TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
7 L& w; J9 r' |/ F2 C& Q4 W5 @1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
8 a& E2 M1 V; y- BThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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% \- F: ?2 k; P2 _0 z/ ]+ r0 S2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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$ |9 r7 c% v: d, ^, i& e: j) ^1 WTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
0 b6 ?2 z/ t+ g0 F6 G& LFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
) s- n) R  d2 A* A8 ?4 Y& UFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
' n; M0 P/ Y- @: Z* Ton the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
# ]: r* B+ \- Y% h/ _/ ~1 Hmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
. |# D: o; m1 b4 {- Y( o; |From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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( j( R6 d+ U$ O& n) Y(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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8 w; [  G5 o3 N首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
+ h) m" Y& Y. l, q% A5 yAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
2 H+ s" {! }* O/ h4 q. sAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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8 {+ J- @4 j7 V1 ]) D  e(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 V  O7 [: ~/ X- y" d0 ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
, |3 M8 i  E/ r0 l; l" Q$ X: lIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* D+ {9 J3 Y. [2 l& J0 {From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
$ v) P+ T' j& u$ k- Q* `# \8 l  VThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
- o/ z1 i- V1 t1 QC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
* y0 `/ k! J3 }5 d7 ^1 @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
9 h8 A4 e: f. b4 A: d0 S  F  t) h(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
: M( v! X# n- i' J2 Q# m2 MOne of the primary causes is that…
" s! ~2 `: r" U( PXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
$ o" s) Y5 c  K6 G3 M; Z, aTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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7 l9 i) P; _% p- b2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
5 {/ c+ u$ y( J/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore

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" |6 L' E3 u2 E' U' Q/ FIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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& b, P' D$ p# o" x; V) s8 r0 I再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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