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I just wrote a poem
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7 V$ [ w7 C$ V0 r3 P( t7 HHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
# b2 l5 f' `" GThanks a lot!!!* O: V8 V" \- p! g9 z! C! e6 Z
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; z# {1 ^% [& f% p& `3 k6 W+ b- n
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us @6 e* g. o& p" m# ^3 b6 a/ T4 O
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 |: ^9 k( z" M* ^ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
0 R/ ?2 o' [) w p0 s- Q Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
5 R) L+ o& ?1 J' ?: D0 P Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 3 x7 [/ t5 t R$ g: }
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday & h/ Q9 n* ?$ X+ b [
somehow I realized you were still in my heart : \0 M$ y, x P- _7 g
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 k- M# C# J a" {
somehow I lost myself inside again 0 B% ]- \0 }: f, {# M1 p9 b$ U" U
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
; E9 S$ B5 b- y: A$ D# C* N/ x$ `7 B somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
# o5 U) s! F3 O& V; ZFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 z$ z) K. |8 U& i5 r: C$ D: F* oBasically, I almost finish this poem: j+ o f% K2 @
I am 一个人de精彩
2 q1 r* T! z" Z; D( C$ W I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.! X5 |% w7 {7 u7 ~3 p- V/ v
But........ ( D( X6 k7 Q# a) d h/ i3 a9 N/ K# ^
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
