天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

; \4 U9 Z+ j. x& l, ~鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
; n$ ~. V3 K" @8 iTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
+ f) }$ n- E* u. \SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

5 m$ {0 H7 G: A) v7 ~! G3 P( G哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
5 Z4 D9 O; I6 Y9 I: `+ V  ]; A9 hI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.