作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- C' h5 {; G: n2 _* Bexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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, J# \5 N8 m& V% x+ Y( a every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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  ]# z% }7 m' C/ @9 w. g( E) htrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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+ |. o5 S4 f, m0 n! cAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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9 K4 M. J+ v( X3 {" u# `2 d never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！