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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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6 x& h6 H/ V( E( E# r& [ 改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. 1 A: |6 ~8 G" f* g5 A% F9 _4 m
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2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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0 J7 \& k7 u! y! f! r1 O4 V0 g! X 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. , g1 O* B9 Q6 @) o d
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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) O/ w2 |! k4 a 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. " u& s# M& g3 K' Q. U1 e
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6. Their brain is still very young.
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% L& k x, X i6 J( j# g0 ?( F 改进: They are still immature. / V9 a4 ^4 D+ ^
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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/ m3 T! ^3 Z, f0 l" f 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 6 k; w. K4 ?8 @$ ^: Q9 S
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. ! Z6 Q2 u8 \- I3 D X
8 Q4 e4 _9 |7 \) m( h- M: M8 ~* _% r 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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& F: w( q) g# W* p a$ s 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. . T1 W6 `$ G& J- _* N- b
8 j. n5 V5 H5 A2 s 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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8 ]$ K6 M! Q0 a# N/ ? 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. " u! z9 R1 h5 ?6 H5 d
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. @2 K$ ~$ U$ }2 }
( R* D3 v1 n1 U$ I& \5 A 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. + o j/ B; M) t! x' T% P
4 Y+ ~, L7 n5 l' j9 S# {& D z% y6 d 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 8 N! c3 c: I0 c5 L2 }4 p% R
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 4 K! e, y1 A I7 y$ H
* Z2 U, \" d( C( @: i2 s2 s) D4 n 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 0 n4 N; U4 ?* P; e
( V4 I% n9 W9 v8 K 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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6 ?9 X$ t# h. {) d" m* [+ S. T$ X 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. % z0 B( N' b- \0 L% K# I% n
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. : H3 K+ \/ l/ H, ~1 z
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. ! p- B$ P. W4 p, b: z
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. - Z g9 q4 T' l' c( A$ g! h- T7 ~
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. ! m$ u2 w2 W/ E- K
( Z9 X) _! b5 f/ ?7 J( I3 u 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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改进: This knowledge will become part of you. . Z% y: U3 v3 F/ [+ o, }) z
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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改进: They cannot think straight. G) C) u& r# L4 `' e; _$ K( i6 C
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20. Money can improve their living standard. $ g9 H B, ^' V! w- A
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改进: Money can improve their life. 7 K" u6 J+ ^0 |% M3 y
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. 1 L0 ^9 z% ?5 ~" s4 c4 ~
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. * n9 ]! s( Y( b8 M6 j
9 E, ?& l( ~& Q: Z 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. C) S8 E: g, W! N* W
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: p. _3 I5 b" J( \! z" { 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. " m- X; T0 Z% f3 v" o
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. - k( T/ E; m& q) U
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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% p z: {# r, e. j$ A/ o 28. What's about nonsmokers? ( d' @& q. t! \. {2 s8 J- U3 _ q
- W( ^) I2 x: f 改进: What about nonsmokers? " H' _6 V0 F+ g7 m& a6 }4 e
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker? % c# r$ |) d2 F6 P. K
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. 2 C( Z+ A" J; e7 Q [
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life. ( O! N9 y( P. H U
( \1 e3 f _% ?6 v' m# j4 o* X 31. I am not good at maths, but English N" X% t F6 j2 C
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 6 X: \) D& U' @% h* Y3 Y
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? * u1 _2 H2 y& `. l
/ h$ p1 z# j q 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. ! y; O% j+ B( c$ F0 x9 Y
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34. I agree the latter idea.
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改进: I agree with the latter idea. 2 {4 E/ l* a$ S2 v
7 S, P$ Q4 W& e6 v) W! i: u 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. ; A, N! S5 R6 @2 {0 b: r( |4 I u8 T
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. Z1 k8 W3 c9 n0 M+ a6 u O2 ?- E3 Z( c 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. 7 L& ~0 p2 ?9 R( N
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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8 {3 i: n% t9 K& c* C% A& f- ^ 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 2 _* A7 a' w7 o. X+ ~( X1 T
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改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 5 M2 X9 l$ S& s' R+ h6 [
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38. No one knows all the things. 5 e0 E. f9 T; C3 ^
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改进: No one knows everything. L1 D* S- M) P' { ^9 D# P$ H2 L7 h
% A9 {1 g; C% n4 x( J 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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3 C( ~6 ^+ g+ ~ 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 5 y5 E$ V7 M* b/ {" Q+ H- p
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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) y# o7 P; X+ j! N/ ~# B6 v 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. 2 q* G0 D% k% B1 @0 K
3 J# @8 {% o: x6 J1 J/ M 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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G: H0 T, L& ^8 }8 Q+ I3 o 43. They will learn the bad habits.
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8 s1 a1 `* \1 }8 ^; X 改进: They will develop bad habits. " i, Y9 {1 p1 y) L. P' Z/ K
5 f+ H6 S6 g9 R 44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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1 B! j4 f, k2 j, I8 G; E( R 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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! d: Y4 T0 ~% c: @/ v 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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+ o: j0 T8 A) V 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. % l8 d( F/ Y$ {' q
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. ' _2 E3 ` |) O- V
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. ! A4 M1 T3 ?3 w% }
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改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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: M$ y" ]; ?) o% h. a 改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. / v% p6 R+ r! j. `7 T' f
; u- J g3 C: l' A* F1 k [3 Y 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. / _$ s1 S" r$ B5 d; X8 s! q
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0 J' D7 J' d" J) V 50. I felt alone.
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8 R! L8 J9 ~9 U 改进: I felt lonely. |
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