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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem! h6 ?% q) J' c) t" E% _
Thanks a lot!!!
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, h# g- u6 ]& }% HFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you J' k+ q$ e* w
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
# }7 z$ J; y$ e4 Q' z: X# F Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
' ]( D; L3 q0 N$ y Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
! C; o, G9 g& [7 V% g Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
# Q% X/ a2 H. K Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness " _! G1 V4 q o/ p) S5 Y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
, P' r: k. ?; L* y8 ?4 { somehow I realized you were still in my heart
L4 y4 e' [: X2 c$ p$ n6 V& z somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness { W8 _5 c$ ]6 R0 u" |; `
somehow I lost myself inside again
# k" R0 v, p4 t: fNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
, h% x% d' g" C: q somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
7 f" _. d9 h5 w& n% t. XFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................& k: K* W6 D% {9 o6 y
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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