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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)/ }/ y( p! N* o0 J) v

/ |# I% K# M( t/ U' U     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to. F3 v( @1 J3 e, Q% ~0 u: e
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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' u* h; h( l9 \7 p& W* i little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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$ x! U! q, K  F' Rthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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& N' @( I* l1 v" A/ U( c on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard   ?7 Q! o8 y2 J/ j' ]3 ^% e$ ~

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% |% h$ |# q% N4 Jdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!) K8 R0 h4 v" |3 F* s
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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