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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
$ m% Y9 ^& h: E$ f- {(一) 对立观点式
  m: P/ m! m: k) A( |2 o1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) / Y0 _/ i$ h2 ]

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
: P$ }- d1 I5 i' E9 F0 hThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 3 ^" D; {9 H2 |6 Q9 S
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
& B$ S1 Z; g# D4 h" GA is superior in another way, this is…
, X6 j; i/ g1 q  B+ r! s8 K. k% wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 9 a2 h$ x+ r, ~* A
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) @( [# {) V3 K0 ~  a  V. }

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 7 W& I+ \* a! Z" |4 }- K
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$ E" H5 S" t) C! g+ B( G' ~To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. , T; g( [) N3 s# G" l: h8 j1 u
For A, A 的一个优势
( V5 i$ A6 C! V/ y9 p3 YWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, ! {& t) k5 f4 k) C, ^+ F4 m
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... . e" O& ]# n' M# P3 Z
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 0 G9 I$ C2 Q/ n% j& Z/ m
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
/ }! p! r) H/ A5 `/ H2 x; I. XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.   T2 p# {2 J7 t+ Z; C: z
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- x' n7 C/ P' {& r9 S(二)单一观点式
" Y. {/ u; x1 m1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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# q) s# j9 D/ d* r" d' s  m8 o首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. $ T- g9 ^; W# L! |3 A: T
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
3 \. N4 X) F: @/ D# gThere is no denying that…
1 E2 i" ?4 {7 Z$ ]  n% _Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
7 i2 d4 u& ?! _# h$ e, BFinally,… ) Q+ G" e: \( o/ g5 D) y3 e
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 1 Y9 ~6 S1 A$ R
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) : x% `- {4 c9 t6 E
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
& D1 C+ Z( h, W; sThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… % P4 k3 V, t' r# R
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
( T, r7 ]4 d" ~: vA is superior in another way, this is… * Y) i7 T! O. m/ r. `
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 9 A2 _* q8 V! P
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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1 M% E/ J& ~3 s6 K(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 ( Y4 \; ^( A7 s! A) W0 Z( C7 Y' m3 X

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# i; k- R3 u% K& ]) h" e" ^There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ D9 }* }. S9 J, aWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. - T6 X1 O1 ]  k3 o- ~& w. J2 J2 X
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
/ G- @% T! X0 L1 {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
2 w; t8 l* S0 c7 |/ KC is superior in another way, this is… 9 M  A3 l7 Q' X
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C : f* ~9 C6 c8 s, ^& o6 P3 l& E
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" L, J% q: R) j* r8 ^/ A4 i7 |% J(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) ' \- [) M# a1 w) h" s+ H" @

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4 i4 B6 J. J% N* w1 Y% s(四)原因解释型
% t* ~2 r, v; f. T8 D) \1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
! ~  T, B# b2 X' @. x- ^7 Y# o: YOne of the primary causes is that… ( {. G% q, E& O" e3 ?& O
XXX also results from… + W& ^+ n) x- y# r5 D3 r* ^
… is responsible for xxx, as well. 9 U# j6 v2 E- e" k1 s7 V8 k
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX # }0 G5 U: n+ M: K& t* W; U3 P

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 5 s0 D5 g+ W5 v7 \" a

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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. }; e0 V  H) r4 y; Y8 `One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… % K, m9 A' A. R, X. j
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 6 Q# P: e( p* T- g% T9 n
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… + h) k7 u; U3 n) Q& a& g

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$ Y* x. k& N* m- [a more subtle point which we must consider is that… : c6 T$ |! X0 }0 x) ~
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5 y  W5 R' p  E% _& Q8 ?" HIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?$ H% t) h- N# s; g  y

( h  g: J+ }+ N" M* ^再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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* ^" D: F- M# D7 t5 G8 N[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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