我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
* A7 O3 d* t9 @" Z0 r! v8 _2 B+ ]Summer's Coming

, V, s0 K7 E/ T6 k" U5 T) FFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
' N$ U$ Y. c# O* _0 P! z$ l1 H; RFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
) ]8 ?: I' [" T: I6 v5 c
Following the summer's step,
6 i: _3 ?, A7 }5 z0 o; q" VLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
0 w6 I" s; ?. p, Q7 KWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
0 F" h: q: G, v9 X  PGood-bye, my childish dream.
6 I: K4 _" F  F) @I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
; c* `: i6 ?' ^$ |
一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
* D% u0 F6 R6 s6 R& L7 [7 rIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
7 p  H# L7 ^0 A- n/ Mbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了