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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
( A0 x5 v5 _" r' [I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
$ I. B  t4 b% K  s' ODreamers4 O7 H/ ]* F& }" j8 @2 B; E
Savages  z" f- m3 h5 [" S% p/ x# Y. e1 r3 w  E
Poets
$ C2 W) V8 W/ P' Y7 g: P& h& R6 B' bBuilders of canoes,& i) x) k+ B  Q
Black smiths
$ h$ W2 ^* C/ N8 C2 z- ]- L$ ZMurderers,
: h0 K/ _" _4 Q' I  Z8 kRisk takers,2 K0 G) p4 ~4 f$ ?" }$ M' [
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ O! n7 N" X4 x) J' L
As I think of what could be. 3 B6 ^( B, a4 a3 G3 g
The world is so big to me
- x' V) _* T1 Z9 E3 C3 S/ II wonder what it means to be9 b) ~+ V% n+ Q0 j6 p5 d
I looked up at the star and smiled
5 b, V( T) T. w/ J6 HThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 4 P- F) {& f' f* ]6 q; S6 Z
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。! \; _' ~- x1 ?* @6 Y/ f- s
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
1 ^0 g) W, ?  ?' Z顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
& I; @3 r" H, D; V- ^A poor old Guy;
) C) h1 d: {0 J1 v/ i" D4 X" nLegs in a bonfire,5 d4 {5 ~- ?) U' V* X# H% p
Head in the sky
- {9 p, t9 W8 R$ L& q0 @Lonely, with the feel of betray: D: r% V& K/ x! z9 X3 \$ N: ?
Heart empty and hollow
, l1 x$ P( K: l& r1 kAlone I stand
4 r: q) p  L/ w" R( oI am useless to all 7 ^1 {: b* I/ V2 y$ g' @
But I wish I were a dove 4 c, ~9 @/ f! _4 o8 j5 s1 K
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
4 z- r7 v3 }: G: J8 |& u/ wI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
% o3 c6 y/ v+ O. e4 M8 j  i3 v- tI sent prayers to my god
  l7 z2 f6 I# M0 I7 O/ s7 yThough he does not answer/ Y4 x3 \1 s3 H/ X' N: d
He bless me with the gift of hope . m" M, l: h0 O  Y+ y$ c% h
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 n' Y9 z4 F/ V, G! [加油加油,经常写写!
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