作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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9 W' S$ K0 }5 U, F. |　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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- E4 j* g1 D9 h9 Z2 C little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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3 S  ?. o/ z' s! u9 r every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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3 I1 l- x4 q0 O/ ^deaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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OliveOil

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connie

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