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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

. h* A5 u" q& J* U% nput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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& U3 Q1 h- I3 I4 o/ w every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

& w2 H% O) O3 N; n* f+ Utrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

7 a% h: F! D( B6 G6 zthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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9 ~) |+ Q* }! o0 Ufor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

9 }2 }& z5 r% {8 t! ~ never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

* P; S, }  Q5 ~$ z[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！