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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 2 R9 \9 K% F" {; i
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
3 S5 c6 W6 x' `1 m$ r: V) g' qDreamers$ [$ h8 k5 _' T
Savages
% f$ h; `( [- P- W. dPoets
& S9 I6 D; W- u5 d/ ]& g. LBuilders of canoes,* q8 b2 ]; ~; ?% W7 b" n9 Z
Black smiths
: x  t; H; X+ u# ]2 EMurderers,) {5 d$ s% m' K# B" I) Z; O
Risk takers,
- t# ^/ b3 t, {5 {My mind is full of curiosity and wonder # {6 L5 a- L5 J* y# `0 R9 j
As I think of what could be.
9 u, I+ U$ `) T; [The world is so big to me
) W! a! R: m+ v3 nI wonder what it means to be& A( l! U) H7 x% C, A0 S) n
I looked up at the star and smiled
1 J! a# b' q0 wThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. $ u. m( h7 Z; h

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
5 R8 e+ I- k$ C3 ?! u; U评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
: t+ Y5 q9 y: \$ a  @. }8 o3 C顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,& [% E" Y' |7 V) k
A poor old Guy;9 ^4 V# D3 v" r) o) `5 G
Legs in a bonfire,
$ r9 c/ _: R4 \! T9 i2 ?1 l6 UHead in the sky/ b' j5 ~7 L3 `, h/ D+ F8 A
Lonely, with the feel of betray
8 h2 k+ E& b2 U( o/ ~7 {Heart empty and hollow! A" U) y; z3 I; R2 J& _4 ^. X
Alone I stand
7 z' k- W; }' d% u4 w. z, P! d4 JI am useless to all $ a5 m; l( S4 v$ b' F, d- l
But I wish I were a dove
, l# g: O" d) P1 i3 B7 y- hGiving myself to the world, to the fire
& p: K6 V+ P  J. ~- D1 C1 DI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind2 S' m. i, w2 f+ J1 C& I
I sent prayers to my god
2 m4 O" N# T; u5 X  }Though he does not answer& V& X# m* b$ D1 Y; T% [; m/ Z
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
& t7 z. Z  G% `- @加油加油,经常写写!
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