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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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0 f3 k* \& A, ~$ Q' I+ ?' f     One day I always remember: I: w! L. y+ g5 {; L
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was: c: Z- m$ W2 {* S* S2 i" M; k
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to) O$ F) y7 s5 o' n# M- b! H

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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid3 \3 l. i* ?" z: C# S7 i! T9 o
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 n4 G9 ~. S% i8 ]4 S! @

/ z0 Y+ R) O' B: R6 w7 J/ C- ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since * D; ~; m; }. N* g/ P# L  b: c9 @

( P; @5 p- N, xthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing3 `7 D  k  z9 V: I8 X+ ~6 z

* C% f; F. k! `) P, ^3 A on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard * x+ L  f$ |4 [' t' H
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ! U. ?- {% w, B/ T
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deaest daughter.
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3 ^% d! j( i4 S" j3 xAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will4 r7 d5 W. K/ k" O
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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0 M) ^+ v2 q- ~6 `+ \, @, C[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!0 ~9 O- R  F# D9 H) L, W, J
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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