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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
' ~7 K7 F- C+ D+ Q% Y2 }- ^/ X$ L,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. . `: q1 s) h: T# U& `
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ) f1 `) C; [# k$ V
现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.$ x# v. m% _' W! i" o
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.: v" I* Y' A* g: B. |) b; @: e0 h
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
) ^8 a' d; t/ a6 E夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
- i* E5 U6 B* C6 x. m& X( A猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
0 ?% j: d4 d( N" h" _7 d3 J就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.! i& m+ Q4 |) g# g( Y# L2 x' q
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
' Y* ]$ L Y5 }) K那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
( ^0 e9 h, Z7 S+ H6 n" n9 t. S/ K世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
O9 ^1 N- k# [" U/ b3 Y昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: z/ r7 j! b. l想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.0 R9 s6 L( r' q
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
5 `1 `% H! v7 _5 k6 g" h ?寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
+ }- H- R" ] {1 d$ e1 X醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.4 p# I' W1 r2 m+ n0 l
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.1 p5 ?4 m! g# R0 E6 e3 f7 ^
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.) `7 k5 a* o; a7 a2 P
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
8 p0 h" N( u, o( A; R" kWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
& ?/ d4 ?0 |( }多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously+ W. n# ~1 E3 o2 t
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
0 K' c! u4 |2 r8 M7 J2 k" V/ n6 G( G多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
5 ]( J6 L1 L5 M- ~* o w为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
( B7 y V$ ^& e% U' E多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
; q3 P ~/ A8 [, c永难平息的泪' ]9 ?& S6 J5 a' s- n- y1 `
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes2 z" B0 R) p: l& W
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
! r# B& A0 L, `) ^当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.! G- c R! p9 p3 R' K/ ?# @
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
" |# Q7 E% U- j! _) k. j你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
* ?" _% r- w. H- d7 i2 L一抹微笑；
) }% |& w6 w$ S3 A2 C一个手势；- j& k* Z: C7 x2 T* n! `' c' j
一片话语，& Q/ N# `! _" x$ Y, N* _
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
/ [3 N+ F0 q& z( _3 p/ ]; }( t1 H% a明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
9 ~# I* _/ j& |* \$ d8 Y心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
# x/ r2 H; u2 R% T$ `9 F这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
2 Q; t' P) R4 c; A也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
# n/ X5 a* h& x8 {+ D8 c6 L5 X起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
4 v" S% K: `6 f; o我并不以为然。
/ Q$ ~ i G0 Z可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
?9 v1 e* Y% g1 I2 z7 j4 T慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .7 s- B5 |( G, @
被一种情绪所左右，
$ @4 Y! w. u- ]2 L总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .& w. Q0 w% @9 o" o2 d$ F$ J2 E8 v
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you0 w$ Q& u; N( h( }7 C1 W5 _3 Q( J
也不问我是否喜欢你，1 Z" d( v" a9 N3 Y# b
对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing." k. d! r/ O9 R1 d
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
/ s0 R* n3 s" _+ u8 r; F! r+ l- Z3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
- |$ ~/ A( N; ~3 W5 U心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil& n: Z( n/ Y& J: x
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 3 n6 {% B+ m/ P* C' I- `) }
你的身影已化成一种氛围，; L t$ P2 z2 S& x* y
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
^2 ]3 {/ B* C% X你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
7 E* R) O$ i: }% d; g2 q随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字$ [: d2 A* m. ^) r+ v+ X0 P
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
& F) \7 R3 h w4 r2 v1 B一种声音，and your voice
, l/ X6 c9 c3 r% S, M$ Q9 O4 t也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.- ]- X8 x" ~( `5 i" h
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
( B& B& g( {7 e+ T与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
- S. D: I) A. r) f0 r% P象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
, ~/ I% P- T( _3 T) ~5 M! Q倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.5 [) W' Q0 Y. k
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
( y5 j8 W9 `- S, R' i- x9 ~你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
" U* Z0 ^! J+ I. L* ?/ e有一个能够让思念的人，
$ U7 `6 Z* w3 t" @* S; \ z其实也是一种幸福。- E% l# P' d; W/ t! f9 g
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
% @& c9 ~- V7 a* v$ {柔柔的海风，
8 O0 C3 s5 [. W0 f甜甜的夏天。
+ ?) a. I9 U7 C/ m& E6 O# V一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy & O0 H' Z+ |1 s0 E1 s. t8 n
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.0 ?5 [# r, Q, ~/ N; l' F7 F
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
" Y5 l) e4 d' p$ m4 F想和你有共同的情结，
# p) X, z& P6 H+ S共同的心愿。
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, z& l8 D& o, U/ a9 ^好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
+ ?/ ?" A H# V9 @# q1 q一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together
+ V6 O4 r( R- t7 W% D f或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
' P( j0 B2 ]- d0 A" x% H3 K; U或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.
7 X. H: w) U* f1 [! V9 |『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?6 w, N& G! g5 L
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, # C8 \; g. L: i" Q: n! K3 k1 m0 {
浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
( D/ @: b9 V8 A' Q2 _& k3 l或是轻轻的一吻，4 E" p; D1 s/ ?% Z
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』2 q+ d5 o5 B* u! v, [
就足够了. That is enough.
: u- s( z: x/ u5 }这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 3 t2 v; P) l) z, h( E1 `) p. O" m
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
; H$ N+ [1 G4 O萌出了芽，
. ^4 S; \5 `8 F$ V7 m# h' H一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
% k4 P `% _2 c+ o: X浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.7 ~, a7 s8 F& X/ B7 ]* i! b
如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand! ?/ P, b' l: s7 A" D7 h
能够牵著你的手,
7 M# \2 |( s) Z9 D那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
, t% F7 `+ H' s+ X让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 6 S" t; t* }. u1 l. `3 s9 x; s
慢慢地细读，
! W& Y& w8 c- s, V# A1 t8 i& w我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. D. x! E% i! B& n: v8 W" k
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
& Y; g! P# G" s" ?4 y" s我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
' C7 T# n" H$ o; j j, |$ b- |就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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