天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
/ H+ i5 k  s8 K: vTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

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珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
/ F( S2 `# H* ^8 k) y* fI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.