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I just wrote a poem6 s H/ z5 B# N( u; p1 q, V5 `
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
( \: J' d1 m$ R' THowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem+ K% J+ }# Z: W( Y
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
2 H K2 o; W$ W: J5 e Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
: g( K8 a5 p! J! _$ ^ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 2 |7 ~% }+ f6 y& {& K' p
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & k% K4 v: h" }. b
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
9 H7 R' {% z0 I/ e4 u Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness |, ?* y/ \% U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 7 e, p3 G& g9 }* a1 Y
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 i; h: C6 ?. M; X l) g somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness; r, b7 b6 i6 n- x B
somehow I lost myself inside again
; K( S$ y& U* f1 qNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog + A, m1 F0 D3 V) A, Z. V
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# P, j/ O8 s; B4 p% s
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................" r0 W% a s: ^, C& r
Basically, I almost finish this poem
$ A0 F- K& [: d1 c7 { I am 一个人de精彩" ^& b7 U- j4 _9 O3 J
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.: V3 W1 B% ^4 d1 D8 Q3 E; Y: Q/ x
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