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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架3 v$ I# @5 H; I1 L" N
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(一) 对立观点式 / n6 h. d5 T8 s$ c' G* y
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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5 Q/ f( U; g+ N4 `(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
* j; w2 E" w9 B4 d" u2 rThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
" S5 ~" o  d" [  X; Y0 Y! n3 l- v6 p. RWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… $ e4 o" f& N# ^6 B1 {
A is superior in another way, this is…
& D% D4 d- a1 Y3 oIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 p7 n& o& k5 Q' g5 aFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ x9 U0 i) Q: R0 A( V* f2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) / W9 ]$ Q% l: C
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
. M, t# I5 \0 o. r1 oFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... + \9 V! g" ^1 a3 I  i
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… # n3 f" F4 F8 l
moreover, B的优点2,for example… 3 `5 \( B% a9 q# j0 D! s/ T+ V
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. . T$ o! Z" C5 D. d1 M. ]9 ]

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& W# ]1 R1 K) o(二)单一观点式 $ X8 e& H. K2 A
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 7 \- ^$ e5 N, c. o. |" G

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$ n2 v# ~  h7 m3 @$ A/ z/ d( }6 r! g首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. % L: V7 c' f9 T/ J* b
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
  e9 \5 O  P1 Q& [1 t2 SThere is no denying that…
3 f( T' I; c% f$ s+ `Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
7 x! U8 D- L. D# ^0 R( m7 A, k, |Finally,…
$ ?  D0 ^5 l, b* GBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… : l3 L" b/ {3 s

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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
$ P& O/ ?8 T4 F; T% M! w* ~2 p( v(本类型只agree) : ]1 k" q  h8 j  a! T2 f( h" W4 a
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 6 G4 B* \: B7 e3 h3 P6 v
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… % b9 Y  W- z; E9 @, m
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ! A" D1 D  K3 x
A is superior in another way, this is… 6 ^2 J+ Q$ A0 `. ?! B, H; @; E
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
: Q% }& N/ L. [7 V) p, C. i5 nFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ( A- G/ A- Y+ {: f  ?/ E
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- B4 N" E) k( C& t/ ~- F(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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: `3 O. N* ]) A" P6 U/ SThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. , Z1 g% R% g; {
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
# d3 ~0 @7 Z8 v: q5 @5 Q6 d5 qThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… : t$ f& W* |) K  R% c4 t
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
) s4 A& \8 U0 J1 FC is superior in another way, this is… : I% B+ ~: n2 _
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
% M% k2 f/ {! y6 O4 dFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
; N8 b! d& o/ |3 w9 M% ^(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) " r& e1 {) o' P1 C3 P
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/ \4 r" Q7 D# V( u(四)原因解释型
3 a+ j+ k3 `* L2 E: d! m2 s1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 3 X( X( Q8 O2 H( g  P9 C. m1 _

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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 4 O3 u' d6 f3 a9 o4 w+ o# ~
One of the primary causes is that…
4 g( G  ]: c. |2 E. nXXX also results from…
* f- r# @3 h: B1 p0 L% }… is responsible for xxx, as well.
2 I: ?! n" o0 A+ D7 KTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX   b% t; L6 o# P9 ^
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  |8 S& m- {( k2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
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) b# x# `5 Z3 u" b1 @One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… ! c$ S7 l# ~$ ^! {! n' R; \
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( {6 M( t- x( K* A4 l! N/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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+ ]! Q# Z& S/ ^3 R# u" s7 R9 ]a more subtle point which we must consider is that… 4 g4 l9 m5 m9 L5 m0 o

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In addition/ furthermore $ j- W8 a+ ?! c; T; c# s1 z2 Q
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?- Z) o& W. z, e  J+ ?/ y

# I  l: e# K8 ^3 x4 W5 W再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.* [* W* Z7 C& o2 b  Y( M% E3 u

4 d, @3 k+ ]$ e. E# G1 o[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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