SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
+ j1 k: o4 e0 hAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
! N: s* t3 w$ z* }5 w9 yAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
& A# f, w/ M; C* JTire pressure monitor system
% Y* [6 s7 i  E; n3 j" {7 v. yInformation system
1 `' Q, T4 O. ^3 ]6 CCentral control locks,doors,windows
# H" W" s3 M% N8 v0 kPower locks
Power mirrors
5 |4 D4 T+ I6 D. X/ RPower doors
4 j0 o) ]4 _) P4 }$ KPower windows
8 x/ l( r1 {9 r% M, n. PChild safety locks
# c/ R! p# i5 L, _+ R6 wRear window defroster
7 [* R9 `; Z6 p6 K+ BBluetooth hands-free operation
8 S7 J( _! g$ a" M' z9 A* tRadio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
# W- `7 t5 L3 \2 t# uIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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5 Z- ]$ _( t* R' h& }/ xPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
5 C0 i$ _$ C: i. A4 [% `. U- bPick up on March 18-22.
7 ^/ X. e1 h  _! qCash only please :)
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兰君子

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' C2 U! C$ \$ m: p5 B  HDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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2 n6 k, |0 P! EIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
  X  T! S1 p1 p! a IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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& V  @: G  v) c0 x& X/ J9 EDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

$ s% W4 X; @) |' \Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
9 e5 I8 N3 V4 X1 ~* B3 b# A- I+ mThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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6 h& p2 k/ I: }) sSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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