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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% L% n1 r# G- C- }, s9 I
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- C' h5 {; G: n2 _* Bexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to- s( K0 G0 u2 J
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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0 E, ?# z; \) c  e" H6 v2 a little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,# N- [# D9 w3 R6 s3 r

, J# \5 N8 m& V% x+ Y( a every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid- C4 Y: D6 O  N8 v0 o
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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  ]# z% }7 m' C/ @9 w. g( E) htrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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+ |. o5 S4 f, m0 n! cAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!. m- Q" x. E$ D# _6 P
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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