我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
6 N6 o! T' ~, O4 t# r3 T; P是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
* C6 P, o! s$ E3 D4 R7 \" h0 GSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
6 P4 g# W$ j2 [4 }  zFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
% q8 p( }8 [1 R" F% \
Following the summer's step,
0 j: b' L* _0 b# K+ b! gLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

6 r' S3 v& x8 s8 W7 m* l: JGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
6 i5 o# @; y% }) bI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
  _1 T3 d. d5 G% xbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
$ }# g& ]2 k& p- l/ P5 _夏天来了