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I just wrote a poem
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5 U( V) \9 r. A9 W! c5 m. N% ]However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem) O( M6 p1 H% ?% V& k
Thanks a lot!!!
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) \5 V& @; ^9 @9 lFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 f! y, Q% H x' D) b4 k w Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! }# b( k; m: V2 |2 Y9 t0 h
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 5 j& f6 I" |$ N% u3 k- i( }
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & V* H8 l' c% e, y; K
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind # `# D7 j7 x) h0 J0 K: B5 p6 _
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # m. D7 O( b* i+ k" R
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 6 m* k: I# i/ n8 X
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
* h& E3 c( K5 N8 t4 d$ Z2 s6 o somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
2 E# K( `0 ^; U. i4 q& |9 L somehow I lost myself inside again / C2 |$ ~6 r( |" t2 ]4 [
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
$ _" \; K: }. G. ]% @& w% Q- l somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion; t: ]8 \6 P+ t" Z( N( {: e( _
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................$ `. v: Q1 E V
Basically, I almost finish this poem1 z! T7 M/ f6 l, d
I am 一个人de精彩2 r* _$ s. j$ k! x
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
