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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)$ E' }& e% c  W2 z' T0 U+ @

3 v1 N, y3 l8 G- L3 v     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was6 \7 r7 V6 w0 B4 d4 j! o& x4 H+ U

& D( ~9 \( z7 L4 ^7 Z; I* e/ aexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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4 ^" d$ z) M) {7 H3 Y) jput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my# i- l/ V1 a6 D( {( J$ d6 J( ~
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,$ y9 {0 E4 M; b6 k5 q- R, f

9 c' Z: |6 H1 b3 d- U every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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, X/ J$ D  D/ ~& n( M  W) y5 ^+ Jtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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" }  T! ]6 N+ lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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# N! Y* K- b3 M7 @' P. u; P9 J on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 4 i/ }! h" V7 D. a
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 7 b9 e5 c- X5 S) m
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!- X4 W! e7 b. D4 \5 n
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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