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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, $ w3 d6 g0 l: W: h
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves    n; `: q2 U( a0 e6 o
Dreamers
) F/ _0 I8 ~0 n/ N5 a2 o1 MSavages
/ v( F( P- \* o, M3 P7 X, w3 NPoets
+ N0 F& B$ t% v0 F1 NBuilders of canoes,
6 m) j/ n+ K, SBlack smiths% g  A3 e5 a6 T/ W: n' c
Murderers,
; q- r: s/ h5 G# a$ t, H4 bRisk takers,; @- v' M8 O8 G" }3 D4 a4 D/ P3 ?
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder / w) J1 ~4 J( F, g$ o  N
As I think of what could be.
, m' _. z" `8 Q8 FThe world is so big to me ) r9 t. \0 ]8 _: d* N1 g
I wonder what it means to be
5 A9 n& x9 s8 e9 n) tI looked up at the star and smiled
# F. X+ c1 a( t/ N1 `/ AThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. " m% p) F5 Z& t0 c! B4 {! Z

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
, S1 U  C- k) K# ]& S/ R评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。1 U2 m+ k  t% Q& s$ a1 ~
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,3 Z3 y* ~4 Y3 |! @! p9 x# k6 s) Z
A poor old Guy;
% m4 l2 E' U6 Z& x, f6 _0 k0 h; M& ELegs in a bonfire,
5 V+ |% W  `* J$ ~: KHead in the sky
# X9 W+ L- P. g0 _6 }8 [: GLonely, with the feel of betray8 y7 n( T! m4 K
Heart empty and hollow
: B0 x' F4 D& h: j  dAlone I stand9 @  w" ^3 K  P+ J
I am useless to all
3 Q' x8 M  t" {4 M% q! gBut I wish I were a dove
( R+ f/ e" B" EGiving myself to the world, to the fire( ~/ n: v1 z& ^. r! [
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
: I* D1 x/ ]) R/ h. FI sent prayers to my god
! s) {8 Z, r1 p% e+ ^8 eThough he does not answer* @4 e: e$ ?2 C; ?
He bless me with the gift of hope ; f9 e1 k  g, ]! X  x9 S

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
& _- y- @. \; F9 `$ V0 C9 _加油加油,经常写写!
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