TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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1 i4 [" r1 `; y  Q! r(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
( A. w4 f# k  _/ W# P' b7 s+ _The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
8 W: G4 ~' j$ lFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
5 {- S5 S& D6 K: xFor A, A 的一个优势
4 l+ `4 y7 Z5 J; D& P; t: f: HWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
0 E5 o' h' \- J; x5 c8 KFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- V% I( `" m$ V& Von the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
, |& Z5 ]8 f9 G6 l' d- [. P7 }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
+ @0 ?% }/ ]6 D8 K) A1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
& o5 f% P) R; T& L" hThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
( C7 |: m6 M* h& N3 y2 HFinally,…
& A$ l( n' r  XBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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9 C8 y) b7 h7 e２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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; H) r+ Z7 o; I6 v3 U* U# J(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
# u  i: x2 h; Q" ]' hWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
% v+ n3 ?# V; Y4 O' [% M& }A is superior in another way, this is…
) ^1 x( Q6 ?0 B- l* M8 s! ^It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



2 p3 d  ^; f9 O; O' V8 k8 WThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
7 g+ f8 M( P. O8 ^! |9 N(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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& p3 l8 R; d" M, N- a1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
3 a: `, i$ O  L: W  b9 m. `3 [' e8 DAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
/ o) l; `6 k) E/ lOne of the primary causes is that…
' \6 f8 k; M1 g! ^XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
9 ^. e0 a3 P* N8 [+ HTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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; z3 ~- k7 p, k& }3 Q" i+ \2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
4 ?6 F$ g( ]! }1 `There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
; _% M3 [" D  F  j9 |4 s- P/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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& ^5 v6 f1 ?& o; E3 q再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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