TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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( j9 `" l5 D: p" V  E2 W7 {(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
' b6 o7 @0 G% EIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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- S& ~1 q  i/ P  H) r+ A2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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( Z, J3 X1 y) n* l: d7 K# dTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
% A* S. s. A+ y" J/ eFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
6 B$ L0 U; b6 H- Lon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
- Z! ~" }, ], i/ F0 @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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(二)单一观点式
5 q9 L. E2 |0 b1 `1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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9 T- m1 [" W% E1 I( [6 z/ J首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
& m+ b3 f. n+ hThere is no denying that…
+ T- t5 X4 {( V3 M; MAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ G+ F- |5 m4 e* i0 e4 iFinally,…
- B3 e" I% n7 B( A9 JBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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5 S; u, l, ^& E8 K% V２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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3 b) }# \( P$ f% B/ G! r4 ^(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
9 A2 {$ D+ g' u' y' g1 q; ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ a! Y. M. o3 f  D6 l+ ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
' r% J* H' O. s+ V( }3 Z6 l, }1 ?A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
& ^* C& Y$ C& h+ JWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
) j+ v1 Y2 `8 n" j, \/ l0 N/ ]C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



9 e/ W- {4 h' V# t+ w陈述这个事实
9 F  v1 j/ b. X9 I" uAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
8 F8 e' x7 T5 n  r1 jXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* K' r" n( `; W4 T  E  d$ g! pTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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' I, x! d' u& b$ n0 j. ]2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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( R; e; L0 c# J$ g背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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! k0 J& a3 @7 C( nOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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. |. @9 x0 F5 B/ d; b/ Sa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore



In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]