我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
1 [- p& D1 G0 H  W2 B" e6 nSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
! m. a( v; v% [2 S$ eSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
4 n' m- C. M8 {# CFrom the colorful nature
2 ?7 A) O5 P! H# x* `To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
$ @" H. z! P% N4 \Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
; U+ ~5 \# N- Q& D+ hWashing my heart and soul.

4 S% g, D0 R0 AGood-bye, my happy spring;
" e# l3 K. ?( b: ~0 d- wGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
* j5 j& F& ?- q$ C( ^: BMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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% ~# }) H! B4 S2 \6 H6 H[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
4 c0 {* `& X( V( j4 Sbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
5 t5 @! B+ I3 [夏天来了