SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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  V( N* P" ?1 ~, Q! m9 Q3 nAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
1 G& N! r% L1 R6 s* ]: _6 L( hFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
: w4 ?- {% r8 kPower locks
2 P+ t& A: H) K$ \Power mirrors
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Power windows
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Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
) A$ ^& _9 {  Q0 k1 kIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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% x8 g% z* J7 `Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
8 ^5 Y! ~+ p/ y+ P8 ]* q( Z& aPick up on March 18-22.
: }( g9 I( u3 z1 J) TCash only please :)

兰君子

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  A) t& ?2 B$ B0 n& ]* @Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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. [; S2 \5 w7 x* ~If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
6 T. B* M( k: J# c IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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+ u. `7 F4 {: ?3 v# v: [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

& I$ |. }: R0 D这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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0 Z# ^5 a( i( R9 L2 D0 ?By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

0 x* l% J0 _; A3 ^/ ~0 `: K哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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4 q( ?3 {0 S8 M- J; l& lDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# E8 V# J9 m2 U7 n/ q  t& R# b. sFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 \6 q$ J- j7 H5 y2 a( p8 UThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

. z% `$ A2 @; o. t! hSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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- Y7 e2 e2 n/ p4 p+ b- w0 c% [Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

# l* T4 v- |, p9 A0 E1 y; n5 ?3 c1 O"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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