锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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1 ~8 b8 z9 Y( ]9 k　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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8 n" R) I% v, [- h& Q" O3 D1 p8 T. F8 F　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

3 Z, f, j/ S% y! y/ \. g　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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0 E. m& \7 `2 M! [4 `- `　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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2 I% R1 D, d+ A1 f/ P/ {/ p　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

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* ?8 J+ G+ y: p/ \, v( k7 Q+ p　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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( d8 V) q; M- k' Z　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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( F# ?) @0 p) V' K　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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$ [7 @4 u2 L' s# K　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

5 H( M5 z4 c. f* m　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

9 F4 m* }9 H7 Q1 a- z8 c* s: o" ]　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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- ~9 r, Y: z+ K# K/ k' o8 v+ M7 O　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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$ F0 B# ^0 _7 E+ d, g  d% ?4 K　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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1 R; x2 N8 F  W* Z- t  A  J　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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$ k5 L1 a3 t7 Z- u　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

. `) f7 J- v& B4 C' [　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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1 F& w5 i$ v" k; ?; n; I- O　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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- a0 V$ l. n9 d' Q: m. x# w6 s　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

7 l$ d; G6 j; i! j1 q　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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3 Q  j( @7 e9 e# [　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

, I9 r5 e2 @- V9 e7 C7 \; Q　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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+ f' O! _* |$ _! b# p　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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( U; k0 s4 U6 u) p, J　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

& ^$ ]7 c0 S) @7 @: b1 i　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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# z5 E5 o" X% Y　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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3 N; b" b+ z( x6 O4 \2 D　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

0 T5 N6 j/ p: W; g' m* }% u4 d2 O　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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4 k. V  H. A8 l* x　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

4 ]' ~) I: a! m2 p　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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0 I7 M( y4 K  b3 g( k　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

8 [. }3 `- U) M2 w1 N　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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# E3 k! F/ l/ j% x0 s　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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! a9 l% M- C0 k% p6 w% }　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

6 n/ L1 M, T8 B3 p9 s0 k　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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. t8 ?/ Z* y# i3 U8 `- h　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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* H, P( O0 e, A( L) ?4 c& z　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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+ m: ]6 g0 ^0 a& @　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

& M  p- b0 ^6 g　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka