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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 6 ]8 \# i. q: S8 \2 z$ e8 {
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) ' ?8 t1 C" X3 H2 p7 z4 n- h
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# f+ |* C0 \3 Q4 i& L" |(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
4 f% |- [5 I0 `( I% c+ zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
- |: L  ]' }9 GWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 ~  K# v" s" n( RA is superior in another way, this is… / \1 c' @2 a1 b/ |. t
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… % u, }9 u7 a$ f3 r& D
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... - Y3 ~3 g0 C* o( Q# {' ]- Q
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9 l. H! [. L- a7 B2 H  X2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) " p; L) S$ ^( l6 r. {: G  K

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
: A  s; T; s6 n0 aFor A, A 的一个优势
* l1 _) J* ~$ H8 w% @* w% tWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
' u' f2 W, r3 i. w8 E3 IFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
" l) _4 x5 y+ a; s' y# Ron the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
4 r& Q! X+ ~) L/ p3 Tmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 a" [3 Y9 R* Z; b* cFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. " f2 C- {6 k( v8 I
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% Z  c2 }* d  g7 K' A  s) z: f(二)单一观点式
" @# X4 \$ J, r1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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7 |( i! r) d( N: F# s/ N, Q首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
# M0 W4 M* `2 m) v- d5 C5 q% sAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. . F: j- _/ v% \" @0 s" N
There is no denying that… , H2 c/ R2 t) i2 o
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 1 k6 m% p- `! h  s: g
Finally,…
1 @  W! Z* _, M! C' dBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 7 D# C) P/ p2 P8 _
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  n1 u- H) @7 I2 P6 z2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
# c+ |4 p0 v8 K* |* n. _The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… * G+ K# ~, j$ G6 Q
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 D4 h3 N8 \2 ZA is superior in another way, this is… 1 C7 D- L* g! K! D1 W
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… * K8 {$ J/ y; k; M7 g0 T* u
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 $ G2 E$ |8 |5 n$ z, Q$ X: i

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" c  V9 E, z4 e) f* GThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. ' R0 A8 m" P: x: i7 @' q) i5 e; a
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
5 W- T' G; Z3 U* H# \$ x0 NThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
& k* ^- @' o0 h& sWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 5 `: L3 G9 R: J: r# Q
C is superior in another way, this is…
* e% w5 h5 ?  n' N6 ]From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
0 i- F6 y. F3 `6 yFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
: N0 Z' N; u: K8 u(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) $ v1 l3 \" a  S) o0 h$ d+ A6 ~
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. ?+ L! p  d5 |0 T) L8 ]; @(四)原因解释型 : M7 w0 k& m6 O: g( {
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 7 [; K/ I0 K; f) M
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% N1 d: Q% |% c1 X7 A  D4 O1 }One of the primary causes is that…
' l$ R" A4 y  Q+ o, sXXX also results from…
2 i1 u7 H' B+ a6 ?… is responsible for xxx, as well.
, b" h4 \, |6 x, }4 HTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 6 f' T* o7 f: O, J9 T3 Q
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 9 }) h2 L$ s( q3 V
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
" C2 G1 i3 O7 n) E5 a/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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6 ~, f) k5 }- y; H, [: R" D) |! Z9 za more subtle point which we must consider is that… ; L0 ?5 p# [1 V( g. @6 k

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?/ ]% O4 S! V! f7 E, Y! {

7 M% C# L  m* M! P% O( q+ H再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.7 {3 b' N& W" s' {5 Z! J

- k$ K! v" o: y[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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