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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
1 l% y5 o1 |2 }# tI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  5 E0 N8 h4 c  `  q3 C5 H
Dreamers* Z% t1 W! I2 x/ W& ~- ^; j8 X
Savages! Q+ P+ L# b/ F5 X. @2 [
Poets8 s" J# s+ f4 e! s* ?6 b" {
Builders of canoes,
1 d0 c7 E- r; \) z2 _6 ^; oBlack smiths
( K5 O0 S1 @" X/ H# FMurderers,$ p% y9 l' [# b% b; \+ K0 e
Risk takers,# |6 e( T0 g0 A1 @* R6 m
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder * G% b! }6 X$ n, J' n
As I think of what could be. ) r0 V; [8 g* v* e0 U
The world is so big to me
" n+ W& T* v/ E0 m" SI wonder what it means to be! q4 w/ `! n; ~! x; G
I looked up at the star and smiled
! L2 x$ C, Y# ^* Q9 x7 }They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。% F6 J$ _, T" t5 y
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。, K9 r# J8 v8 n5 C# E' ^/ f5 k
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,: T- K- h/ j9 G* _  u) {) \
A poor old Guy;7 ]! M5 q8 D2 \+ p# R$ D
Legs in a bonfire,5 ~/ S2 z$ f- R( M
Head in the sky
4 g4 T, u- D3 d, @1 v1 V$ i6 GLonely, with the feel of betray
% a& w  F1 r8 _# e( ]Heart empty and hollow
' P% t0 p) g" g* j) [5 {; aAlone I stand
1 l% u) [: @. u9 A1 C$ }6 PI am useless to all
. T" P* x% C' P6 T$ g5 h$ b# o( @But I wish I were a dove $ }! ^% l! o& a% X- X
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
8 F/ l/ a: p; C8 Y  r3 \& O) \  RI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
! u  Q- `+ u+ U9 p! II sent prayers to my god2 B* q3 Y! r+ ?7 h. a* F" D
Though he does not answer
# l; f/ u- C( ?' p; x: ]- `He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
8 [% ~0 z- \; C0 i加油加油,经常写写!
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