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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
+ ^% Z3 v) D- R4 X; I8 zI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  5 l# _) }* J, R# b8 o
Dreamers" p0 \6 j3 ~$ ^- Z6 z& Z
Savages( e. l1 N- }& K7 d$ s- `  P1 }
Poets3 o  C' U' R# s' R* a* Y9 l
Builders of canoes,
8 M" X; ?3 o/ n7 S' QBlack smiths
% p8 Q+ l+ z2 v& y- Z8 P! lMurderers,
- P3 t; x4 v( C, `/ t3 F9 gRisk takers,* C! l0 V) l( d/ l" c: W! X
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
0 i# u$ A( }% h  aAs I think of what could be.
6 _* ]# I% J4 F. w$ Z& mThe world is so big to me
; @; x. \$ y0 h, jI wonder what it means to be( r5 }$ T- T/ c4 p% S
I looked up at the star and smiled
. L3 \4 A, ?7 e1 w9 CThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 9 P$ I% A2 Z2 n% p
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。: l2 k$ t+ K' v  M( I  j
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- I/ {, i& S' N+ G2 d顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,; M6 F: x+ Y: n. @/ L2 [1 V" S
A poor old Guy;
& R- f: \2 ^. j2 h' pLegs in a bonfire,
3 }( J- D0 z7 J7 @( v# T' i6 dHead in the sky
- x* ?' q3 l' X* ]0 V3 @8 w' `+ o. LLonely, with the feel of betray* C% P8 g0 Z) t! j' m$ t( F
Heart empty and hollow9 _/ M$ m+ z# e* v+ r7 W0 W7 `
Alone I stand4 K3 D0 S* z" @4 x% L/ ?* f0 b" H2 N
I am useless to all
1 N4 l3 s$ n; r# a/ Q1 CBut I wish I were a dove ' G* d3 [$ Y+ @1 o2 k7 e% i
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
1 h4 X9 c' L9 A8 uI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
; x& c! ~4 m9 c) r) `I sent prayers to my god8 |- s% {. |; g/ h4 X0 T
Though he does not answer
2 o9 b) K1 u, L0 U( RHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; W4 c* K$ u  a. n8 K! p
加油加油,经常写写!
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