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翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

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鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你是老杨的话,你会怎么回?翁不愧为才女,英文情书写的如此煽情,就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的,把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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4 o+ g( P& t, q' uCold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
$ j) u0 t( E% V. _& ~! I2 v! wwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your6 e: e0 k1 U  e- G6 a, K
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
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* `: |; ^2 S+ O此处冷,彼处更冷。枯叶凋零,君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁,含泪而笑。君热泪盈- \! Y; W' t& p. z
眶,喃喃自语,难言再见。妾心沉落,泪涌似涛。
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' I+ _! d% T+ y8 B$ aHot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another) z# ]% \" U  |9 }
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.$ P: x. K5 I. j5 P( r
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
8 R$ Q+ s7 ?" R% |' mface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my( ^3 k/ `% Z7 e
hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手,共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧,长发束于脑后,英
& j9 ^& x2 q! ^8 j姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转,君执妾手,疯狂舞曲。; N/ C2 x6 h. i1 N0 V) _
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Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
, J+ @9 r+ H6 J5 N' rgreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on7 z8 O, y3 Q) _8 E! e% f1 ]$ S
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece; V1 }% a3 @& R7 v
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
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灯酒相辉,芳雅相应,祝辞笑声此起彼伏,芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁,美目7 c: i# K8 F% Q
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作,使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
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Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
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good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted' t( E; W5 D9 x2 M* a/ I7 y( f
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I3 O. O9 Q2 P2 k/ a) u1 H
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
  u5 P$ `  t" Mdisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
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往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾,滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还7 q, k. v( e; t- d
休,但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝,妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹,君已窃妾心,妾当不可漠
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, a  O. z( D. Y+ v* d, W3 k于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失,然无可善终。妾信某日某时,妾将告君妾心永驻。
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0 I% U& {2 C. r% aMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
8 p- r* |% T8 w, V" ?$ Eflinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
1 P1 `) ~* J3 |" q6 c% tyet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow. N! O* n4 ^9 p# _6 G$ g) e: ^
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
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妾于忏悔中挣扎,不时退缩,犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚,然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
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The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
/ I' N# T0 w: j0 ~, ]; i  |Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I4 a# _4 _: f; G6 Q
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
2 H9 V/ W2 V. ^" pnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.# V( S7 }# _+ s7 A& d; v
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钟声忽止于急雨,乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑,黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
% `8 @) F2 z! v7 O/ q而不可。妾伸手欲触,无他,但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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( b1 U+ t: W3 |- T( Y! DSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
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鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:32 | 显示全部楼层
有人问过洋人吗?这段英文咋样?
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:46 | 显示全部楼层
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表   }% {+ o" _# v$ R. q
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
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你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
鲜花(7) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用,即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 12:02 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表 % \' O3 A& H' r3 D

( S' o3 v' K" Q5 j你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
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- [7 |$ ^, m. C' g俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
鲜花(10) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 14:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你又知道是人家的情书!
鲜花(28) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:13 | 显示全部楼层
为什么要翻译成妾啊,那么别扭。
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鲜花(129) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
看了这篇情书,偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
此老杨非彼老杨也!
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表 2 _( k, @( P' [1 E( j+ K/ ]! j
此老杨非彼老杨也!

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) @4 |4 b! E; x6 L. p0 L# i相信地球人都知道吧~~
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其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”,俺故意改滴~~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:07 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~

0 `: e7 B: F2 u是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:23 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表 % e# k) Z1 f; a) Z9 f. X
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
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我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 22:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表 3 w1 i; a! e+ X

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( ?- G' m! u. d1 X# U我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。

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猪兄可怜,严重慰问ing~~
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:09 | 显示全部楼层
翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:10 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?8 ?% g$ Q  D0 h0 w
晕.
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表 % ^! R7 p# R9 C8 h
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?) K7 v8 Z* h% _4 @4 ^2 V* A( w' O
晕.
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7 F6 v) i, l! J3 r) f! B; [不看年纪,看地位~
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:01 | 显示全部楼层
初看标题,我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢
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