我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
1 S/ T; Z7 n8 w* j5 e是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
& |: @  ~( v- A) v5 MFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
- v# q3 I* Z# W7 WGo to the wild rain
# X# ^  y) `1 h6 W+ JWashing my heart and soul.

+ S9 X6 B- z& f1 J9 xGood-bye, my happy spring;
- Q8 k& s* V; ?$ RGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
3 n4 G. u# W  ~- x; g; W; M7 }" wMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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6 Z  A# e. I  a: U; c; F一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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- a& L' c5 T/ b" U" s[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了