TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
- H0 n* \+ w: ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ @0 L  n$ L6 t* ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
& n( z. U8 P6 X! K; b1 }, H; NA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; K- g' H* c& IFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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+ O+ p5 E2 d# B5 h2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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1 G# A" ?6 F( w8 E! b7 \To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; ]' N% `2 G. Z; e1 _/ u1 VFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
) i- h& W) P2 d6 Son the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
( ]' v& m6 B, d  U% ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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9 a4 `9 g% `; [! F: W首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
( T  o6 s1 c, M2 cThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
1 r- `( k% r. f; TBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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  A% e2 D: Z" y2 a/ K3 S( {" V' M0 V(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
$ S5 ^0 z" g8 w: N: n# \The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 K" Y1 ]# M) U, \. F; nWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
' R+ Z1 S; I3 _" NA is superior in another way, this is…
, R) a. ]* K9 s% D0 f# ]+ `; x- @) RIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* g, h( a( |6 W. _# I, r) s1 oFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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4 K5 c2 ]3 l9 u- \* i(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
* ], S4 O0 R: D/ ~8 {8 FWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
: i  u# V# v' A( I7 N0 U& @The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 ?$ F4 W7 A1 @C is superior in another way, this is…
/ x* }! G6 i, nFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
# C) l' s, d* P* {Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% c9 k( m9 l9 ~: _9 A+ [( SOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
% ~/ j- W- e" o' [To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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8 \% j& T3 a; G% J3 V2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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1 R9 }: O# }  k/ j" FOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



6 G9 o0 ?2 _9 q- Z% m5 Na more subtle point which we must consider is that…



- m; N% a5 q' s  c2 qIn addition/ furthermore
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' x3 H, F6 V; y" D% WIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

4 J# A8 ]% ^) a3 [$ i再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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