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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,0 G9 |; O y0 M, n4 a4 I
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 7 h; y, K$ s0 g
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
6 K4 ~* O: u- k% k% \- S1 G$ }: Y; }现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.0 Y# b8 q5 Q: |1 i
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.8 e* Q: W! z* D! a" ]" _
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
6 @$ F2 u, K& w夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
$ T' j' z" d9 ]; h猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.6 P- L$ s# P/ A" J7 E7 a
就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
+ W/ i0 W: ]; l. f3 \我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及$ p z3 |0 i) }" U- H
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。' A3 m: o, L+ T( L
世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
/ v$ h$ Z, q+ x' \; q, A昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.* x+ ~+ ~! t8 e5 [ a, I
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up./ N: n# H3 w& }+ s& w
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 9 y, K, C! m w/ c
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?( D4 {4 B0 {5 `6 O+ K
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
8 s0 i5 S( Z( Y Z; G- V& }迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.8 T/ T! K8 J G7 X
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
- j4 f( U$ X" [( k% ]. T; i( T多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
+ e7 ~' t8 |/ \Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' …. P: ?: a6 ]$ b. i, c
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously K9 K- N8 v4 q
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
( K2 n1 i* ]$ o8 B' @4 H多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
" i' H/ e9 R, j! p为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?: H; A0 N/ B8 D( Z0 d6 X
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!" t0 [, u" D8 j4 Z$ a
永难平息的泪
! o' k2 ?: \. z/ N# m* }每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
?) v- o- Z+ A) K& T9 J! B; B7 ?~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.! r, B7 f3 _4 J7 H7 }9 a
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
+ K6 ]# D1 T9 k; t m! K让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，8 `, U7 a" z; z5 S5 Y( L
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul ( s9 T6 B8 p# b( {
一抹微笑；
+ ~$ V) A6 _. i* `' p一个手势；6 P$ [. P7 q% `* d
一片话语，
7 [$ O; Y( C6 v4 s愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、3 t" V- f4 r4 y4 ^9 W3 k5 [, m
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
$ |/ u0 a9 z( [# j( ?+ o心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.! Z1 C! C# D; b
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling% Y) m$ l* S @; [
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..1 {# n8 z1 h& b
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first," U, W, n9 g& W1 d3 n H
我并不以为然。
7 D& S a( ~. s+ y9 k) H) L8 S可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
" Y- F$ t$ _; W4 T; }% c慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
1 G4 D% z8 g4 C1 y被一种情绪所左右，0 J9 S6 V& l) ]" i7 w1 q
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .& e" O% s! C- ?+ Z2 i/ |
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you# f* p: B: L2 h5 X) A! |! y* I( a* Z
也不问我是否喜欢你，
; D. i1 R8 w7 G+ E2 w对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.
8 E( e% I$ _( y2 O- c只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you, ]0 h# b' X7 C. ]* w4 e" S
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
4 n8 b4 q$ ] m; a: G心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil( \4 l# e( a7 p- E9 g8 K7 Q& `3 L" l
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 9 P4 G1 B6 _; g( B) V
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
7 ]& g% Q2 H1 A3 N; G, {0 E记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
G0 x/ l# ?. r) j' D! C! d你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 8 A# C3 A# t O U4 `& G* K
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
$ c$ `6 s& I0 B5 f2 U, _) L" C% I哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
: f& }" X* {; {* Y' B一种声音，and your voice$ v) A: b$ r0 f- Z: [. ]
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
1 s0 g( @, z! Y掺杂著幸福的感觉。# y# Q: s2 R3 m
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land1 C5 s& x3 o4 d# f0 |
象雪花般撒落在我的心田，( b$ h7 M- g2 ]4 R* N
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.0 ?) T: Z. I' m0 @/ g
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
. l0 e+ ?5 |* g* X, F: I {你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss$ |6 @& E+ q+ l; n, j# ?5 H: V
有一个能够让思念的人，
& q1 D8 K# E8 N4 N6 u6 v/ `) `其实也是一种幸福。3 [' g6 H9 v9 u; D4 J+ ?
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. ) x" a h7 s4 m, S" o1 `
柔柔的海风，
5 R. F8 f9 m2 J0 L) ^/ J! `: B5 k甜甜的夏天。: C& H0 ?) ]8 v1 A0 r: _% Q
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
* U' [" {. F$ q& s/ V: ]- ^, t只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.2 W1 d8 k- S) ~. E
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
" g! c8 X9 f8 x想和你有共同的情结，9 x/ E6 p- C- B/ ?0 {( [( e3 z
共同的心愿。
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: E5 L; s0 V- S* U# P6 m( J好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you+ B0 Q. F3 ~6 X. K" h9 A$ T& w
一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together
$ t8 U! a: t, ?$ G8 W- D或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
0 H0 o. ^8 W8 U* E- |或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.
! B {; a8 h. f+ U$ B' f; Z『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ? _5 `( U' U& D5 I% r( C. a( _
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, . n: ?" {: o: J/ s
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
$ G* ^7 X7 G* v( B5 u/ D W& Z或是轻轻的一吻，/ C. M8 j- i* @9 O* i
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』# ^7 v3 F( }" N6 S9 |2 X; N
就足够了. That is enough.
$ ~- F b Y- T这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! ( L; u) S& T6 Y# N$ A7 \( u0 K+ m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout./ p/ m$ G. }: I
萌出了芽，
- z) u2 d' h- l! ?" [! d, r& r/ Y) }一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
/ D: \2 e, L6 e! n: l浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.& B4 N5 Y/ U8 E0 _3 S
如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
/ n r2 i' s! U+ X能够牵著你的手,
A: F6 J* e0 [' Z$ K那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
+ ~" G& C: A" A2 k I4 F让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. & F n* u$ |2 _
慢慢地细读，# w# R8 E& K8 p
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
* O% a( w& a3 Y( Q: c- x) b在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
6 C/ |# v/ y' E2 O5 f我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
' D; v8 ]+ l# b( }就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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