作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

. M0 q3 L: q) ?! T$ X4 `exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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% x. E9 l2 Z- x& l4 K; Lput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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0 [& T% o. n1 {4 a& o9 h& @+ xthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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* G" k8 @4 ^0 N( A; X/ K0 \ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
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OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！