TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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/ Z' Z6 a/ }+ e: s7 c" u) x& d(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
/ L  v# ]$ M7 r$ IThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
7 `" i6 }6 |4 [3 eIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
( S* h  B, k  o" I  xFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
4 |1 d  U- e$ n( ^From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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) o0 t8 L' l8 G0 p  R1 Z6 a(二)单一观点式
' g4 D" A1 S4 f1 `8 O: m# o1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
- c3 @9 y) X7 D6 sAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
( g7 Y. y/ J) k& Z4 m9 Z& bAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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6 j, b' x+ l0 ~: L２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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; p! B$ h. Y; C) r# P(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 h8 `- d) ^6 C* Q& q0 BA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
- \6 [) R  i& s2 d- y* F0 yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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! e7 T0 q9 H3 k, Q8 i6 \0 _(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
8 f; J* f; [6 L# b- EWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
& @4 L8 Z, E- Q! P; o# TThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
9 P) [( n, [9 J4 N4 z6 W" D7 z% kC is superior in another way, this is…
! u& I4 p) \) Y6 q7 O+ YFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
9 y$ G# a$ v& E# v  }& f, l+ bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
; c  k' V8 g# \0 V3 T2 E# W& X(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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7 r. ]) h3 V$ L* W陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% p; P/ K" o1 I* ~( Y* b% B" r+ t$ kOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
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9 O* B) `& |$ ]% ~. [: ^To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



) S; K4 I: e+ Z/ }( g2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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2 W& O9 u% J5 N- {' c, I+ x, Y) k. ZOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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4 }8 x9 [- S6 s( ?' G% g! R0 ]* dIn addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]