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应该是 I have been tutoring IELTS and SAT since 2011
q5 \# e) J j9 d9 k8 ] r第二句话 应该加上主语 I just graduated from...
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' A. z( R$ w4 H1 L0 ]' p既然选择了用 help sb. to do 的形式 应该保持一致。help you to pass, to achieve, and to advance (advance your career 这个用法貌似没听说过)
# A8 T0 c/ G. y' `& bif 后面多用虚拟语气 etc. If I were you....blablabla
, g, [: A, }1 k) A, h所以这里应该用:if you could not achieve the score that we had an agreement on, it will be free of charge. 后面那句话就不用写了 已经free of charge 了。而且一句话里一会用would 一会用will...
; d1 s M# Y) @! n: d3 ]% h2 Gall questions are welcome 听起来怪怪的 if you have any question, please feel free to contact me at... or please do not hesitate to contact me at...
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