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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
1 l$ m' s* s5 d2 vI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
& ^5 F! d" N/ D" v# `7 [$ \5 ZDreamers
) z  _( \3 m. ~. M9 |0 bSavages& D! y) V; i$ c  w5 `4 k
Poets" b; e, R7 H( G& B& {. A7 }: r
Builders of canoes,
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Murderers,/ B4 \4 w; }) |  |% z
Risk takers,1 U* {4 N* N/ P9 {6 w* ^/ G1 G
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 r% }8 V2 ~7 q  k
As I think of what could be.
/ V$ \0 i( b0 _5 Y# }  x7 @The world is so big to me " o! F7 Q5 r: ]
I wonder what it means to be9 E* v6 W" j" s7 ?$ q: {; x
I looked up at the star and smiled . ]! v+ I6 R4 U/ n+ |' D7 t1 M8 n) l( q3 N
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
7 k- w: z1 C7 O+ h% R& J  i评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
& M7 G( ~5 u2 |: W' R+ b2 v0 w1 s8 G顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
  ]/ A( F- ~, M/ v3 _+ SA poor old Guy;% A0 D; `+ K+ ~* n6 S. |& @
Legs in a bonfire,  h4 N5 [& i. S) H
Head in the sky
2 v- N$ _' w) U. D: {$ p+ `Lonely, with the feel of betray
# [3 e9 C0 _* b4 c8 d4 f# LHeart empty and hollow; N8 _9 {0 l  H
Alone I stand
" b: j  e) w  q* u& t% ~$ k) _- xI am useless to all . s5 B$ H9 T% e
But I wish I were a dove 3 f  Y: v; G6 i
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
0 R# V8 c2 \7 s( nI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
5 l  i" F5 m1 _% ]I sent prayers to my god% d5 x/ w- q1 O1 B
Though he does not answer$ r. G2 D* Z7 R. C  v, I' ~" w* P( |
He bless me with the gift of hope * e8 N) L% h( R  x( ]* F' v

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
0 D, D- u/ f; j7 U2 T  E% G加油加油,经常写写!
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