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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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3 ?% Y( p: N" D. j  X2 I! H  F6 b     One day I always remember
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+ u) t* j1 N. o- y1 C6 f& m' o  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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. h5 j2 J5 M" q4 d7 Y2 i4 vput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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' z6 P5 c1 H. Y. v7 R: L every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid/ ?+ E" n, K6 e- }0 {/ c* p
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely # a/ m8 y0 m8 n3 P6 H' c4 k

) r" g* j7 }; t' j8 j1 rtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ( y5 e' a% ]0 \6 T; R: W( E$ R# Q
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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- \7 M- o  j+ s& G: O7 K0 ?* @deaest daughter.! B* O& _9 u; [
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( V6 t$ h. E# K8 b* a# b! s% ZAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will* }7 Y6 l( j2 i) t2 [

1 C, @% d! u8 [1 ^4 O0 D) x never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.5 T7 N( t( h3 F6 N6 [) w
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!) y4 O% U. Q2 T) Q
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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