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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架1 u7 X6 `5 M# |: M
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(一) 对立观点式
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 9 M8 V9 j' D* I8 \4 i5 E' _2 r4 o
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… / u0 A* t$ Z6 B% p6 b
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 F9 G# d2 I4 O9 C. yA is superior in another way, this is… 1 k$ q+ p. V% D+ T( C" i
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 Z- u  f9 @. R0 dFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' G/ P  R# @1 P( ]; R7 c/ U! @2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
! M( Q1 d* e! U' n1 ^For A, A 的一个优势 + o5 I; Q7 G7 P; e: g
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
% m: W( i+ }. n! [, PFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
5 X  g- ]  F  F% G+ x4 ^on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
6 S1 J5 S% ?+ L2 gmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
6 X5 b# h4 ^' g- ^6 }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. - ^1 ^: m) g- D% z1 [* ~  l6 F5 V
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(二)单一观点式
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
6 \! \* O8 Q- XThere is no denying that… 9 ^( E3 o0 ^8 T( }1 Q9 U) X9 y
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 6 ~+ G7 z" Z7 f+ K% s+ Y, _" F
Finally,… # W  C/ g7 q+ V$ W% a! C
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… $ @) K- Q, U1 i( z2 g' v9 O
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7 P4 P0 |2 q# j2 Z/ ]' G# e2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
! C. {& {- X0 t+ A# O% j$ f(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
3 {' ?0 ?  e0 {$ P  l4 A) gThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… " G0 P4 y4 G% U) g- K) H
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ! S  M+ w( u+ s: m' w" O) J
A is superior in another way, this is…
) R$ U6 j0 m1 u- s( YIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… " f7 D  q* l# w& Y' O2 Z7 B( j
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 0 ?. E9 Y/ _6 t; X+ K

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$ L4 n0 d( ^4 A" ]- ]+ ?(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. : H1 B. [: W  R5 G8 ?
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. / }3 e- C$ K3 t
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
  K) D1 Q3 r2 {* {( `/ c5 ^7 BWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
9 Q9 W. Z: u$ {6 UC is superior in another way, this is… . s% S8 w7 s# I( k. G
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
+ T1 z5 K+ T' v1 A% e5 bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
3 t3 t: p( ]) H$ o$ `3 X(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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  x6 d6 V* {2 P5 x8 ?5 p2 c(四)原因解释型
$ K0 g( z$ ]1 f5 a/ F1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
, d2 _1 ?3 a8 _; _" P/ X, EOne of the primary causes is that… 0 r. ]+ J4 X) ], i
XXX also results from…
8 O! `+ \2 \+ U7 q( C1 i- I… is responsible for xxx, as well. 1 \: t4 w* r) t1 x4 R# m
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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背景描述
  H( r) J6 u* xThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 8 U  z! V8 ^: f% M6 Q& g
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 2 ~$ J1 L& ]7 c2 j0 r; F5 T
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… . I, f1 l, I7 j$ |/ X

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& c+ J4 z( v7 i: i% H0 NIn addition/ furthermore # b" {( c+ ~  X* Q2 f& }( H
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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! B0 z1 m4 C4 V1 i5 J+ j$ V  |再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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- b) L; l, G$ f+ l[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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