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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, , Q9 ~6 M; @, W3 _5 G4 u
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
6 E0 c  `) l( l4 dDreamers; Z( r+ f; {1 b
Savages
9 L' {; _7 L. C$ |Poets
+ m" E- k' Y1 A; P' \' a5 iBuilders of canoes,8 l4 [) {# X$ o% H
Black smiths0 R8 @" e; }' I6 O
Murderers,: N) Z# o  r# g  b4 z/ K+ k) g
Risk takers,
" l: o) d& y* s! ]" [. u+ eMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 m9 h- Q/ y0 a
As I think of what could be.
8 p( h" _$ F4 S( S  vThe world is so big to me
8 Q6 z2 x0 X, {- G  |+ u: Y9 hI wonder what it means to be
6 i( J; o0 D! a" P& O; Q( n+ tI looked up at the star and smiled
8 [) l* L' N$ U/ p; w/ RThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。2 E3 \8 Z0 r( D9 d6 j9 H, G
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 E' l# X' g$ `9 d# V  r顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- ]; w" c* n6 ~! G% a
A poor old Guy;( A% l! p5 T0 u/ N, J
Legs in a bonfire,
& Q9 \8 P, i# _5 [Head in the sky6 ~5 Z  W! Z4 n, b7 L' Z
Lonely, with the feel of betray
6 d& J. U  h4 e5 b( _+ _Heart empty and hollow* \' {6 m6 c8 G) d4 |$ P6 E) W- R6 l
Alone I stand
9 d, Y8 Y2 h  y' a! H7 X8 u: D  J7 zI am useless to all + p7 P: E$ {! M3 @+ e9 k" q
But I wish I were a dove
* b4 o. c+ A1 H8 f- k0 d+ c: n7 h# l* QGiving myself to the world, to the fire) A7 |1 `7 {; A( h/ `' \) ^; O
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
3 Y6 u* \: \1 t7 z; z6 ZI sent prayers to my god* B; Q8 s. D+ W
Though he does not answer* q: `3 |% S2 p; G( H
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
* ~5 ~3 L1 T8 k" S加油加油,经常写写!
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