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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
8 L. E" U2 D6 K4 c1 s: O. }I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
6 o% I( e6 G( U; p3 C$ S- a, MDreamers
! j0 Y3 M. _8 R6 b$ z  Z1 w* bSavages2 l4 ^# l7 [1 c  c* d
Poets7 p: m1 U: P- J; c. @( b; M
Builders of canoes," r' R" T) z; p/ {+ o
Black smiths
5 Q' k( r9 U  A) a6 Q) NMurderers,7 e3 z( A* r# V6 x
Risk takers,
3 X; [" A9 X+ R: GMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
& N% N/ l+ C, f. vAs I think of what could be. 5 B/ a! `+ D$ N, a( X
The world is so big to me ( S$ w# [; Q3 c" U; B1 m+ q' `
I wonder what it means to be% ]- \$ ~. t  W0 ~. l  }# q1 ]
I looked up at the star and smiled
6 m7 o' B- Y; K; uThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
: H( F* y- x: x+ d6 ^& G% Y3 {评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 A" [" j8 B$ X8 g9 J3 t" R顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,8 d+ i6 x/ N+ J6 e  U! E
A poor old Guy;
4 t0 V: a8 n3 I4 t3 u2 L; V3 X2 zLegs in a bonfire,
: L4 ^3 @4 E; I. S1 C' `$ ]: dHead in the sky; _6 {, W- ?; X% k; N2 S) A
Lonely, with the feel of betray
+ l: S4 C; Z3 @Heart empty and hollow
# L7 i/ g9 [, TAlone I stand# T: Q, W& P5 k  t- A+ h" I5 U7 i2 @0 f
I am useless to all
7 ]2 u7 T2 C) Y& W: IBut I wish I were a dove * o& N/ L" y) c' _/ `& V9 Y( a4 R  L
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
, \) L: a5 C) e$ Z# o8 ~I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind# o$ D; F& [5 d% t$ ?* N' V
I sent prayers to my god
" J* Q* C2 G' }# uThough he does not answer* x; u$ B5 j5 K+ n
He bless me with the gift of hope ) M. S4 x& C2 Z4 O3 f0 z2 C" c

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。: U% x4 A2 K6 g* z- h- o
加油加油,经常写写!
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