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发表于 2005-2-24 07:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. - c6 u) y; ]5 G0 d8 Y# \4 k
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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, w" ~# N  x2 x, q+ T% r; b  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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3 {; e0 J. r  R  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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  G% x6 o8 ~: @  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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/ b/ O7 K- ?/ E/ |7 @( F, _5 {  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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' b; s- ?& |& v' G  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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3 [: h/ E. v( r6 ^  t  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 4 W8 s' B) Y( n+ r6 g, ]

. ?8 Q: b) O. b' Y; M/ a5 h  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 7 g  A2 z4 \, v- S2 ~
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  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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  6. Their brain is still very young. # m% Q! C5 j2 u
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  改进: They are still immature.
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( n  h. s  l* T9 \# D  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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9 W3 q2 g% I, N" q  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. , s: Q( z2 N$ |( S* A; }! S( D1 X

3 L  K; D' z0 d( i/ M1 I8 ?) d  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. . \# s, n% l/ i8 ^/ L3 x+ e1 ?2 e

8 v, V( U( y" M: m4 o; X  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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* u1 J5 h  \0 @+ |  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. ) Q! X; [' ^. @
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  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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% U, H* ]2 l( ^8 E  L& O4 j: c  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. + D) y+ f  K3 D0 u# @

8 Y9 o7 ?4 h& _$ s0 f  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 0 d, R3 U/ K7 P# [- x. A
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  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. ( B. j* t* `3 O4 z. Y# {) e

9 X7 Q( v) \" }4 K( d. [6 H3 F  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 3 K7 w% Z% l8 [2 x
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 1 }9 G! {5 z  S0 R, C/ {2 e
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  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. & i9 _4 K5 f. V* w
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  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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; q2 x$ V. h% t/ j( J6 `, a  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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; b! S( M' _4 i/ }* ~! l  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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( H3 p1 _3 ]/ _9 _  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. ' W3 j, k/ f5 r: n  p) P

# |$ s- ~$ r( Q7 {$ L" n  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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: A0 A1 G) Q% L- x& c, A  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. & B6 G4 t+ `$ ?0 @2 Z$ ?

, H- ?9 I) |9 M! g& p$ O# V! m  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 5 c; E. M: @1 g% z

- K" R1 @  E( u* R  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. . ]; o/ J6 b8 B) w! e4 ]

  U1 x( l( }- N6 j7 h$ x1 N9 l1 {  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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, q& v  e0 M' w8 t1 H' d, d, W( x! `  19. They cannot think clearly. & o, R2 ]7 P; ~1 F9 I$ M% ?
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  改进: They cannot think straight. % B' V& {% T- i7 a3 x
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  20. Money can improve their living standard.
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  改进: Money can improve their life.
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  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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( ]2 N+ K( I: u& B3 n  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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; i: e4 q+ V/ P  h  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. - v. y: P% |6 V) \+ W$ K

% l% l2 H$ |& X4 X6 b' e% k  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.   X) W1 X$ x! f& ^
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  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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/ }3 T1 d0 `# m0 u  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 4 m, g5 Y; v9 Z
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. 5 y/ G6 Z% x! |) _7 w' n7 P
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  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. + }# E+ V8 l7 Y8 A2 I+ X, y/ z3 \  E
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  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. + v0 m, C2 C1 I
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  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 4 k' y3 N2 ?5 `& x! y
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  28. What's about nonsmokers?
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# C8 l# c8 v% u% M9 r3 t  改进: What about nonsmokers? + d+ `1 s2 U9 _0 r

8 d- b- E9 Z$ c, v8 A1 V8 ^1 M  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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6 Y* D+ j9 F# Q' x! G; w  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life. ! W* t- L' M) K. Z/ c

$ ]% ]( I3 m+ F3 W2 _1 w  31. I am not good at maths, but English
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  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 3 Y- ]" g1 j$ P7 j2 y
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  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? + R0 _4 f. }4 L& k
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  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? # x4 k  d1 f( t3 v0 I( T9 M
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  33.It is children who clear about their interests. 0 p: c+ o' ^/ K, }

/ W& t1 A: k/ x2 Z  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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3 ?( H& q" u$ C9 f3 m( l, p& i+ E  34. I agree the latter idea. . G+ Z& P* A* `

( p+ J& y( m4 h6 e% v  改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. + d' P( Z. b8 f: Z2 \# G

1 \) C8 @" |' N  X# e9 ^- P( {  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. & D- O! {+ v( q( F& ^  \
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  38. No one knows all the things. 6 @" m  M, n- k: a' C+ N6 ?

$ t2 X+ ?4 x6 Q* _" M  改进: No one knows everything. 9 g2 e, d/ \; `0 h( T" ^
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  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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. {7 i- P1 Z8 @  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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- W" ~3 ?+ H& w3 |  |  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. % K% p# y* e. `, O. A* J" ]
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 3 a! b2 l6 B1 Y4 ~! g8 Q3 H' H; ^6 r% o

2 J; y  T( {( ?' V( X- L  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply # G' H# m( |/ W9 Z
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  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. 4 j. }: a2 X0 {+ n
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  43. They will learn the bad habits.
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+ h: K* t3 w) L- ?" r" w8 s% d  改进: They will develop bad habits. ' V$ T4 j! U% o: j% g
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.   [1 E# F% T1 \( y+ }
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  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. % Z4 f/ B4 j' T$ n; ]

5 u4 p# x( t. [$ k7 h8 O; x  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. ! \' \! w( D" P' |; u  S
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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& a0 b3 P8 j* d% Q  ?8 B) x# T) i, z  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. - X9 ^: N( W( _' e& i0 W: C1 g

2 S6 G, Z8 f, c5 D9 D  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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) V: g4 A8 m! ]% N) b1 c. C" N  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. ! t3 [6 Q, ]( H  U, i, p& E

/ e: I# Q5 }+ b- T+ W, M- H" O0 O$ R- V  50. I felt alone. & {( M3 H0 d- c1 `+ ]$ i* E
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  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks
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发表于 2005-2-24 09:08 | 显示全部楼层

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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发表于 2005-8-24 21:11 | 显示全部楼层
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