 [- z$ l9 N8 {
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! % N: X1 V6 O) \; i
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
0 J, z' e; b* L) m: f7 R ^. n2 U: Q& ]3 {萌出了芽,
; m7 [0 o; ^0 S# H( b, ^一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
+ ?9 W8 [, P4 }' d0 ~浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
7 }. J* Z- U, {1 s8 Y如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand
; M" ~& L& [6 R3 E0 X% H) E7 l能够牵著你的手,
1 T/ O5 `& S. ^; g3 o3 G& K: v, b那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
! h( Y* j4 u& {; V6 S, r让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 5 R% b) C6 _' q8 D' \( M; \$ N/ Q
慢慢地细读,9 `, V0 f+ f9 t1 h5 b6 s# @
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. % e8 u6 Q# D5 Y) ]0 d- @% s
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
9 J) z, r4 c, H4 I3 ~: |我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor 0 A" {( ? Q6 j' N9 z8 [7 P
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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