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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  ~9 ^7 O0 C8 q. O: kI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
% b/ i% B: z8 L# DDreamers: L% _2 \4 s8 f  L3 Y% v
Savages
% m; Z; M% T+ U' ]* h+ @3 NPoets( h, H0 z1 v) Q! \, k
Builders of canoes,  i+ W" ^- r& h- u
Black smiths7 j0 O' j/ t( j; N
Murderers,. d2 a$ l( u/ Y0 x) o( m/ O) M
Risk takers,# }. j( L- J0 c- ~( H1 R/ {0 G
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
6 I+ J$ W3 `4 R8 i3 E$ [+ T1 o1 pAs I think of what could be.
  u. @8 _8 }8 {+ g5 qThe world is so big to me
3 `" \$ o( N' O3 f2 v- e+ ZI wonder what it means to be
/ V( k% s# g! ~$ j- dI looked up at the star and smiled
0 H2 w* Q% l3 NThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. # ~# S  z2 X; n+ {5 V0 n
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
4 G/ Y: s, @+ E6 M. O评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。1 g! H8 K* `* W1 Z) l/ D+ [/ [( _' U
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,9 }0 U/ q5 O3 I! \9 h) H" H; i
A poor old Guy;6 ^2 _9 v( N- Y, B: X- v
Legs in a bonfire,
, ?, p: q, f# M9 ZHead in the sky
9 O2 c* P/ E! o/ C. i0 GLonely, with the feel of betray+ e! i+ y+ U6 H) k6 U" ]
Heart empty and hollow
9 [4 }5 }# P! a! D# n, TAlone I stand3 C$ d0 i0 Y+ N" I  m/ G) I; H
I am useless to all
  j. c# ?$ T+ g" R/ xBut I wish I were a dove
( ~! |8 b5 M- @/ ^0 aGiving myself to the world, to the fire" r" a3 p- d5 A% ?! X4 N, L
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
) V: F7 O2 [! h4 G, J  mI sent prayers to my god* r* J: z7 B3 r  M, `: K
Though he does not answer
: Z+ K& u0 m3 [( u! S% wHe bless me with the gift of hope ( _' W& k3 R5 A* _

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。. V4 \9 t0 A  p
加油加油,经常写写!
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