TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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( A* g$ n$ j4 G) `TWE作文模板汇粹
. Q! N, s8 p" q' J8 x* o(一) 对立观点式
$ W% {( \+ a4 x+ ?0 N6 [9 p1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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/ z4 D# |4 X5 S" [(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
" l  f& z! ~9 y( X- @% w0 AThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 e9 `; l/ J8 fA is superior in another way, this is…
1 S8 k0 q/ R* H' Z2 ^It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) B8 \9 U( H5 h) E' tFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' ]- b/ q6 |' f1 m9 O2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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- b9 ^. X* H0 |' e# r6 U9 n  B" LTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
# X+ Z) b+ }1 B9 f9 s0 }8 k$ u5 tWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
6 t' \& Q, F% d; x7 @/ n7 o& w, uon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
" A) M) b' z1 _3 Q. r: [moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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6 A+ L& Q6 s. k* e(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
% Z6 P& x" A# M0 ~1 L' n8 h, DThere is no denying that…
) C) l1 b7 F% y6 E1 R. RAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
" @: c0 K  y3 I/ a7 KFinally,…
# k% V+ {) u3 X. SBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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( }, ~: ^' h0 K" i２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
+ l& n% {1 ~5 z7 @, PA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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9 Q/ O: v" r3 X  }There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
( h/ S: D) i2 z% r# @$ hWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
/ H. L. l9 T# w/ i  rWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 a$ @! J2 @4 R5 QC is superior in another way, this is…
0 {% ^" M9 I3 I* {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' L' s, h8 l8 }+ `5 J) hFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
. o! v. o9 Z; b$ O(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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; U) P- `. J% X2 F4 {' U* o(四)原因解释型
2 b) l* S7 G' r$ i1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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$ Y& J7 F6 ~6 f+ U( s陈述这个事实
5 J3 K& z. S: Q5 \7 W2 gAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
2 h( g! p1 d; ?+ v- YXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
' p  {- ^& @. T2 e+ x/ }+ A8 LTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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8 l6 P1 d6 G7 Y3 f0 v2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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3 R1 ~: X9 N$ W! i* k/ w, aThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



  f: s6 q" L: |" S) r3 eOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



$ y/ Q; I9 j+ pa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

! t! P1 I* c; {6 s. G: v3 I[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]