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I just wrote a poem0 i9 h/ D1 ?$ Y4 G+ E9 R% U( H/ j
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
( W( g0 a4 A7 S: J* H3 IHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
+ j2 r+ b% A/ z' ~- }3 M4 lThanks a lot!!!) P5 f$ x0 g z0 ~) N2 I
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you $ u; Q; r5 f1 e J: ^( c* h" r
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
3 L7 e% Z3 r& \7 R Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world * J- R T; g7 V! j5 C! Q% Y' _
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
s+ k) J/ N2 s9 {8 {- H+ ? Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 0 R; ]% I4 e8 R# V7 Z8 }) Z) }. }
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 9 ] q5 L7 |: o. X& `2 v: c
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday , \4 r$ z3 F+ m1 o/ \$ l" f7 m. Q7 N
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
* E. h3 @7 i8 r9 e2 u$ ? b somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness8 R( j3 A6 K6 ]4 ?- v8 o0 [( ?% p
somehow I lost myself inside again + P! d, i( n% |/ `7 r! \* s& O
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 8 R: y# @- Y9 ?; c' P+ j8 a
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- R5 N) X5 v) g. e0 ]! ]6 h4 G' nFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
% ~" F$ u6 n+ l3 w( d7 mBasically, I almost finish this poem
, `( u$ ]3 w* @2 b3 \2 U% @& I I am 一个人de精彩% @" v+ i- ~" w1 q
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.* o% c5 _; [* f2 l/ ?
But........
C' O: F% G4 Q. o! d. AIronically? Isn't it? |
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