TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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3 s  d" s( C. h: d* Q3 N6 I8 v8 @(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
; n; k  N2 b8 i7 r. eThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
. Y7 Q8 H2 B1 d$ cWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
* ~! F0 Q2 t% B4 U" iIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. T+ T9 x9 }; s, ?4 ~& WFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
4 |( V: {! Q2 }: L. u+ ]For A, A 的一个优势
  h& G8 u( X" R+ ?! yWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
+ _0 G0 m7 U+ |4 kFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
. s! ?2 b$ I+ ~& |. v2 D8 p0 ?0 @on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ z# X9 @% }$ n% k! a, VFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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9 k$ a3 `5 v' x- @(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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3 e) F& G3 \3 @首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
" S1 [# x) K- K2 A4 `$ k1 rAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
, J7 W4 `! Z. Y& D% b- e' Y3 TThere is no denying that…
7 R5 s7 u0 P; f6 l, U) gAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
* h; W* p9 d# {7 T$ j5 x( V( A% gFinally,…
- C) F- S7 P/ D" p. J; RBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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, a8 z" O4 X5 M' A% D２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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) E/ D" s6 Z& Q% g! q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 Z$ S3 f, K# @" N& v8 ?A is superior in another way, this is…
" L, j4 J( R0 p& |6 L! KIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
& j! D% {( E0 n* @0 a' b! T  ]From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
/ i0 J4 h$ @- M# j$ g2 H$ G3 IWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
% k8 L2 h% D2 p0 Y/ v2 S4 {, yFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
: x  p2 T: j& O+ g) C/ VAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
- X$ R0 U* Z3 ~1 M% F# y; I… is responsible for xxx, as well.
- E2 n& |) K( k4 pTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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% O2 h5 s, T: C+ Z! B. i, }# b$ n. K2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
. J* Z% Y. I1 h5 m& k/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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3 ?- s; f7 Y! t4 d  x0 a9 La more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore

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5 `* T  t; A5 D4 h; v' h7 n& O  N% wIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

2 L. s4 ^1 z, k$ A$ B8 \# O4 w& g再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

2 N: _; G8 j5 N$ r% u[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]