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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一): a& g8 D$ w: a9 \" b

. e4 k: U/ l/ k8 T, q0 a8 P     One day I always remember
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4 ?% F2 e" @: B- [  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was' O$ T$ S" \6 l% t
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to2 M0 p* i# G, j6 s1 d/ i& ~$ }- U

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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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$ v' {1 |; {$ [1 ?3 ftrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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$ [' `9 S' i3 athat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing3 I' F1 E, M4 U

- c7 a' m" Y; H) t  l$ `% j8 x on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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; P0 \9 F+ b* j3 n1 a4 T% _[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
! }/ l- `1 _2 \7 i  [) mwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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