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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember
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7 t$ j# i* m2 ]. |" Y　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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, V4 I9 _! t1 J! A& y, c# w$ ` every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

) K8 b7 V( W( W8 G/ Pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

; V+ ^. b" |0 f, k9 I on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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. H: P5 t$ d: ?2 ^6 Z7 J; F" }/ mfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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1 S/ Z% L' R9 |[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
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OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！