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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem% H& i1 [) o4 C( i7 j
Thanks a lot!!!
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2 `. S% e6 B LFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
" v! \ L0 }& ^" I5 p Somehow I'd found something wrong with us / m1 s+ l } } H
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world + x+ f! K! Y- }
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 6 L& y! M1 P$ K6 a
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 7 ~0 `% h: h5 ~" ]7 z& p
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness + x% h0 `, H7 I. D7 r; G+ W
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
7 ^+ L" V0 f8 }8 b! v3 ~" v: ` somehow I realized you were still in my heart ) Z) w0 D3 U. v- e& \/ G
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness; ~; T+ R7 i4 l# a
somehow I lost myself inside again
1 X6 O Z. i5 ^Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
: U- h- e- K! z9 d7 I somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion- W6 s) M W' m# W% K
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 l+ p: a- u" M" Z- v! q0 PBasically, I almost finish this poem P9 L2 }5 p8 Y, S" w
I am 一个人de精彩
+ X4 B+ I" B" p I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.6 @ s/ ?; q1 d: K
But........
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
