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I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

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发表于 2008-6-6 22:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I need help after my second draft.
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发表于 2008-6-7 05:21 | 显示全部楼层
what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.
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发表于 2008-6-11 07:41 | 显示全部楼层
post your draft here, a lot will help
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
万水千山总是情
6 |  m5 b; C3 R6 S" b9 T) N词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉: L8 O& Y2 _4 e; P* G( y
莫说青山多障碍
5 H1 h# b1 p' Z$ }& L* c风也急风也劲9 N% G- x# X! v# [, l6 A
白云过山峰也可传情9 D; s) r) [0 B: u
莫说水中多变幻! A& u% r5 ?9 K) z  v/ i, p- E6 W
水也清水也静$ @# P1 r8 e! U9 Q0 L% r/ H  T
柔情似水爱共永
5 O# x# k6 ?# c" z7 P; J; j- h* ]未怕罡风吹散了热爱
8 p$ O/ i0 K% r! v# q! l万水千山总是情" e. Z; E0 N. u+ B9 C
聚散也有天注定
# F& M4 A# L2 b/ G' ^不怨天不怨命
7 j- O' d$ Y3 q2 e8 @& q; l; E但求有山水共作证
/ _  b: G; g/ K6 k" q5 `, sThere is love everywhere
7 D8 H0 U- u& Q% _; _Option1
$ u! c- V; X+ i! D* c9 \Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.' f: X; b0 y* `1 U: T0 o
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
9 n0 \$ z! u8 \/ Q, _Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
+ A% ?5 m( l$ }0 t" r- wHowever, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure., h" e/ N- e  X& i$ A" G
Maybe some failure will disappoint us.
3 s' G! P* V3 ^2 \However, there is love everywhere
' p0 J$ `1 Q9 }; y. i( T6 o3 T9 BOur love will help us to overcome every difficulty.5 G6 a9 V: l( K" o% \9 O3 J
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
# e  B( x& H/ kWe do not worry about too much future. : Y) c# K. m" @' L% C6 P) Y
Let’s just enjoy this moment.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
阳光总在风雨后
/ p3 ^& W7 M4 s# `, ?6 G人生路上甜苦和喜忧
; t- x1 x& ]3 b! H2 A  z愿与你分担所有6 h- T* |4 W8 t! q
难免曾经跌倒和等候
2 b5 ^  Z" V; P( w% T  s) A要勇敢的抬头2 ?# t+ E; H+ m* ^. r6 l
谁愿常躲在避风的港口: c$ m( P3 ^1 _% C' L+ N
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
% }; L* r- g: _8 e& x. ?* i& C, s愿是你心中灯塔的守候# x% c8 S; M9 e) E% J& ^: J, R
在迷雾中让你看透
9 y. L# d' U( D9 R阳光总在风雨后
$ M" p! a$ F* z9 V% f4 \' m乌云上有睛空! k3 P6 a6 W" A7 `3 [. I) v- y
珍惜所有的感动
: ?5 K0 ?2 t$ b每一份希望在你手中8 I  a- x- C5 x) J' Q
阳光总在风雨后
. o7 U8 s$ e3 f! Y& n请相信有彩虹
! ^/ f& k! \8 u5 [' w4 O% I) g( K风风雨雨都接受
& s. ?: g7 Q1 T我一直会在你的左右
% b9 t% u, U# k4 K( O2 c9 nThere is always sunshine after raining
' R% z5 o% |* ?8 B. N' T" ZThere are happiness and sadness in life.
- v7 [( X% p2 |2 GI will share with you everything.
, D2 a8 D/ y+ [It is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success." O4 l* W8 i1 T& v
We get together and bravely face them.
2 c  O2 W2 j! |, _+ w4 b3 X4 JEveryone does not want to have a common life," }3 J4 d; V& D4 ~  H
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
! {/ S- Q% [' S. {' u+ w( UI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
2 {- t8 h4 W. ]; H4 \: |; P( jThere is always sunshine after raining.
7 o" }$ \( e  [- b2 U1 C" lThere is sun above the black cloud.3 [: w+ ]; V3 u2 S- ~6 s5 v
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
: @9 _6 D3 y6 y/ J5 F/ l6 k! P/ iTake chance on every hope.0 ~& l! D" T3 n: v
There is always sunshine after raining.
3 J- \! G$ Y5 o( s, ~: C3 _We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
6 W  o4 K% \% R$ fWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.! @1 f; ~" p/ S' E* M  C2 E) M
I will always accomplish you in your life.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
让世界充满爱" v" |4 {/ g# O" @% f

! o( l8 t& T0 P& d" A/ l+ q轻轻地捧着你的脸0 q, ^2 g9 J# F- F; x) q
为你把眼泪擦干9 r6 {) S* Y6 L/ \0 c& I7 G
这颗心永远属于你
; S/ x& D, w8 i3 }- {# }& h% G1 |' Q' I( P告诉我你不再孤单+ V" I, w/ z* O
深深地凝望着你的眼
$ A9 b* Q, p/ v- s& V+ X不需要更多的语言
" m' x( F! K! ?紧紧地握着你的手
9 j0 Z* @1 ]' G  k& n这温暖依旧未改变
& ^) V$ ]* m. h& `' ?我们同欢乐我们同忍受3 _9 l& W' ]  ?1 s2 n% \* I5 w* E% T
我们怀着同样的期待- P2 m3 Q2 a7 e" q+ `
我们同风雨我们共追求
. f0 w: U, }( u% |8 P, W, L我们珍存同一样的爱
6 _* Q/ @1 c: I& d无论你我可曾相识
: G7 F. J5 ?4 Q* c4 v无论在眼前在天边
7 E" m0 I. n( x1 j& O$ v真心地为你祝愿
6 ?$ F8 m) W* w  j; D祝愿你事事平安
1 g2 C0 |7 A0 y; W/ a
, D* V( T' U4 C& a8 eLet the world full of love; ]7 Y# X! `/ M. D) @: O
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
8 ]1 C# B* k9 H5 f" @6 XMy heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.9 x' X* P$ z! m8 O
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.5 D+ k" x- N7 S) M1 ?
Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.0 j9 _! r; p+ s& l$ D1 R
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
$ M/ z  z1 {- G9 qWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.# @) l* W' _. e
We treasure the same love for both you and me.  Y7 i. A# l8 B8 _9 r
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
. x8 R- Z$ U7 }# H! l0 y5 n/ |I sincerely wish you are peace .
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:03 | 显示全部楼层
明天会更好
& `8 C& c( s% A$ F3 z9 n轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
2 b1 r' q) b# ^, C6 C慢慢张开你的眼睛* T7 l, E( e* r  f6 n4 Y, c
看看忙碌的世界$ P" N7 w  C1 j7 \, o1 T/ x0 ^
是否依然孤独的转个不停# a2 L7 D  ?" p4 o0 N* ~
春风不解风情6 `. v; Y: |  I0 A
吹动少年的心+ K6 F, `) T, q' K
让昨日脸上的泪痕/ [, [- D6 S, L
随记忆风干了( V. F# w2 L) P, t, p& y
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
5 E+ C- a+ {  J候鸟出现它的影迹
! I/ `& W5 Y! }. t带来远处的饥荒* f7 Z9 |1 B; V/ W! W. T$ L
无情的战火依然存在的消息/ k9 K! J5 V, w* Y8 W/ t
玉山白雪飘零
1 U* Q! t! z6 e5 K1 x燃烧少年的心
: ^! B: q, G: W0 Z使真情溶化成音符
) I& `9 z: [# v倾诉遥远的祝福
5 q4 J. y$ @& y% l7 o$ E唱出你的热情
8 Q. b( D4 F0 O0 N. g' v伸出你的双手
! k" \3 \; }. e5 o让我拥抱着你的梦
( c3 P6 a7 v& W, Y让我拥有你真心的面孔$ m1 U2 P% _2 A  \
让我们的笑容
9 t; J1 e/ K; z9 Z* ~+ o* T充满着青春的骄傲# G; F; Y& {! }9 k, d, s& Z. x9 \
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷  L) B% b9 B) l! J) ]* s
谁能不顾自己的家园
0 p5 K6 b+ u( Z0 j: r. b4 G; |抛开记忆中的童年
5 R. r- E8 M7 Y3 o谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁8 _4 |1 f  B& {! E# u3 j) x" \
带走我们的笑容
% u' w% i) q9 p: ]7 L- }" G青春不解红尘1 [+ t& Z9 X6 s, E
胭脂沾染了灰+ O7 s( p$ P/ L, E
让久违不见的泪水
0 J$ x9 C, r7 Z8 |  K( s' w: y滋润了你的面容
9 ~- E  j9 {2 y! \* w唱出你的热情( e8 t1 _& J; a) L
伸出你的双手
3 J9 f. `$ _! n# w$ M让我拥抱着你的梦
- l5 z' |6 F+ Y3 `  m让我拥有你真心的面孔$ R2 e7 h* N" t6 r  x- y3 T2 C9 c, w
让我们的笑容
/ ~& Y- V/ B1 E* }/ F充满着青春的骄傲
  Q7 t3 j! m2 T为明天献出虔诚的祈祷- @4 v/ D( Q  u$ f  ?8 o" J
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵7 N) {& ]3 E7 i6 x3 D
慢慢张开你的眼睛
9 J& w2 ?6 u* g& t9 k看看忙碌的世界6 N0 F( [* {. h+ s
是否依然孤独的转个不停9 w& H  b$ U( {: q2 F! {
日出唤醒清晨. z1 s9 s+ T8 p2 Y; K7 t
大地光彩重生1 }4 W4 ]0 F6 y% m) C0 o/ t+ }
让和风拂出的音响- L/ u4 n1 T. w3 }" g/ Z/ G  D
谱成生命的乐章
, c" {2 i) B, ^5 j* @; B. g唱出你的热情% k( E# G- A" h, w
伸出你双手
4 ^3 q5 O9 l0 A! C. p让我拥抱着你的梦
& f6 a- D! M- e  J; Y9 W% P0 _让我拥有你真心的面孔) f$ p! e. D' Q
让我们的笑容* W8 ]- _3 d: y+ O: y5 h, {
充满着青春的骄傲
$ G* R1 x' W. C4 ~8 A9 F让我们期待明天会更好
. J8 }  G$ T. iFuture will be better
5 M6 M; {* I& \- M9 D( y' SI woke up in the morning and open my eyes, , `0 |8 d& X/ m2 F) w0 i8 X0 J' [
And see the busy world whether the same as before.# S& s. ]1 R! k' j* ~  u, h
I cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.% q9 W" ~0 _8 h% W1 j, @
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
+ ~4 h& C# w+ v) cIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan./ B2 I9 B( H" K) J) R4 c) A9 ]! l
I live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.  {4 m6 k; C0 }! I6 ~
Let’s sing with burning passions.
3 h9 N8 k" L7 aLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
  g( @5 j; D( K# S2 V3 uLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.% |+ r6 k& A9 Q" r
Everyone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
- a3 F4 F1 y1 Y  R  WNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.  j7 [& f7 e& a3 k$ r; ?, |
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
' R# h4 v* m+ U5 vLet’s sing with burning passions,
4 _) k3 t/ ^0 K+ D  DLet’s shakes our hands with each other.- }* o% l; b. l5 v) [" C/ M2 C$ Q
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.( P0 [8 U+ k8 B  h$ r! e7 u8 d- ^) Q
Let’s have the same dream
1 Q  `( ?' {8 ~# U$ y) x$ gLet’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
* H8 M3 ^* a% h2 r, qI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
( p) }2 a) `9 g  eAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.; [( H# ?9 u( C  t1 B4 w: L$ d- w
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,$ l! N$ z% @- W: m! J# A) S3 T& ~
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
1 S- u& l1 c" t* g9 f And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
/ v# \$ Z( k* d% _+ ^, ]Everything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
) f* ]* i& h9 jLet’s sing with burning passions.       
) \0 s% {5 g* X5 z- U7 `* lLet’s shakes our hands with each other.. p4 J) e" E/ f9 q. N
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
3 s1 O7 ~4 e- ^  i' G" J. r& RLet’s hope future will better.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:04 | 显示全部楼层
Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.
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