我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
+ Q2 K  Y7 p( q8 ASummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
) a: \7 r0 a8 q1 S2 _( @Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
& `  Y& e/ T6 n- ]  gFrom the colorful nature
9 I% M! p/ `) G- Z* I( fTo my life and dream.
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$ i5 O3 I# ?1 c6 s- H. D( ]Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
2 `) y+ \5 [' \" I! _, AWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
  {. r9 m  i' EGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
* H4 {6 L9 D+ [! DMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

! T& i! b% d. g. a* Z一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
' H/ H# ?+ ^8 o3 H" A2 }* cIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

2 L/ }' z$ Y/ r" E6 {3 L) C[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了