锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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* d# T, U3 [* e, A( M# n　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

$ U4 q+ N. w; r8 O' w　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

: v; q+ q$ G3 t; }+ d　　改进: They are still immature.
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0 ]9 @& I: G( j, P* D# x& o　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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1 x, P; Y' u: U1 A. k5 Q9 T　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

3 R, X, [/ X# Q1 o7 R　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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. e$ m+ p+ v- F* o* s  k$ H8 m7 F　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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& p9 I3 I' F) s8 N5 t' B　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

1 O7 A+ Q- @  o7 l1 N8 x7 ?8 q2 J　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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& @# Z( N' q3 y3 z" e' c; Q　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

1 s& q4 A# J8 M$ H0 ~　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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" A2 K* c% l% }& O# t) q5 y　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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; H8 t  @: K# P% ?8 Z( z0 _　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

( I) v' e) u6 p+ {　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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$ `/ a( ]5 @/ W4 w% Y5 p* V　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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/ v& @* Y6 D6 Y0 ~0 f9 i　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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/ u# n5 K4 w1 {, U# h3 _　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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& b/ A1 q# s3 P　　改进: Money can improve their life.

& J. |: W- o! d# b: B+ \　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

+ `4 c! i3 n  q  B3 M, v　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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9 L% H3 C% `8 A( Z2 U　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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% G6 U9 w4 P8 ^4 x- s3 o　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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% ]- j' E, }1 [) g+ H4 u1 B　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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' A3 C' {  d* B4 y4 _　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

* b) Y$ X7 C; S& X　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

6 m% {$ o- T6 h6 v, F　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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/ x9 Q4 n$ {) `( C, H　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

0 r5 F# O8 X  i+ p　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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, s) R7 ?9 U2 j* J　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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0 N1 c$ K( @2 Q4 I　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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" M& D! ~3 Y: F. ?  C8 |, M) W　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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, u$ C( X* v7 b- B) R- X3 a2 }( u　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

( s; z& ?5 {# S$ \; a4 Y　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

) f1 T8 Y/ {/ @, H" Y# R$ N+ V　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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! k7 ?: U& K. I- L5 U+ M, N4 a　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

# z7 E2 _: s5 Z! Z3 m& A- F! B　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

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　　38. No one knows all the things.

( C/ h; x1 n4 T　　改进: No one knows everything.
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2 \% _1 y' G. s" A4 r6 _　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

: }! O  Z) S) d5 f3 ^& j　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

1 Q( Z3 p' g6 p3 ]) h! C0 U　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

; f1 }( V0 }: v3 B" p- V8 z　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

" Y6 }7 F6 N( M# F) m　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

+ d3 _  P+ I& y　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

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: A* F+ O/ D3 g' K. j+ N　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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9 v. }7 r. V. P) z5 k+ ?2 @　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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* n, D- a* }( m# m1 E- P　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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+ M7 A* t8 z3 l; j- {　　50. I felt alone.
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, W# `3 m: a: Q8 t& n　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka