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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 T9 @9 d" G! K7 k
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
7 M; x: D5 b8 L# [0 D6 i1 D! zDreamers
* m0 L% U* u6 M# @+ z( U9 W5 \Savages5 _  i% m) K: d
Poets1 w7 u0 ~' ?: U9 K
Builders of canoes,2 u2 b: @, M/ X! K  H! Z
Black smiths3 S* A. U" [$ _; f- g5 I4 J" ^& r
Murderers,5 o, X0 q, z9 M7 H' f" v
Risk takers,0 K+ V7 J! Z% E8 a# Z' T
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 C# F- `. p1 A
As I think of what could be.
0 J3 [+ `' t) I: Y! XThe world is so big to me
  {$ S2 J3 D8 t5 VI wonder what it means to be
+ b/ c4 g" o" E  K) @I looked up at the star and smiled + l0 L0 ^" d1 M% Z* `* J* \8 g
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. # @& E: R+ j' w# R
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
9 Z  U" G9 h( u9 {3 T  ]评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
, y/ J* d8 v6 x, V8 T顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 o: D4 R. w4 o  Z3 hA poor old Guy;5 [4 K$ N6 J5 l/ |/ ?, W+ T
Legs in a bonfire," Y$ b, m. S/ y+ C. x0 \
Head in the sky
) ^# ], A! G/ \Lonely, with the feel of betray6 ^4 O% `  J) O5 f* \" g
Heart empty and hollow4 _" J0 u8 w# v$ F
Alone I stand) t+ m, k. B; x9 L4 p- z4 H
I am useless to all 9 U! Q4 ?3 }7 L" q# n4 C# D
But I wish I were a dove ; @+ ^4 H3 z; e2 _  Y7 D5 e6 f
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
& r1 ^# f: N1 y+ @5 v% |I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
1 {' x/ v. Y) B# |7 W$ ]: n7 _& dI sent prayers to my god; U+ E" z' c( p8 \
Though he does not answer
! h% W0 k: N2 @) d9 I4 }9 }- s, Q: ZHe bless me with the gift of hope % g. M/ w6 }  ^: R0 x
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
* s  J0 i. G$ x- y& @加油加油,经常写写!
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