锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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) o  n% a+ ?0 \) S% u' Z　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

( r! F4 k7 I4 R. W0 w# k. `　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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. Q* F$ T* o8 M6 C* _) R　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

, h9 o! N9 @. J　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

2 C. A' _3 j; J8 h　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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9 g% V, |$ x; k9 |7 F- m( |　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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- Y: N8 P! o" U" M, G1 Y4 R　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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/ J5 X3 W+ d; S' R0 j$ e# y6 O　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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) V1 I  v+ X4 e　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ E( G; I6 J5 `2 O9 C2 J　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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+ [4 ^6 U! D" }& D( Z6 }　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

5 _) x% }* C; ]$ S) N　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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: X  w* Z# i# L0 v: K" K　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

* X( m4 y' P5 f+ \# R　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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+ D; Z+ n- R' K　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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5 q' w; |) J" X5 ~# K; n$ q! ^　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

/ I8 v$ e8 }- R6 F8 d; e( |　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

5 ?9 s' y( M# ~* v' l　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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, i( c3 f; q) t  w　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

/ [0 l- j5 e( W6 q% h　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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1 j1 H! U& H7 B7 |4 A　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

  L/ e6 O! z- ?) X) v　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

( R6 {5 k8 B0 x1 V# Z　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

* X+ U+ o# o, B$ h/ r$ g　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

! r2 w, |: \* Z2 X  K7 ~　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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7 J3 F( T3 e0 j6 ]) `; `2 ]& ^　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

5 W$ ^0 a# p; V0 l( l  L# n　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

; W. k$ K  k9 p8 k, l1 u　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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, c5 Y0 |/ @7 u' J1 ~1 S% Z　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

2 j' E0 `4 N% ?　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

4 i5 e- a9 E4 T' }/ I/ g3 g　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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- J7 f8 P6 A+ V* a( e" P　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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" J$ x$ _; L! ?: G8 f3 b　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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! x( V( V  T2 z4 Q　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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" x( W% a1 n6 H% f8 a　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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. o, l; x- l2 \9 F2 _+ u& v6 S　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

2 `0 i. v) |; @- c3 j" \# C　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

3 w3 g2 j/ u: l# c  `　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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6 z/ Y0 {" x: q　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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# j2 @7 u& ~; R' Y% @# B/ C　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

. x( l! S6 d# d, X　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

1 ?0 {( P2 C% j& ?　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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, e5 a  a( {, A2 S　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka