锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3 `  H: D* o: Q/ [0 E( l　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

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5 @3 [+ \! w5 r+ S( X+ `$ E　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

! F" E: D6 m2 u0 i- C　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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/ N' p# I# s  g0 l; D' p) `　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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* z5 R1 r0 I$ D# y% G　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

! d7 w# k6 M5 y, @4 u  ]　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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3 D  z" P4 d2 n* g7 _7 U　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

' e; F0 s9 m9 y　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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% N1 A2 J1 @+ U7 H  F+ A! d- P　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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3 s2 U' }, r+ P2 F" F; l　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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; w1 c) y; y% c: v# b　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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  H6 F$ f2 i6 n8 B3 N* _　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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4 A" C/ k$ K+ i2 q2 b# u; K8 L　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

7 y8 x! W+ N% w　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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. H1 S" Q) G" R　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

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1 P+ d$ c# [. g# H. X" ]3 w  l, u　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

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, i9 s8 U, O/ i5 P1 Y2 F) w/ N　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

1 e% |+ s" ~4 n& K7 c1 Z　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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" G+ v0 R, Q( F2 y' j1 A4 Z　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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  O2 h& T1 `" o; p& N$ G. @: a9 i　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

) _4 B2 I& \/ i: d: c- t　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

* T4 m9 O- ~3 R2 V; h2 k  w3 d　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

& T" ^0 z+ J( X, M- E　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

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% C! M1 j' Z! i　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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0 b1 O. V% f7 `6 p+ l　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

; Q! d# F$ Y6 a- b6 J0 K　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

2 S# G' I0 i" @8 a5 B　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

2 q3 B7 @! ^& T( _; `$ b4 m$ C　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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2 \; ~/ w) H$ u) p" N　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

( s9 |) \$ k* i　　38. No one knows all the things.

) |0 Z% ^* W# t7 A% E4 Q0 B+ j, M　　改进: No one knows everything.

4 `2 o* u3 u9 I4 E　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

& R) Z" c) ]# s" f0 V1 u" g+ K; Z　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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  N$ g7 H% A  L* ~. q5 p4 b' Q" P5 v　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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, q7 T. @8 a3 O* [　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

" H: g( A; f4 w6 b! K　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

1 B  w7 T  R3 ^7 Z+ ?  `5 z* r; r　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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3 ~+ y& [3 n" h4 s3 Q　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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* {: |7 f8 ^9 M  A. G/ h& A8 H' y5 U　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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8 M+ _3 c$ z$ l8 Z* X6 F　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

3 ^# m4 _( F; T  ~3 I3 h　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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; f. x1 `- \8 Q　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

4 }+ `3 D3 S/ {3 {! u# X　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka