TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
* y. ?6 x7 H9 N7 U1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ Y; @4 q8 @; Y& fWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; B& [' ?; S- W7 YFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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9 Q% i3 L4 e' p" [2 m4 Y4 UTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
- b, r: Y& |7 v4 eWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
& |# q/ [: o" T* ]. Aon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, v) z  `6 j8 s; Q+ ?moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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0 H! Q, o# ?7 C(二)单一观点式
6 R% P+ ?% d  H7 N# _% f4 G( O- _1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



/ P6 i% }, J# @5 x首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
( X8 ~1 Z" i3 h" V# YAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
/ r6 Q( C9 n) v- S' d9 k# HThere is no denying that…
2 m6 j& W9 s& J* o$ q2 B8 ZAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
9 Z% s6 g9 R: [# m1 S5 S0 O4 DBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
, c! ~; X3 W  Y+ {4 SThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 y* h9 L  T" d) Y) s( |A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 _/ t5 ?" F% B. \From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' ?  `- \; u1 B7 G(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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# O, F: e+ ^$ Y4 VThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
5 z1 `& O% u4 X% F! R4 H; fWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
, J. ~; @* @" Y( W7 nC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
7 a1 g: h+ T8 C- h! g& ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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- X3 g5 R* ^; f% ~0 K(四)原因解释型
4 m& l) N8 l1 L% f( H6 y- x1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
( M6 H# Y# }9 \2 W5 J! EAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
; w7 y6 j* h( [) w… is responsible for xxx, as well.
3 T2 p) ~" n' [To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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% b, f% A' K9 f$ g; E+ BOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
" r: k5 A9 U! R; B8 g/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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6 Z$ O$ t4 g: Wa more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]