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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, & M% i% a! r5 m8 {& n" K9 W
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  , q  c4 g1 b9 z
Dreamers
0 P$ l/ K- Z- ?; jSavages! j6 j+ m0 `. i2 ?
Poets
2 N5 k. c# U, C, U: `Builders of canoes,
1 p% j! x$ s1 J* K) O/ NBlack smiths( O, Y9 y: b6 Z% g4 N' x
Murderers,
; {$ P  W- F% ?+ }# u8 G, o: IRisk takers,
' c7 l1 I. l/ E8 Y- i  i2 X; S5 dMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ F. v3 L1 \) z8 S
As I think of what could be. 5 C/ @) f( U2 T! A' j8 M
The world is so big to me $ ]' F; K" W7 M. J: ~$ c; v
I wonder what it means to be* {/ F9 A# R2 u' n7 ^5 _6 D
I looked up at the star and smiled 2 l% i4 f  N5 [1 g- S( Q
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
. @. {5 Y* ~  K3 S+ x评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
/ P$ f' P" i9 v5 _3 m' y! g' a0 B* D* e! T顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
6 `# g. Q  {; T, {- SA poor old Guy;8 k% r" x1 g8 N$ j+ y" D  E  q
Legs in a bonfire,
* r* e2 m4 J6 X+ Y* lHead in the sky/ e* K$ X; J; ~9 e
Lonely, with the feel of betray+ v2 _" m: U3 R/ N: x8 ?% X
Heart empty and hollow
% q  l8 {, b) I* K: n& j. H' QAlone I stand
0 ~; H8 o& V  n* oI am useless to all 8 C  L: A0 ?  X
But I wish I were a dove
- {; [' G" V$ s8 I6 s  v- eGiving myself to the world, to the fire5 J# W* B5 U' r, w% W- @; y
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
; W9 O1 W! D4 P* N4 X3 ^0 I/ HI sent prayers to my god& o# f/ y( x" c9 H- \' x6 T
Though he does not answer
  l0 z4 D0 R1 RHe bless me with the gift of hope % v* s0 C) W0 M* d4 `  }0 q
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
) t: s# t" o; `) u6 m& \5 g加油加油,经常写写!
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