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发表于 2005-2-24 07:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. " S/ d# e& ]& Z5 {) q! N
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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* d# T, U3 [* e, A( M# n  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. . K- |" v0 |, L& J

$ U4 q+ N. w; r8 O' w  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. $ `' n* L1 L$ p, C: W& v
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  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 4 L7 z5 D# \6 n( ^! D
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  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. % i5 B( W: I) @5 M7 k
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  6. Their brain is still very young. & O* m6 Y  s7 Y4 w) J/ N

: v; q+ q$ G3 t; }+ d  改进: They are still immature.
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0 ]9 @& I: G( j, P* D# x& o  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. 9 P4 ?% j/ b5 w$ Y+ X6 u) r3 B
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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1 x, P; Y' u: U1 A. k5 Q9 T  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 9 M. X! A/ C6 N' A

3 R, X, [/ X# Q1 o7 R  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. . L  I/ O, E5 ^& @
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  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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. e$ m+ p+ v- F* o* s  k$ H8 m7 F  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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& p9 I3 I' F) s8 N5 t' B  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 7 C' V8 B! V: p/ I) |) D1 D. d3 T. ?
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  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 4 i0 Y# x7 u& G9 l" d( p

1 O7 A+ Q- @  o7 l1 N8 x7 ?8 q2 J  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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& @# Z( N' q3 y3 z" e' c; Q  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. # K0 o3 c2 _( R( D" }- R4 b6 K
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. * u* y0 [# Q1 K' e: t! E

1 s& q4 A# J8 M$ H0 ~  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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" A2 K* c% l% }& O# t) q5 y  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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; H8 t  @: K# P% ?8 Z( z0 _  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. 7 H( _$ O+ a' C/ z: Y: X
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  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. % @4 x" e' C# T3 j, k( |

( I) v' e) u6 p+ {  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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$ `/ a( ]5 @/ W4 w% Y5 p* V  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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/ v& @* Y6 D6 Y0 ~0 f9 i  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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/ u# n5 K4 w1 {, U# h3 _  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. / ~+ E* Z  C. S. z
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  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly.
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  20. Money can improve their living standard.
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& J. |: W- o! d# b: B+ \  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money. ! `, S  l8 R; {0 ~% ]2 k7 l" h

+ `4 c! i3 n  q  B3 M, v  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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9 L% H3 C% `8 A( Z2 U  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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% G6 U9 w4 P8 ^4 x- s3 o  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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% ]- j' E, }1 [) g+ H4 u1 B  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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- p. ]% e' F% A4 D& }7 w3 {  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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' A3 C' {  d* B4 y4 _  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. 7 a* B& j# k5 [% d

* b) Y$ X7 C; S& X  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. ' I% u* [# b% r- a. O5 j" H

6 m% {$ o- T6 h6 v, F  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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/ x9 Q4 n$ {) `( C, H  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 7 z; p" b+ ?0 A; Y

0 r5 F# O8 X  i+ p  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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, s) R7 ?9 U2 j* J  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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  28. What's about nonsmokers?
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0 N1 c$ K( @2 Q4 I  改进: What about nonsmokers?
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" M& D! ~3 Y: F. ?  C8 |, M) W  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? ; N3 B( P# u( [/ h# s7 d
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  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? 8 r: g) B: v  V5 Q/ z; [" f& E

( s; z& ?5 {# S$ \; a4 Y  33.It is children who clear about their interests. ( e7 z# j- z( o. B

) f1 T8 Y/ {/ @, H" Y# R$ N+ V  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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! k7 ?: U& K. I- L5 U+ M, N4 a  34. I agree the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. * B0 ]8 l$ c9 M# r1 O) [

# z7 E2 _: s5 Z! Z3 m& A- F! B  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. + w; y) _# H4 \
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 1 o% }+ _$ a% d

, I' E+ m/ e& f  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. 3 ?# E8 s' G( _
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  38. No one knows all the things. - v0 ?0 k  w0 R4 c7 ~  z

( C/ h; x1 n4 T  改进: No one knows everything.
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2 \% _1 y' G. s" A4 r6 _  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 5 r9 r0 u% I2 w# [' v5 |" X) j  X
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages + J7 ~9 S6 V! `0 X/ `$ p! Z" [* ?  [: J

: }! O  Z) S) d5 f3 ^& j  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. - n! Q3 G! E+ F7 |" h5 @* X

1 Q( Z3 p' g6 p3 ]) h! C0 U  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply : p+ e- B. p) b, m

; f1 }( V0 }: v3 B" p- V8 z  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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  43. They will learn the bad habits. & T3 y* l+ [: N2 w' X7 m
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  改进: They will develop bad habits.
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress. / c6 C1 y# v: a; G2 M7 O- o) W) ?

" Y6 }7 F6 N( M# F) m  改进: In this cycle, people make progress. & e  B8 F. n/ j* Z

+ d3 _  P+ I& y  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. - M$ I. R- H! E. m! a. E, {: L

& u& Q. C( e: G  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. 0 @  T  ~" I& K* P) ^' |* P

: A* F+ O/ D3 g' K. j+ N  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. . ^( j  t: o& }
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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9 v. }7 r. V. P) z5 k+ ?2 @  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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+ M7 A* t8 z3 l; j- {  50. I felt alone.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good. 5 l% n' _# M. {3 W+ f0 A) u& `
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Thanks
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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