TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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6 R# [6 i' p1 m# Y6 O; \6 _(一) 对立观点式
( t5 i4 A" |  F" w( D" ?4 B1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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" O! s/ V0 u9 {! T: E) N(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
% z0 e+ }2 A0 x' e0 Q3 P9 CThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 Y1 b  ]4 U, Z! `4 aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
; B9 l, g6 j; _; _A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# _# u  {" S4 w' kFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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& G8 {$ N4 J3 G: W2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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$ T8 p9 v' I4 STo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
0 d3 v5 G& }) T  {! D' x, f' lFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; c2 d" c; W" E8 o4 uFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
3 u: {. M' w4 emoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
, z0 y% W, c! L1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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/ D; p3 H. q/ r/ m首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
, H9 t5 y9 `! K  s) v; ?/ E  p, JAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
: m$ W5 e$ T1 P4 w, |Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
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Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 [# X# z. U, r7 E1 G! l- W7 V6 M8 ]  _(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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5 h3 \2 S5 G# Y4 UA is superior in another way, this is…
1 k; W3 v' l7 I1 E1 N+ ]It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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; N3 P+ x+ ~+ a4 sThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
* u/ K- ?+ R0 }( r0 pFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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5 o9 |1 K' f, k(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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2 D, O6 u3 ?! n8 E% q/ C陈述这个事实
1 ?  \# E  Y$ a+ DAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
& r5 [& C7 C- h6 M( y$ {: ]. A  b8 rThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
0 i. b+ v, Q2 R" m. q0 ], n5 w/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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% v% i4 t- A' I( I9 T, c$ [In addition/ furthermore
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4 ], R/ ^9 K. J5 r1 GIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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