翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
- ~/ a7 \2 B7 A; J& {: Z9 Kwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
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0 q& m% _% p# {. J此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。
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' s5 D6 U( X, A6 G# L3 E5 f2 jHot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
% q/ u6 f# M# J/ U+ e% p  ]' Vworld. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
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) |# h2 K: f5 Z  P4 e1 W/ ]; z酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
) Z3 a5 k* ^& i3 i. M- B. ?; _姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。
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6 W1 X# a  N. b+ O) U! mLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
$ s, @! T' o- d- K3 L4 F; @, n" fme. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
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灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
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! y$ M6 c5 _6 u; E0 F( bDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
# F7 h1 \5 A" r3 h7 i! k) pski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
7 u( n% y& i5 J; w3 p7 cgood-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
% X2 m% d8 N, O7 y& _disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
/ }0 g) m% X- r7 Z: h. d1 U. vfeel all the same.

往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
( s% H. C1 u* ?1 e3 i/ ?9 ^4 ~休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
然
于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。

My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
" {# E, h. U7 ~/ ^flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
, x! @: v0 \' Byet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
Christmas bell!

  n) ^% _/ o! a9 ~5 ~" q妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
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3 h- Q# i( `8 A1 ^The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
/ y; Z. u( Y1 t+ d4 MSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
nothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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0 _3 H* T+ l3 Q/ j钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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4 U& P; L! T) H& s! z9 b! sSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
雪花渐融，妾与君仍天各一方

三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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* z1 Q* I: L0 `* p/ C7 [3 G你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

; U+ Y3 D8 E' ]俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
不过比奴强点。

无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
此老杨非彼老杨也！

$ L0 [8 I& p1 D7 |相信地球人都知道吧~~

) W; B2 c2 A6 h( T9 H其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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; F6 k7 M* d5 k4 o) X. c$ ~俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

+ u1 \. X- N) F0 O- `% s是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表

是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表
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我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

猪兄可怜，严重慰问ing~~

听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
8 D% s7 L, j0 t. W$ x怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

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Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢