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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! * _# L& g% F$ _$ M: i
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:1 k, ?" x4 w7 d5 Q4 S% m( @
Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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Four additional tires with rims  B' x+ X  ?/ i" i; G/ B
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
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Central control locks,doors,windows
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Power doors
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Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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0 r+ k3 e8 N+ a+ tAirbag: driver
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Airbag: side $ M) {! `) Q/ s1 S0 i( @" @* B( O
Alarm 8 t8 |2 c, C  T3 {9 {: P$ S
Fog lights / S% d1 H# @" N3 n
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 p0 Q6 v7 ^3 ~If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.* C2 g$ X" m4 E4 b

1 A: L: m4 c9 A. n; g: I0 |Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑 ! |& H) P% e  i
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SALE A CAR
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6 S+ E8 c1 w( w' uDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR+ e- L5 h- m$ ^' N) g2 E
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING 6 |8 V) }9 F$ Z1 x0 ?( _9 H6 f
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11- ^- b# x5 Z& y# t0 `2 f
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$ O2 [9 V! C# h7 \9 H/ x; W4 KDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% t! H: Y) C, K, B# S: `$ [这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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3 h: R: |/ _+ v& @% GBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
7 u, ]# ~2 `( N) @这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场

7 a, k8 S+ k# P5 v! ]/ [, b哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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7 g- ]; @9 W1 [2 {4 R* w  pDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

8 P' X9 h( s; z- \6 H$ t" o, YFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.
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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑 " m; ]1 P  K) _; \
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
; J" Y$ E1 H- R2 ^8 z4 ]& r, mThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...
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! X8 c: b+ V( r# g4 R8 @Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
( @' Q. u  `. l) S) ZYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.4 c' i% E+ y6 i+ [% b

5 q* B/ S! M" T' _  \( [5 w& I5 M0 PLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:; r6 S  s8 h8 i' t

# ]$ v) Q- q. ~3 K! O% [0 _"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.4 Y, f( G7 G+ E' p3 s
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