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Love the following translation very much:
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"what did i do to you? 扪心自问
5 a. ?, x# |5 j J* ` t Wish i knew 未曾犯君 ! P+ Q9 N! N) K( t
Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存
5 ~- b; I% X0 f( ? We are all born the same 你我同根, y8 Y# e f$ o0 K. q) J0 X$ `. s3 F% N
Then we seperate 世起纷争
1 H/ p6 n5 X7 O. M H4 \ Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分5 D/ n) G( C6 ?. f2 K# Q
and blame turns to hate 争执不休
2 T8 b; _7 g8 C/ H# }7 f/ u we must not contemplate 日久生恨
, w: } _1 x. o$ a% d0 e. l how far apart we are 不必担忧
. x$ |" z) V; S there is always a way 仇大恨深
4 Y0 l9 v) @& r( k to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线
1 E: k6 _! [. }* M9 N# m) ?1 o 可通君心"
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4 G- |3 O" r& `! p' h1 b lexcept these two spots are relatively not as precise:. k+ z1 g2 O" c, \8 Z
"We are all born the same 你我同根"
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"Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"
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同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"
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; q9 e* a: n Y& s6 v/ T) I1 U! LAs a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.7 Y7 A* \+ }0 L& y' A0 H1 J
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$ ~: q) D) j# E% TJust be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.
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楼主: 九月
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发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
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发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。
