TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1 o; c8 c& k& V: P" ?) {1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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/ i( c/ A/ g0 A; [(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
# s7 W( _  x% O; d+ UA is superior in another way, this is…
9 c0 b7 w" k" |& }5 S# C$ MIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
& _! N7 F# I& q& I: C$ c- qFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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. C  U5 C$ j7 c8 f, _* |# G2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
6 ]! y) W4 R- s8 u3 [! ^) PFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
, l6 f* U! z/ P) T6 gon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
' t+ H- n% f# B- amoreover, B的优点2,for example…
) M3 i7 T8 j& NFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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3 ^$ j, w. ~, v3 ]% f& K1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
. x) d5 y* V/ W  k, V# ]5 Y3 y/ oAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ \3 y' K4 d# f" l  |! LFinally,…
* M; i$ V8 k- r2 y) }Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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9 J9 A+ V' L) ?2 g, x２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 G7 O. c2 P6 d  dA is superior in another way, this is…
- z2 \( R( C: G( \# ]/ FIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ E5 a: {! [1 u' L( {When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
. I- k5 d; r, S: ]2 M# c9 i% RThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
+ q4 r0 K" {) v+ f1 vWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
) ?  N; c1 t6 H. {6 uC is superior in another way, this is…
; }1 W% I6 Z5 VFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
+ i( O& u+ A0 cFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
. A  M4 P- l& w; _- {1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
6 U1 f9 m3 A$ M) _8 b. p0 p, BAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
* [5 M  v8 s# t& uXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
: Z9 k, ^+ z9 H$ l8 y9 a0 _7 u/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- w$ w: [* t! [/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

8 V6 ?  b/ x! l3 u6 U/ X" L9 i再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]