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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)& u3 [- o9 k) {! y0 g7 n  T8 A
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     One day I always remember9 ~% u: f4 I- ?- D  E
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was$ g) v5 f+ U5 f  Y$ r4 n5 k% m

" y+ m3 t/ ~( w7 X5 a0 Eexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to7 ^+ h8 M6 |1 S+ U' H3 }5 h: {
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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0 {) K0 x. y# Q! B# c every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid1 J! I( Z0 ?; R
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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5 [' |3 C8 t6 r* }2 udeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.$ d9 H4 R# N8 U6 {! C; B

0 j+ R( ?; C7 g1 |) }3 f/ m[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ U1 Y! |: D" m. y6 U! }we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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