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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 6 j) e/ p3 V8 u$ g. O
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  2 m9 ?  q8 \- j& g
Dreamers
- A. Q& E' `  ~# S7 DSavages
2 O! H& a& G# B1 d( @0 k# v$ O* OPoets
  o4 S4 Q7 Y+ E8 YBuilders of canoes,! c0 x  y0 x, V
Black smiths" V4 b  R1 T% |4 G# h5 I6 i0 y
Murderers,0 w$ b! z  h/ T# Q+ e! ^1 G( o
Risk takers,
, S& n) U) z  J2 D1 ~: gMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 @: w% J& O! j* ^% J" F6 A2 _
As I think of what could be. 0 V) M. J6 P# D
The world is so big to me , ~/ \# |, {6 I% e4 w
I wonder what it means to be6 o: G" N& L+ ?# }6 y1 E' S
I looked up at the star and smiled - T6 d6 B; e% H1 n& @  t
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
  U/ x& W% x( k# L1 I0 }评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。0 f- K. p6 W  r8 T! h- l' i
顶一下,支持支持!
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
; N4 P7 |; Z1 A; pA poor old Guy;
7 l- R% x+ n- R9 @- s0 e1 WLegs in a bonfire,  j) g  p1 z' y1 r
Head in the sky
. {% r( Y8 i7 E+ P; jLonely, with the feel of betray
/ l3 U) w/ O. u0 }; r, k* Q7 s9 LHeart empty and hollow% X2 |) i9 @: w" E" H% c. w
Alone I stand
* R  [" M; ~, g5 ^8 \I am useless to all
4 m  r* J% F. D; ~* bBut I wish I were a dove 1 C! G8 @! t; o! n5 c* `
Giving myself to the world, to the fire% E8 K# W* g1 S' }
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
1 A- F& P; l, I" ]; yI sent prayers to my god' I1 ]) k8 Y, i; G9 j0 S
Though he does not answer
0 j; j8 c1 F0 A5 SHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 k# A# A& Z* e) w( u2 ]& a加油加油,经常写写!
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