作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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/ [5 b$ P# q3 O+ n/ a# H( L　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

1 T5 |: k; ^1 v" l9 [  X4 r/ P' n little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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- e! [6 l+ [; u. z every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

+ l3 ~+ q% _9 ]1 V2 O0 ntrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

7 Q2 k; Q/ L' W2 z6 fthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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/ Z6 \! F+ e) l on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

0 e: P: j* Z! p0 v! S4 L; V5 lfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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$ f/ i- I6 u8 U* Ndeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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7 K9 c: I# l( j+ H; _% b[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！