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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember  i% o' m, Z1 p4 U; g8 Y5 z$ L
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was& o' I8 g) m1 @

9 F. g& I" I+ o/ uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my, o# w1 H. }0 U2 b4 {
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 U& Z) b* d/ {; R' g4 H" L8 U; P. R

9 D; @6 A/ N9 ]- i. ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing  d. \/ N" l$ `6 [
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my $ _5 N3 u; o2 c9 A9 u( u
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deaest daughter.
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4 ]+ S8 g$ M9 J0 c) O8 H2 Y3 ]' MAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!) a& T3 a& d( B# V
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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