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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
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  u" o+ c4 Q/ d(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. - n0 m  w$ W  \
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
, I( H/ D5 H$ y* K2 ?% ?" j: j7 f3 `What is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 M1 _: f8 x) E$ \A is superior in another way, this is…
# U5 v- v/ h" m# u) E; \- r1 JIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ( L0 B  u  G. z5 v
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 6 f' ]9 q' E9 R( R) B
For A, A 的一个优势
, {0 I$ ]# x$ a- {Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
0 U( S" F' L) p% `: f$ L% RFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
( J1 d4 ?& x; L7 I: ~' ton the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 1 L# |/ _# m7 Y+ x% t3 \9 O
moreover, B的优点2,for example… 4 G  \( R% K: f
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 7 i* w1 v- z" `1 d8 |

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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. - U. _6 t/ b3 y  Q$ O
There is no denying that… - y" k  k8 ~& v/ u
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… - `: ?7 y! D( O5 G' M( @
Finally,…
: W- `: f. J9 E! P* @2 G2 t; cBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 2 y/ l1 u1 ~, b& d# r$ h
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
0 T1 x1 U+ B$ K- |The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… + _7 q: A0 Q% W
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ' N. I) }: B  M
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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: W* [' [+ M6 k9 aThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 4 W8 p- W, R% e, R' F- ]
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.   P0 V, K" x( g
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is… - h) J0 d7 E  R( {/ f  n; P
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
5 }9 X+ H6 n9 m, V! w5 O8 c5 jFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 1 y5 K. g- H# a2 q
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) - C& `% J! N& R! m) P
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(四)原因解释型
- _& z, }2 g6 f3 `6 r: T1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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! G! l) f5 M3 D5 n. BAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
6 x" j! b' e8 o4 {3 C! C( BOne of the primary causes is that…
7 A# [* W+ l0 J) ZXXX also results from…
8 u" K, i& B4 a0 C3 h$ b… is responsible for xxx, as well.
9 d6 W9 S" D  O0 lTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX * @5 E! I; s8 u( N1 l. }

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, F% O; W7 z" K1 M4 N/ r" u2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
% E+ @' J9 a5 y1 {; R; _There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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: e6 s5 H  r4 a1 g. s; K: IOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/ r% j9 E6 {  H2 O: D+ q) m4 N/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
; T0 g% A# {* V/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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) Q; ]& Y% c% i2 G$ E- @a more subtle point which we must consider is that… 1 D. n+ t- w2 p" F( T- e( n/ p

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架., {  p' {6 S5 r; |5 L# r  v
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