我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
1 k& _4 Y. S0 C( t. ~3 G7 U# r- V是十多年前的作品了——
- i+ r$ G3 M$ x7 oSummer's Coming

7 T9 i2 ^7 f. W# gFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

+ [4 _5 B2 H# m; @Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
/ M' f" _5 W5 A' t7 E  HWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
' X7 j, ]6 P7 q6 UGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

7 Y0 Y. f4 s& j& b4 {7 n$ `/ m- D[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
0 N9 N! t" ~7 t/ r& f夏天来了