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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  Q+ R; n0 d2 J- ?+ e- zI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( K+ U6 c2 c" k
Dreamers4 N: }7 H3 @  s3 l4 W
Savages
3 j" O# H+ [) ~& XPoets
% b8 m8 U, a% O5 C; R% KBuilders of canoes,8 K8 |  z! V+ r" L$ \$ z
Black smiths
. {3 W) [7 P3 c; m9 RMurderers,  b% q0 f& K. Q+ e& @  k' {
Risk takers,
: A' A3 X! |+ m6 FMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
0 u) q+ g) o/ L& t$ V; SAs I think of what could be. : C" m# {2 Y: P6 ?  F. k4 `5 a
The world is so big to me - N1 E: h% |: y* O. y: C* l: h
I wonder what it means to be! Q. [6 l& u  w( ^# ^& m  z+ Z/ y
I looked up at the star and smiled / v, C+ a' O7 m' `2 @6 L
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. " @& k; H& t" V" A$ d
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。3 G7 @9 e8 M* a; V$ M
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。7 T* i) Z2 Q' m' E4 Q8 Z
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
- J. |% I* d) W% z: Y' fA poor old Guy;" h4 Y! o; A5 c0 R! [) u  L
Legs in a bonfire,
8 N& U' R4 w9 P% F6 }9 B7 j2 QHead in the sky
! t, K# f( X5 q* OLonely, with the feel of betray% O7 ^, r5 \0 v% i& M( S9 F! Y9 O
Heart empty and hollow
/ {% W7 L7 g6 @" IAlone I stand+ l% M- X. h3 F  C6 x+ g$ s
I am useless to all
, z5 c9 }7 q* _# h0 IBut I wish I were a dove " f1 |% w; ?$ H0 U8 b
Giving myself to the world, to the fire$ T0 R2 O3 g1 M
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind; o) J" H+ Y  @
I sent prayers to my god
8 L' G  O; K  T6 s6 O/ J# f/ yThough he does not answer7 M1 p7 t* r  v$ Q: v4 T
He bless me with the gift of hope , ^6 ]- E5 s" \3 G" a
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
6 O$ i4 ^! ~4 }/ @加油加油,经常写写!
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