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I just wrote a poem( a. l8 F, k. A% A7 |
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.3 D z0 {( `; z
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem% M @/ G( S/ K$ ?% e; }
Thanks a lot!!!3 T {! Z$ A8 i7 V8 x
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# @6 D [) g/ z9 S2 xFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
E# W) S/ O8 r& o ~ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us - }2 K: @$ y) D) A0 w5 I) c. ?
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) {; w$ u( b: E* L* @+ g
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 7 j( Q Q( Z Z2 i& I
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
% P! V- l+ j; Y2 _ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
& }" h: j. |9 i J8 X9 t/ x/ [4 c# CHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 4 u" M# u( w. i1 B1 P+ C, x
somehow I realized you were still in my heart W- @" s1 M% |! |
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
( E* K2 L: c. @9 L+ o somehow I lost myself inside again - Q7 a2 S! b V+ N
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
. n; N2 D6 h$ b$ N" M B8 N4 _ somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
/ G+ i5 s) Y% M) k& vFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
8 _2 a0 n T2 |Basically, I almost finish this poem
" q# V& K3 ` b* N. f1 R& H ]' s$ Q I am 一个人de精彩2 m; Y& u& z' w4 G% f
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.: l4 G- a5 V; `8 u6 p
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Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
