TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


TWE作文模板汇粹
: |+ t1 v  C% [) q1 a(一) 对立观点式
4 t/ P$ q5 }7 }5 C8 j1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
% n; n5 [$ @' L7 [- i* k/ _0 d; H- s7 ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
* J& C1 b4 ^6 E+ P: _What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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, P+ b( B( x4 Z; Z7 S2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
2 j8 G4 G7 [: W. C8 aFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
2 {1 Y( f+ s0 _. Z4 V* T& kmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
* v: e$ |$ S6 c) b7 @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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. b8 q" W0 n2 ^" k' {  O, G# z(二)单一观点式
& a3 _" ^  |# {. d3 j1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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5 V# d/ A* u4 f4 }2 G首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
: n1 I$ |; g7 M2 u* OAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
% F  W; [& t; N2 Z5 Z2 \0 FThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
. A  y5 ^$ e: i/ J* x. ]8 e, BBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
  s" o' U. C7 f( ?" e) uThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 g3 A* y3 P; ]7 ^" JFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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$ r" w' Z* m1 z, e(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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1 M) S+ c: k. AThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 T0 @; V7 o6 C& ]C is superior in another way, this is…
1 \5 P4 F$ W% y+ ?9 eFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
( X9 V( a6 d4 l9 b! @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
, Y" B4 k2 @. ?; w0 {0 `. d(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
+ s; e3 P8 h" e- j( a1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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! u" v8 \1 E' X  \+ ?" b陈述这个事实
$ `3 w8 e, E/ @7 P: `Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
1 y9 Z; h& T( \: g1 g+ O7 h" ?XXX also results from…
/ U7 S3 T$ x  F2 V0 _2 ^* E3 o… is responsible for xxx, as well.
, [2 s( B2 e0 X: FTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
2 v7 _$ `2 n# e* A0 v3 @- d9 n' E- {There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 S/ e0 i4 \7 b$ V9 Y+ S8 R/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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( Q+ A) N, }6 X/ Q再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

! v! b, U3 g0 k) M6 j$ u' @[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]