天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

1 q. e; `  w: o  P" J鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
9 E3 I& L, I6 f2 z3 g' K5 sTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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! F2 P! H, l( |/ Z0 R; X9 O鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
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哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.