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I just wrote a poem3 J( C! _, m2 C; G; K- g8 s( A2 }. a
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.0 ^7 ^6 _% o4 T
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
' l# t4 _) W! L* M( O$ k( S9 eThanks a lot!!!! a& C% ]6 O! X7 B. K! ~* E
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ' W2 q3 J$ W; i/ G* n# b7 x' J
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& e0 n3 g- ]) c; A% k1 t Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
$ S7 c- E3 X& v3 C0 V/ V Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 @. T; m p5 _9 f2 W2 a3 G8 S; Y Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 4 Z* @ [) C- o
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ( U9 ^' n& q: B
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday H( c( u: }* B0 N, }
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 w3 M' ?4 ^+ @ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
$ j* |$ N8 X3 U5 W1 } somehow I lost myself inside again 7 p9 \9 { s- ^; @- D6 e- c9 h9 P9 E
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
2 i5 e! u: P! v) Z$ f somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion+ \5 M" D& J) G2 K* a
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
- L& G: T( b; |% oBasically, I almost finish this poem
9 ]+ w/ m5 V( H6 H I am 一个人de精彩+ |! u6 N% N& Q. N
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
5 K5 Q/ ^* J! Q8 i! nBut........
+ V. q6 U/ B0 i) f$ _Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
