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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

/ |# I% K# M( t/ U' U　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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' u* h; h( l9 \7 p& W* i little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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0 P, m. p$ k" q5 V1 X was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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1 o( L" r9 q+ L+ Etrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

$ x! U! q, K  F' Rthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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& N' @( I* l1 v" A/ U( c on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

* D. l; i& z# wfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

% |% h$ |# q% N4 Jdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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) `* ]1 N$ }- G) d never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！