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A long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.This big forest had a small og cain.; Q8 U0 v- S' r5 [
The hunter lived in the log cabin.Every day,birds needed to the forest's lake bath.But one day,the hunter ( x/ y2 b; u t2 ]- [
saw the birds./ E8 E# G( d. d y/ s
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[ 本帖最后由 dandan1234 于 2007-2-7 21:25 编辑 ]
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& \8 u2 ?5 N2 `& l1 I3 ~3 e rA long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.In the big forest, there was a small log cabin.9 ]6 v1 u7 ~9 N( Q9 f, {2 A+ l: _! l
A hunter lived in the log cabin. Every day,birds needed to go to the lake in the forest to bathe themselves.But one day,the hunter * s: ~( [4 M3 J8 n' Msaw the birds.
原帖由 紫色辣椒 于 2007-2-8 21:39 发表 ! f+ \2 F$ v Q9 G" l# x0 P2 `+ sA long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.In the big forest。 there was a small log cabin./ G5 P H e: S) U
A hunter lived in the log cabin. Every day,birds needed to go to the lake in the forest to bathe themselves.But one day,the hunter 7 K5 Q9 E# O/ R3 I
saw the birds.
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+ |9 K& }! b F 6 R; r* I9 ?( p. c用。。 2 l& b" U0 w0 G" P& `. o- j Z4 a 0 X/ e+ ~: g/ e. mThere was a small log cabin, and a hunter was living n there % z) m8 F% s" c5 ~3 j3 Q. b6 @* L " s( m" P. g: R( J* j会不会更好呀？我不知道。。可以54的我说! _5 V2 p7 c! J$ Y4 N. N9 Q
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还有。。用 needs 在那个地方才对吧？ ) R$ ^2 f5 t! T' U+ m# n3 F8 N) W2 g# [3 ?. O7 ^% P
ps：54=无视
原帖由 墨林恋 于 2007-2-9 15:45 发表 % z! W- T! l. l. `% S 0 y3 F( W2 l, j7 l2 z& q) { " A3 N& o1 o+ X & b2 `$ {( `( g i" z; {- V用。。& N4 d; [1 S: v" K E9 e
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There was a small log cabin, and a hunter was living n there9 X, y3 i0 M. r. p
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会不会更好呀？我不知道。。可以54的我说! W) {- m5 _0 f5 w9 l
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还有。。用 needs 在那个地方才对吧？7 w9 ~& J2 e9 R4 E, B! t, ?8 t- e
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