我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
3 D1 ~4 e5 F- r+ b0 @3 USummer's Coming
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" S+ Y$ [& s* D( QFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
- @* e+ F1 d! |2 E5 P- v. jFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

+ g! k+ u# N9 zFollowing the summer's step,
, d: B2 I8 G$ @9 D% Z7 k8 RLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

# k2 e- W. o  I, b$ E% e8 yGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
- k2 p$ r( `# n% M* m' P: HMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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7 q0 h  l5 @' ^5 Z8 z! S一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
" e1 p& `0 B4 `3 l6 h1 e夏天来了