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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)4 M3 J6 g6 V6 T" O
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was+ t  Z5 M" L5 h2 ]9 l- Q

+ g: V0 |5 S3 W# ?0 nexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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$ d6 b! e- W3 C- _8 bput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my3 M  x8 l! v3 r4 M1 v4 n! z
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely - V9 S) u6 \2 Y( _

& I' P! I1 i! b. g* y1 d, @' mtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ( Y6 x( R0 Z9 o3 o1 z

6 D" ^  [) x7 ^% O0 f2 J" v; }that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing+ i- X2 E4 U" ]& L) P  a" h( X
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ) k7 H* E1 d! D6 h, R
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!7 |. ?" J6 j- b
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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