TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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" z1 o6 H1 [- p4 Z' d(一) 对立观点式
* U8 J  t4 G, s1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
; H( M5 W" s) n& |) T9 dWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 I6 x6 N+ E( H0 j* mFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
) Y4 H0 N; t& Z; ^Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
( u6 x( d" e2 K4 ~9 q5 Z& TFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
" d) X' f' y8 I' son the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
# J, A+ ?- I! F3 M% |moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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( [* h' W6 @5 A2 B4 }(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
3 ~" e. k( s3 W% P% ^! I) uAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
8 v6 a7 m$ r' ]) P3 GThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
/ Y$ h) h2 e; U+ {; f4 f# V' u, HFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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$ C' \: b' C( X. g' H(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; @9 a6 X' [8 z5 ?$ H9 `9 NFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
2 ?6 _/ G. i6 V% e0 \2 hWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
% \4 }+ o  N6 j5 l% |) oFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
: d7 q* h; M% t# c/ L1 q+ ~/ X5 U(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
* a1 f, B6 O$ x& J1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
' t1 Y$ e" l- a% ]4 L2 b; eXXX also results from…
' e4 Z" Q/ C! j: y3 U7 N  t% b… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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9 d! V$ W2 F7 }: }2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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# ~8 J& V1 ?$ h% K/ P2 U% E( ~3 A, mOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore
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# X+ [. y4 A" p1 `In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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  ], ~& y4 e0 C2 G7 l) y[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]