我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
7 a) |: n2 H/ q+ t( P! C) J是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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2 {, Z! g- P$ d% B1 q' {Faster, hotter and sweater,
( M  m) o) z; n& |2 u+ D7 ASummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
5 S! t# n; s- t% L5 }- RFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
+ A  D0 O9 U( I% M* JGo to the wild rain
4 Z& o5 W! [1 v% i/ p; FWashing my heart and soul.

1 ^% X% ~; g" |8 R0 Z8 tGood-bye, my happy spring;
3 j3 b. F2 @, d  K& RGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
# ?( Z+ n, \/ e6 e7 \) UMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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" O- l/ C, C7 B; C% k4 y/ @# q一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
% ?6 p/ R6 T8 n+ k6 B. iIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
: ?; c, ~+ ~3 V7 Sbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
- n( [# k4 S0 s4 M3 B# l夏天来了