TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
* Z/ j3 _. _% O1 ?5 f9 r1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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- E! {9 e( X$ \3 q/ r  w5 Z(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
, r8 B, _- U3 o) }' r9 xA is superior in another way, this is…
/ f2 S$ |. H% {It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 U* \/ P, |9 c: o2 o# E; a6 X8 YFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



. T* W# L) Q% N- s! N) L' S" q3 x0 zTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
# _1 t: {% c% K: Y6 B2 ]: r7 LFor A, A 的一个优势
5 n; ?7 z; x! }* YWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
$ |9 }/ {2 @8 r4 N# Q2 S4 zFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
, z" @8 V6 y# ^- W8 r$ ]After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
: c; e6 A+ ]0 k; oThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
  [1 X0 ^1 N; t2 g& {; V* @6 XFinally,…
; h4 A2 [8 ~0 c0 b6 F7 U) Z, eBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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* J0 m5 r6 b6 U; n. }: U２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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. I0 M' p& x/ {. L% o  c5 V(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
0 d$ B' N) {3 n1 S. y- R+ EThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  d- t! v2 U6 C% gA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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+ v, @+ l' I$ Y% t5 [( m' F0 tThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
6 }' F  m. }. v* V+ R$ I- F* ~% qWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
4 N0 S2 ~) g# O- Y  ]The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
9 M: b- u5 \0 m4 [What is also worth noticing fact is that……
- {- s! P3 ^+ k4 `, B" ZC is superior in another way, this is…
) ?( v/ l4 d$ F) L/ ~9 x7 k. DFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
- n' w& m' ?1 wFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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  a: ~. j4 T# ]! F  `(四)原因解释型
/ ]0 R" u: z5 @7 d3 ?& n1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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# A1 |) N1 U1 S1 n+ v" S陈述这个事实
( ^( T- ^5 |! D7 ~: `2 ?Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
4 s7 O+ E6 ?2 KTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
+ _" [/ p. R% f! R: r6 B: Z/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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7 F) @( e7 c  q* o! j) }) FIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

7 K! W/ k# x& h( v再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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: @2 F1 R" h5 c" o: _[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]