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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑 % y8 o1 v& I+ ]! M$ l

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我尊贵的邻居, \6 F5 p7 G' q4 D, h* u, f; {0 W5 q
是我们小区  几十户: n' t8 U1 A* I( L( y+ P
唯一的元老& i6 L( |' z8 K9 B* I
一住三十多年, Q3 _* u! S% q" k# o6 m6 e

3 J; x; G9 H3 n+ p' L/ F邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕* L# T- W, u3 Q. M
白发红颜  不见皱纹
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  j8 g1 x8 t6 l  K, d) y似不识  岁月为何物8 o- d% }( S; W+ K$ b
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
: n# _- z) e5 n! G邻居气宇轩昂' q7 Q' A' f* q
如同女面朱熔基
) d$ e4 H+ {' H" g邻居的字
$ O' {1 `" t% U/ i+ B" c则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤
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邻居酷喜中国文化
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其笛声也悠扬
1 R4 A! P- S! q7 u6 c那是从隔壁传来的
0 M- y& F/ k7 z4 W$ R& W唯一的声响
) I' T1 f% b8 o* j% v那不知名的曲调
2 M( V1 Q3 S' ^! i$ C反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 8 P$ X- S* n/ Z; Q" i! p

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Living here for more than thirty years,8 e# [2 N: `3 S; u8 T, O9 J. O* ?
my prestigous neighbour
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in our community ---
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: B9 e: y; P8 y. {6 z5 fNeighbour is more than eighty years old,$ H; [9 p- B( T, J: R
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
( I4 T. H8 x0 ?: u5 i6 d4 W' M( rShe has white hairs and red faces.# f# V3 H9 [0 S6 T% X% c8 S
Her light-footed movement# L" s' c1 _1 L* e  m
is just like a flying swallow.* s- }: z/ Y. t: Y* Z+ q) U6 ~2 l0 h
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She shovels the snow on her door lane
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she digs her back yard( n# s7 Y4 O  E1 N
to plant flowers ---+ Y, U3 o3 k- Q7 f$ j4 z
as if she did not know what years mean.
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,0 l: e  P( t1 H( u" U2 G
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---, A* j; q  O' R% W9 v& P5 }
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.+ i: K8 A1 _6 c/ T! R  L! u
Neighbour's handwriting) j* U' i; [8 m
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
$ ]% R" ~$ q8 ~+ S" N# }She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
; a! h# i$ ^# L' e% X$ h' qWell, her fluting is very melodious ---9 G0 o: k/ r9 y# o5 }" \
that is the sole sound going into my ears
' w& ~' l4 B8 _. H% ]; o/ H3 d0 jfrom the next side of my wall;) L9 n" E/ [" K
the unknown tune is extolling
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" Z% M. q) x; F  k! n2 p- ^4 h' kagain and again.
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
$ b) Y' g7 q5 `3 e3 N; m; UJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03
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从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。. p9 D# J+ [4 p$ e* h
另外,翻译改动一处:
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is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35
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我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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