作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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0 g# A& P3 k' o% J* F- M  v　　　　　One day I always remember
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/ D+ U9 n5 F. u" R, E　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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! Z8 }) e1 p9 U% O$ G' C6 }exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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2 t& ?+ G+ D  B+ P9 X( c/ J  t4 jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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! a5 M' S+ f$ l7 E0 X. _6 [5 XAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
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OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！