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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
! m8 J) S; `- ~; q& u2 k# v(一) 对立观点式 ; R4 i  G2 }2 |3 V9 K7 l
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. $ {% @; ~+ S6 D5 B' K" d3 E
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… , _' t9 e" _7 }
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 9 t1 F* s) Q* c2 K
A is superior in another way, this is… 1 _& K) y9 J9 f/ b; v  K# G
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ' a% p9 J$ N+ e
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... , w3 h' @! d5 O" q+ T7 ~' Q6 U3 N
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) ) u' ]4 r$ v, R& j/ X5 b

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. $ x- `$ h! F) t5 W8 n: W) }2 T1 d
For A, A 的一个优势 ) V9 G$ k* P5 M6 T
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
$ [0 o7 H4 i! M/ O. s8 L) n( CFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...   d( t3 e; a5 p5 O6 a5 D
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 3 ]' V( ~  ^" P/ i) p4 s
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
, O  X2 F0 T! c: Y9 I- O/ E% pFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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' K5 I: ~# q6 i7 C( u1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) ) V/ ^( u' Y8 o, T1 }6 y
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. $ p# j  ^: C% @# N
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
  f* C2 l; {! J5 i3 `+ xThere is no denying that…
& \( R( \: P7 ZAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
: M" c' b- D) e+ k7 N: WFinally,… 2 |9 K$ z* x0 w: Q; a3 {
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 2 K- J* ?; g! f, V) W' p. ~
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6 s# _8 i4 q0 h5 ?/ G2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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( I# b6 r6 _; i(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. , I; v) V4 r0 c$ ?
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… & E$ h9 B" A; Y7 z, {5 A) h
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ) V6 ]2 G0 h* ?
A is superior in another way, this is…
) h6 F% T! v' ~' L3 g: B& ]It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* f: |1 T; |- w5 q: k9 _: ~4 uFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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# I( a/ d- z% y9 d( F(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 4 z! L3 Y/ X2 A; J4 S

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 2 a/ \0 `0 n0 S2 R1 ?0 M, i* x
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. $ Q2 j& {2 B* G
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
8 B! U. a# G1 O: FWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 9 P+ h) w, |7 `7 r
C is superior in another way, this is…
- n' C$ u! w# {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C , F) n5 h" `, a0 D( D" L6 F3 J
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. ; K! W5 w; ~" p7 f5 g# s9 z
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 1 D* F6 U- L1 D( N. g  w* B3 M* z( l/ ?
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
5 R3 G* I/ T$ eOne of the primary causes is that… : G! _+ R5 w  e8 Z% Z! l
XXX also results from… 0 \1 q# w% q; r5 D3 W  X
… is responsible for xxx, as well. , r; C& q: H! t, I
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 6 `7 v. }- R6 o9 P% ]' |/ O  r. Z
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 4 I1 I6 R1 x6 V; f. G" ~

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8 ?; q) Y6 ^" U- M6 s3 E- c% OOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… & h" t6 E$ S8 y/ f3 C( i3 ?+ y
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
, |; g9 ?" u6 ^) x- x- s/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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7 e: |- y2 y2 _, J( v' X) kIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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; m' S+ ^: u' w& ~& k再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.1 g  b* i8 S  v. p' R
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