TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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3 ~# j* O0 n* A  h(一) 对立观点式
2 N2 r# `. @6 _2 l& A. I1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
* D+ W- E& d# f6 A3 {/ xThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
# O6 A  c' O. a. h% fA is superior in another way, this is…
* |6 E/ `# l3 A2 t1 ?0 H* FIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 e( w/ H  D4 |. XFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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: b) e$ w" H. I' ?' ]To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
. v+ Q1 |; R# VFor A, A 的一个优势
3 \% d+ `, l, W2 mWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
( y) E6 D6 B# P$ Z# iFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
- {! X  [( p$ b. B* gmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
* v. b3 R: R3 s' V2 _( {4 E# E7 ~; {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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5 w5 h- V. {5 x  [(二)单一观点式
9 M/ d) U$ A  w6 Y  F5 m$ j5 u1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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8 X) k% B% `& ]! G0 d# \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
. }& h0 t2 C! M6 H2 m3 [The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
$ _) ?" F) H( {5 y' eWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
$ i" g6 N! y% E8 @0 x3 d) u; g8 A' tA is superior in another way, this is…
" Y$ S/ @2 f- F( x9 B, @3 ?' IIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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* h; a$ Q$ y1 h(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
) e7 E' A  V; C- c4 I. LWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
9 M! _% U8 x9 jThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
8 L. _4 r0 f, r3 {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
  y; n: R/ ~$ o8 ]6 q  sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
& G7 a1 \/ x% U! [( aFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( W3 [7 Q- L% U8 `& V(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
$ x2 f3 h5 h% V% t' h2 R… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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# m, f: b( W/ O6 X2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
% `, w" G: x- V! L! |  W) DThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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- N9 H. R. D# a* ?5 p% GOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
: i8 ~7 e" p% X6 {- t- i& p9 q9 y/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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7 G( q8 k) X8 R6 UIn addition/ furthermore


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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]