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Love the following translation very much:
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$ q) y: u$ Z4 H7 T( G8 L "what did i do to you? 扪心自问
4 ^# _+ ?1 [1 _6 q* {4 o Wish i knew 未曾犯君 ; E- m7 X: R3 u$ ] D* A1 o/ x
Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存. T: i/ d8 b$ Z% _" G7 J
We are all born the same 你我同根. B% o9 n9 R1 S8 {5 w9 d6 b: f
Then we seperate 世起纷争 + H' K4 F) F3 k l$ F* r
Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分
' O o4 y" D" e8 H% C and blame turns to hate 争执不休
4 k- V8 D0 f3 s0 E we must not contemplate 日久生恨: m% Q. V3 i3 _+ z) i4 a, n
how far apart we are 不必担忧- k3 y' N6 f, v
there is always a way 仇大恨深) Q/ @: _3 Q, L( n! P$ E2 @
to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线5 Y4 b: x6 M; c& ^% t9 z+ }
可通君心"
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except these two spots are relatively not as precise:
. a, j. {' D6 ~ "We are all born the same 你我同根"
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# N+ r2 z* [ r \2 [1 d, f "Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"- x* _& P% J+ X6 S$ j7 b6 R
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同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"
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, N8 u: o' r; s+ ~1 v' kAs a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.1 d; ]! }1 \& `4 _: V
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Just be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.
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楼主: 九月
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发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
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发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。 U# g, B/ {+ U
