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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% Z" \/ j# L9 [  d; k: L. W
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was; b8 R, A4 i5 _' r" B

0 ]- N9 a3 p& c3 y# b& w/ vexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to6 G. R6 K7 Q: D/ i5 s9 Q% _9 v5 s
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my- j/ D7 r9 P- U$ Q

& e; R1 H$ X( i3 I little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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: U0 n8 {, O6 K8 a0 Z every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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3 P/ C9 e* y5 \/ Dtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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' v7 R* @# k: r' N7 g: uthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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2 `( [' ], F# J9 i7 k) Y! Q( [# h on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard % G! e' @+ W: w. }, o! Y6 z) N1 D1 c

. R. B# l! W7 f: ^# Pfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will6 ~: a7 S4 L5 D) S  P6 H  d! d

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5 _6 }6 b# q% H5 }[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!5 T1 }' ~. L3 @9 |6 \9 q
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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