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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)& q3 Z4 k( \" u
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     One day I always remember
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2 u2 N- G8 |% x- m/ T4 G5 ^  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was, s/ z; t( i5 U% ~5 n" j2 v

+ p: R0 o* b; ?2 bexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to6 {7 I. a0 g9 ~9 N! R, C' o/ q

6 B& |; h* I" b0 n& u' mput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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) E! \& S4 W" o( h$ M little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid* }; X3 U; g6 j0 k! Q: |

! F: j" G$ Q: t; ?4 u was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely * J3 i9 R2 k9 _) ~, ?

; r0 p; c& g& s/ ltrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since , X) W+ Y0 Y, \" l/ U# c# E

4 M" N. |0 O& b0 l( kthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing3 C6 M/ a1 X* B% {2 N! A: j$ ^
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 6 ]! u: M# x0 a. K& T
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will% ], \6 \8 h8 _- K( o

3 u, W( {' D. Y2 k0 I. t never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.) _  Q- Z3 L3 F9 _. F. C
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
6 B5 }1 }8 Q( Zwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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