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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 4 g+ |  `$ i. m: S5 \: p
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  + R4 o  X0 {! f- q0 b
Dreamers
! ~% X8 a! _" H& pSavages4 ]0 O( X( U7 m! S
Poets
" q. y& q0 K: l; r- H# _3 {  O- ~& wBuilders of canoes,- h( U8 w. w# n( k' ?
Black smiths
) i' ~1 ?$ W4 BMurderers,6 h9 r9 e: _+ q) R
Risk takers,
% v' g/ b: Q7 r; A$ Z6 a+ n4 q2 zMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 1 X! l. X) c9 @
As I think of what could be. ; S5 s# H7 F( D. o# |; Z6 D% [
The world is so big to me
, W* f" k- c" q3 M/ u. AI wonder what it means to be
# n, T' }0 y# `; P* AI looked up at the star and smiled
1 R6 K! A# G* a! V* \3 k( ?- `They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
4 f+ W  R# ~$ m; F! N9 P评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
: x1 G4 O$ z$ k  e: W8 _顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,) B; B" z) e0 i; }
A poor old Guy;4 y1 T# R' F' F7 ~2 p: ?7 S5 B1 A
Legs in a bonfire,
6 y9 `; ]  d- K( e: \6 Q7 \! i/ {Head in the sky
1 {" ~- k1 S/ o; O8 x$ x# gLonely, with the feel of betray
' O, P/ i( r, @& a  }: S  bHeart empty and hollow
3 m- |) F% h, Z" l7 T$ \Alone I stand
, T+ K( q& V( u* R' |' QI am useless to all
& e* w  X/ A  UBut I wish I were a dove " O* k$ y3 b& C
Giving myself to the world, to the fire, d' f8 L4 V1 Y& V, _8 |4 K& w
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind- ~/ V" Q3 b! f, t/ F! G9 t: e* g
I sent prayers to my god$ _  c9 o1 d1 \4 A
Though he does not answer2 V3 I% Q( I6 u# a3 N
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。' o1 S/ L& U8 o/ ~0 U: v5 K9 Y+ o. J
加油加油,经常写写!
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