我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
0 M9 i# l7 u: {; y/ XGo to the wild rain
1 \) I8 C1 ~) j5 c/ tWashing my heart and soul.

7 N3 q' i3 i6 p# }) e; SGood-bye, my happy spring;
6 C2 z# ?4 F6 M) _2 O# z( x; O. HGood-bye, my childish dream.
% k; {4 c4 t6 b' U% T3 K/ AI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
/ P' _$ K2 ]) \4 r; e! j8 s9 D6 jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
2 V4 T. B. }( s3 B夏天来了