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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.* F& f2 f' J; Z
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
" s9 |) F1 H, s+ P0 \$ \8 cEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.8 B* i5 A2 E! f2 t+ g2 [: U
Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.' N) s: j( }9 v: [" a3 e0 f
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
5 B2 c; M& ?0 H7 T0 {$ ]The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
4 m7 B+ c+ j6 v; dSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.) g3 C/ H4 A0 d" ]7 u6 N6 U' _& E$ C& e
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
0 H9 K0 [6 @$ p) q) d4 C* r. OCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool 1 B8 R1 W [0 @1 O' K
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.* a) H2 k) G- i# q; T5 Q
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.6 u! K: K6 t+ a X
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
# A E8 d! q0 k) X4 ]( A- W$ AThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.+ }9 h( g t$ W4 R# }, Q, D9 ^# n
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.8 Q5 G: }/ t) P6 ~
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.& z7 v& _. ~1 k1 g9 ~1 J
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?, m: I- J& F: F2 j! s
Intoxicated then feel cold,
% Q( P: F! a6 m) v0 Nthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction." k( s5 f8 \; j+ E( f
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
, d" {* n+ W! {9 dThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
( d8 @5 `0 y' J `0 M/ rWhy I am always hoodwinked!
) y+ r3 Y$ x1 t' fI have told myself many times cautiously
! H% J4 E0 v6 m( q; pdon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.: O1 |8 t4 y6 _8 M
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
( u, u6 e$ e$ UWhy can`t I take it easy?
7 [! n. j' c6 ? z" I+ d# E, {4 pHow endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
k+ ]& n. {9 @When the quiet night comes
# `* t& s5 Q7 I2 ], R$ F. Jyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
& j' E4 j6 r a6 M$ u C2 Q/ X* u) PThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
' t% O6 Y, o k% s! T. LYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul, v- G3 `. u1 y4 f$ J* ?
light the dark corner in my mind.5 _$ L. y6 ?+ c. p' x2 H8 z" a* |9 M
I feel a bit of cozy.% A6 c; G# `4 F
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
7 u. ?0 w$ y0 S- n: rmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.& a; g6 ^4 m/ j$ b: P
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,3 n! m, g& ]# @* v$ K Y
but accompanying with the time passed4 U- p/ O6 M1 ^1 ~, v& M
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
T, R* ?' A, r1 X) h, y4 r8 kalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
3 _6 ~( m/ D3 a1 t: \ }Without asking if you like me or if I like you9 _2 G) C3 R; }
only feel gracious for your existing,
0 p" p) V0 Z# Q7 y0 C! {4 zonlt want to do something for you.) \4 u, P+ \0 ]6 K. |1 k6 H
Every time when you meet me( M3 y; F$ @2 s. |' ~" v9 T; L
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
+ t; V# P1 ?6 [1 K s1 \. c9 K- qbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere @; Q" F- Z8 u7 H6 D
That live in my heart.6 D3 O0 R$ v4 V" S7 [- G5 a
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
0 Q, z: h: u8 b+ [5 ?! R$ uEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice
$ R* B. n9 r. L: J. g' @, D$ Mmake me gently distraught with happy feeling.
3 E' i: H6 C7 g' TThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
3 _+ t8 }6 X* g9 I% o. Z% D! O5 Csuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.; r! f6 A" {- J, R$ h
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,! ~% O, j+ h, G2 O; J) h
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
6 T* F* a1 K0 a4 }1 N0 i) ~/ sSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy * j) V7 W6 N# ?/ ~
only waiting for you quietly& v7 p( E) Q" f
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do. \* q' Y7 f) a( ?3 ]# h$ E( d! P) e P. S
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you 8 P+ t* ?- s/ e6 s) a
and enjoy the rain washing together
( K* n0 }: X, P" V, _( J; Nor rush to a film3 I) g- v7 d$ z. v( Z
or listen to a music quietly.) h; a4 }7 i1 {+ g- J& _" s6 M+ E
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
7 ?9 W7 ]" `' o, z3 uIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
4 q0 o' e, W2 Xsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
1 J; A2 n- o5 F% f. O6 f7 }" NThat is enough.
# ?5 j9 g. g; U/ Y1 Q3 B2 c. n( [Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,2 x+ E( q6 s! W% D
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
! {+ b1 B8 z/ L) g) a. J+ `the same as my missing.
+ I0 i$ Z% A- @$ aIt comes a little bit of verdure.
4 Y1 t" O6 r7 K! x$ e7 y$ I- e! W- xIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
- c0 h. p y4 Hthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
/ b! l: J' F5 @7 hLet you touch me gently and read me carefully.
, \. N1 d% @. pI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
, l1 X2 k6 B: kAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
* F) p' q0 f, n5 x$ T6 I; mthen I will have all care and ardor.$ N8 B# l3 d, Q0 d2 o+ ]. {- w
Shall we walk arm in arm?
6 q, T$ m; Y2 z# M- O [: J呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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