作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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( F  b9 F; }* x2 j9 t( W: _　　　　　One day I always remember
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- n4 A0 z$ ~, ?" }: @# H　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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% l: S' L( e+ G. R- b  g4 n" Bexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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, A- H; Z& T* V5 l0 U8 X3 O0 oput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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6 T# ?# @* x8 h8 j every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

. Y" H( c; [2 u$ ?3 qtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

! n! }. C- H4 r4 afor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

, @# }) t& I3 `5 B6 J never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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" k1 L0 T: ~5 A3 h2 T9 fwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！