锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

4 n  t) s  q& O& B　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

! P+ c. a: w: c; \! I6 i$ b! a　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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' ^6 R/ e& t  a- [8 L　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

. C7 U! ?: ~7 j- I$ [　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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! w" R0 l6 ?8 f+ a　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

+ _% p, `/ K, S) c　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

. A9 c( w/ B& j　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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1 x3 o* C: _, y0 m　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

6 \! p' H# p1 @$ ~& D4 ?　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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! n6 b5 g2 F& F3 c　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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) ]. p( J% T% }( w! \; s　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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$ Z7 e1 Q( h2 A. K0 G+ a　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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0 h! c7 Y+ S+ p4 O　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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- {7 G9 @) ]6 a* G　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

2 ^1 @4 A/ B* Y& o7 u　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

0 u3 |  h5 ]' F# M9 g　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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- u* k9 w3 i8 c- W7 T3 W1 ]( @　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

; s# z8 e8 v5 a/ z  |　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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) ~/ O" `/ Y8 z3 Z& D) f+ F8 T* o　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

0 N% _* ?8 E2 X- E4 l& i　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

/ h2 ~7 N1 m* |　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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7 e4 U/ z  i9 z9 K# k/ ?/ s- c　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

: B8 a+ l6 ^; u& ~; u1 l　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

7 S) ~" g, h  o9 x! m　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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4 }' @0 A* I. T1 p, x. k　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

4 H8 U: e; N/ `- @7 o　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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: H  f% |3 t8 r　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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3 ^" z: e2 ~, D( {  l+ @　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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: F, Q( @' C+ f7 e& s　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

# M  ]% R0 }) h7 x6 }" L! X　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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* O9 B0 r* ]/ T6 U2 j　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

* P  r. g: \/ N( k* K" z7 j　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

7 ?8 m% X1 U4 A: ~* b/ y) O　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

7 t% ^# Z1 i6 e! S. l9 o　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

$ I" {+ U1 B2 J; ^& B% E) r　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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* w) f3 k2 T, b; W　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

# h0 P( q: |7 s　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

6 }9 C1 f, f* D* m0 J- ~0 g　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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* D3 X1 F2 n+ w. I# L　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

4 `3 S+ Y; _* k6 p7 O; s& |　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

0 Z; J$ ^/ [/ ?# o9 a1 F- N4 U　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

2 }, I* w/ Q6 w4 a5 y2 P0 \. a+ _/ S　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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2 E; [* I- u+ C5 O! f+ u　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

- ^: q8 `% C& l1 L4 r0 D　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

. c$ W% d0 _/ A  c6 h7 C9 a　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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( q# I: X) A( K( W$ V& L　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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8 l  I/ g" M. z+ @2 y0 _　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

! X1 `7 }. k$ O+ y　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

* r; I1 u2 B6 h# S. x+ E　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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8 n, _' J% B, e7 Y3 _' q/ O* X　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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& q+ ?: ^& P- Z/ C; v# x# J　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

# c1 H- l7 X+ y7 N4 B3 k　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka