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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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: s: J+ g5 r+ A1 k  P$ E, r     One day I always remember: k% P' b% H3 b. j2 j

4 D. u% E0 ]  L  f4 n; L4 x  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was+ T) z, p/ J; T+ A# F
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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3 ]9 w& p" J/ X1 ]& Y2 Yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,6 l+ P. M/ L4 X' o+ k- y$ _3 G! I5 B
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid* y" P5 t# |% Y
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely , b/ Y& t2 q3 P" d8 a1 i  I$ n! o
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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, }/ c5 V( i) c" s+ X' Bthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 6 a5 D5 u" v6 h$ g
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will- @2 t* i2 }5 R# [3 e: r  C
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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) M( x' s4 _  Q; Z9 P[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!+ ^9 _1 j. J9 l, B3 i& l* h
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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