我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
" f- D% Q. d# f  n, u# @) ]" p是十多年前的作品了——
$ [: L  B, k) @" B% d& M8 C5 @2 QSummer's Coming
( G6 J- r3 B  _
3 t" o; P9 W; B6 oFaster, hotter and sweater,
4 }6 b* b. f% G) E8 C+ P3 qSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
8 `) B5 q9 m! _6 u) s- W" L# J- ^Let myself go ---
3 ^$ C. b! q7 W/ @! i* ]Go to the wild rain
+ l( A% j& O% Z$ E  fWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
. E& r9 Z  g' _+ \Good-bye, my childish dream.
% Q/ U8 W  s7 M- j" f4 T! [I can prepare nothing;
8 r; a" [- h) p1 q" u# D1 VMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
$ e( d2 x8 Q% t" Bbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
$ a1 X9 O1 ~" Y: j夏天来了