我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
, S8 O3 Q  ~8 x' DSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
+ c! J6 \$ a3 a' @6 iSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
0 J  i7 i# B1 M6 }Go to the wild rain
$ _) S- g) r2 B: _/ p5 X9 w1 {Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
: }# O- C: V% j7 dI can prepare nothing;
9 H# u/ H3 w( [( yMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

  v1 r% M, e4 B3 U2 \一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了