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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)8 w9 Q: \0 B4 J' e1 a- p; a

; i& r- Z- p' p     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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2 x  X  C  \  @' |exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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8 f/ A! o# v9 R. V; ^put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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; l! g4 S1 R% y little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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/ }! C/ }! k$ k( K1 A. R was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 1 e6 Y4 H) [! Y  f4 k3 d+ L) v! M

5 r7 ?- _8 K7 w5 U; Strusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ; E" Z% q% v, I0 ~* e' T

7 X5 P7 X/ j; L4 hthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing1 C, h/ ~) ~9 h+ H8 l

+ R1 M+ k' J+ [1 E. L6 {+ ` on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard - b. g2 ~6 J- H. D/ e

* e* ?. E, O' }8 v+ Hfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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; g8 t# G7 Z/ f# C! k, @deaest daughter.* b( O& e" ^/ }$ w# C9 ?
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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4 r# f* T9 \- H; | never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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) d+ \$ J2 U' a8 m! b[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!0 F! ~. @4 L% ~; R/ s* J' g
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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