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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% \/ J) D6 W* ?) x: d/ }6 `4 c  H

: j# x- J& E& C; i2 C3 v     One day I always remember
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" O1 y9 ]- R, k! m5 l  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was8 X' W* ]: u( H6 B; F

, ^# o; c. u7 y- ^exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to( M! {1 F8 C' t, M  A
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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/ @/ ~3 H2 ^3 s  t8 c little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid6 o/ u/ F7 p7 C' _4 T5 B+ e& F& J2 ]- G

0 B. z8 ~/ j9 _" R2 m  u; w was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely / j% s7 c& b5 N

5 c' Q; W( u" h1 s) a( m# v* ttrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since   p: ], o. t$ C  m6 O8 v7 W
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing- |/ Q2 w: N5 T. |; a
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 6 N; E$ _! T+ T3 }6 w0 ]1 ^
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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7 Z6 p8 G7 m9 w" \; o! j1 k; z& e1 Cdeaest daughter.+ U; h# A4 ^0 A" P$ A- P# }2 a' O* i

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will+ i* b. M; t( `5 n
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.2 `8 Z1 K  h0 z! P
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!8 W* H, p# Q, j
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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