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发表于 2005-2-24 07:24 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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" R6 ?: j& }( Y0 c/ u" \' C8 W* H  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. $ R+ Z; h0 x& P' S  U

% ^0 q' m# U6 A3 b5 {8 ~  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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5 o- O; ]1 U3 U# c9 R  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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6 H+ {( l5 i- p2 Y  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. ) p: u7 R8 R9 x

, U! B1 Z/ j) I# v  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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4 b' u" \4 u1 I, m7 ~5 @; I, P  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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8 m, Y/ n/ U: }, x' J  6. Their brain is still very young.
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5 h- }- u& H( h1 t: x  改进: They are still immature.
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1 C0 u& _2 d" E  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. ' p9 a: \& _* d* f
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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% V- y7 \% n# h7 A  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.   v1 s: ^; ]# f) w9 P; d9 P: \) n
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  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. + k4 O# v# G0 r- |

9 w! ?1 {+ W* L. i' Z6 S" c  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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5 r# Q5 j# b3 o5 q; z$ u5 B, v% ]  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. $ _/ M" i- T# w7 _7 c3 M
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  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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& C& \/ s6 n. V  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. 6 L6 N/ ?* Q, `7 {8 V5 k6 B

" F. F! [- Q, C- |/ s0 A  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. ) I, k+ X" X3 J

/ ~% p9 x, N& {* y) E6 {  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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( t5 Q' H) C( H8 m  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. : j. Z4 f" L5 |" j) J9 N: b
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  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. ' m: I: l' m& M/ S* \. k, X

! A) r7 }- u+ N( L, H  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 6 C* T) g6 f$ e$ v1 u

$ g5 X: K4 A. n3 l  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. # [6 U; t5 N8 _/ Y1 \" j

/ J# u$ ~5 o8 a+ l& @+ B" c8 R  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. $ }; G. [* ]9 v: E. F5 i& ?

# _2 @0 R' H) b3 S3 }  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. & r$ N7 R% j4 [

- T: n2 J* d' k0 A2 v2 F  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. 0 [1 ^+ S' v8 Y/ F& [

! B. X, J# ?4 ?- m0 {* Q  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 4 }. H- k4 Y8 u

! a! J/ I  e, E' s1 V$ u( t  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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. m& }) E1 m/ J& x, l+ y  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. , S, {- v1 M+ o

5 X3 U* v3 z! w! N  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly.
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) l1 ?& g: y& t6 C, v6 g% I' l  改进: They cannot think straight.
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  20. Money can improve their living standard.
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! K& ^! c  N4 Z  改进: Money can improve their life. : M: @; v2 T* B$ e& s3 ^
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  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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2 _* f4 h; ^# V' Y  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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0 K! b) S: y, y, O  A0 I  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. 3 H! }. y' J% B8 a7 B, l

7 [; a5 h! D6 O1 R  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. , p8 _" U% }. }. S9 e7 n0 z
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  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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5 g* t, }: d# [0 i: J7 J6 p5 a# n  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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$ e5 Y* @+ Z) ~! G, B  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. ! B+ P6 g  T8 N; `- d

! W0 F& f2 ?; o! h, E( P  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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) p- Z6 t* [& w" L; ~2 U7 s  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. ! ^0 F6 ^) g1 k# t/ R

  T: {+ u% f- H7 v- R& q& i  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.   `/ n: n/ _4 j) z
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  28. What's about nonsmokers? , V  |, O- N, t/ o4 W! I: z1 f/ b

) {  A+ k0 ~5 v& P( ]8 r  改进: What about nonsmokers? 6 z3 v3 F' C: e' {& g3 X3 m& Q) u
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  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? ! L% k( X0 B. g/ ~

! i3 B& m/ D" g4 b4 G0 o6 @  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. ! }8 m- m/ L; O! q1 Z1 h$ p/ L2 p0 W
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 0 A( v+ a8 o) V8 d+ [& b. ?
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English
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6 A8 Q, ?* v- W3 e  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? . W- Z) n$ N+ v& f

. v3 T" B, b# R4 ^1 u( S9 h  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? , E# Q2 _' M8 e/ u4 V/ k8 s
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  33.It is children who clear about their interests. 3 C# B6 k+ \" |, v9 M, u3 Z

# y* \+ L2 D9 n$ ]; j  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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* }$ s- K) P" l  34. I agree the latter idea. 9 q+ Q, l( Y% t2 T# T3 _( S
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  改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. ; x' i9 j  Q# X+ e7 @8 Y
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  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. ) G9 [- g" ?8 C& r) v# c) |
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. 9 O' ~. l, Y; N* G& @; I3 o
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  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. + U! R0 f( U5 Y* C; U0 \

; ~' e- P# d2 C# Q3 X  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. , ?0 L1 r" m* T( w, v, t% }4 a

8 g6 A' c3 B. u& \  38. No one knows all the things. 9 v5 O$ }: c# i" y$ L' [- C
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9 w, M3 ?, U7 U% W$ F  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. + B& d! C; p2 K) E8 q, x2 l. @

' r. N8 t: |$ a' B# \" u' U! f8 w3 N  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply ; d9 D$ L& U0 T0 f% g2 }$ [
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  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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3 m6 S/ x% }4 Y6 P0 n- H. m! v  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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  43. They will learn the bad habits.
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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3 P6 t9 |/ P6 k, b" C# D* D  改进: In this cycle, people make progress. 3 p4 v4 n- ^: A  E2 I) k

5 E1 x# [" h3 T( f  Q; x  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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+ \$ I( u, C& m1 Q/ C  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. 6 s, W3 w$ N7 |9 \) M) Y; L

( v8 n* ]7 x* |' v  ^  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. ! Q  z8 D2 ?+ h

/ {3 C4 M9 I- j7 A4 W  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. ( K6 X) D4 s2 g8 t

2 c3 j+ x  T8 |( a, m" k* s  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. ! P4 @( ~: G7 @0 l, e2 a+ }$ d
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. 6 M: t. C) u1 h% C* Y
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  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. % E- z9 M8 c2 L$ _9 }

: R( J3 C8 Y3 y& a  [' ?  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. " ^7 F$ _0 H8 k. I! W

6 K( Z0 _+ z8 j5 w: T  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. ' ^3 M& K: f8 b1 ?: s

8 j# b0 S" U  L" L  50. I felt alone. - O  X* t7 J6 Z4 H! D% J
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  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good. * R* [- J5 r2 P% x
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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