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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,; D7 G" T0 ?4 m" V( b; x) q! H* C
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. 9 A+ {" B) T( f6 j
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . ! ]1 F' N. b$ v5 }7 x/ g% }: F
现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.6 u6 w" l2 }5 ~5 J/ j: p j5 N
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
3 f0 I) A7 A6 \# g1 ~. x( p眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
5 w! P( V# R* s! H% c- ~' ?夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
# |( E0 @: M9 N3 q! M: J! E) L, j猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
6 J1 o4 e/ Y( K k就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
2 Z( A8 G) P/ C我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及9 e7 C1 e" s" |) Y% y% `
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
8 \: X+ L5 h0 V0 L% l+ e8 @2 O" A世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
- [5 |* I2 `, h Y5 I3 @; R' Z昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.& ?" U8 [- y; \3 H* u+ f l
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.+ \8 ~0 }3 M6 w4 j6 U
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
4 ]7 x2 l" C$ M+ J+ ^寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
- q' h7 U9 i. k6 @+ U醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.! ]. r; `, y) y& E
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.7 g' R; |: s. n7 B+ `* E' [
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.8 L" M8 C5 Q1 @4 L2 _2 N( ?
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul? X( v2 m$ f- Q; p2 }+ M. E
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….2 | f1 S ? }& P
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
, v9 E0 O% v2 A2 K1 [7 T! ]: q* m7 K不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.) V% R9 a0 {, y' k1 f* r! X
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
9 @" ^4 a. d0 F2 A2 `# Z" c为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
: x/ Y1 [- i& e3 q3 w1 \多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!: A# P2 s6 }9 i! q r: ]2 Z' u
永难平息的泪* B- g- F( M+ r6 N% R. U; h8 _
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes, K8 e8 x4 N4 S/ S4 w5 Y1 n
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.& ~6 _. L M! g7 @6 T" t* ]/ Q
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.$ c7 X( ~9 d4 w9 F# Z) w4 f
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，1 v2 b8 Z9 f: G: _; c( i
你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul " w7 s" [9 r9 ]- V0 w- i
一抹微笑；, c2 G: _ T, A n9 {
一个手势；
) U, C$ x- b' ^- X一片话语，
$ A7 d( h' ~) |! @# s/ F愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、: F$ z, G: h( A/ C O5 |5 d
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner4 {/ a" z# d6 S1 `% m" ^
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy." ^& Y# i, q6 p7 p2 Z4 B8 d
这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
9 O# e9 ]! ^! I, U也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
( {) J& Y" X* o起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,# n; F# o5 a C/ q
我并不以为然。
/ I( e) d; t5 A0 f: a8 Z可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
" |# L! ?' ~" _* W7 f0 U* A- S慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
, d+ C$ b2 ]# T2 I% V& U1 R! j被一种情绪所左右，
0 l: B1 ~! h: Z" K+ C+ @总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .1 c, B3 ~1 R; Y o& _6 a
即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you% L4 @0 W* h9 ^9 l- z: @
也不问我是否喜欢你，
, L) L7 p# b- ?# c对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.4 W' k: V& b+ H+ _/ C
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
, @, E3 d7 `* P5 Q3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you2 A& y1 k, @( ` e
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil$ G% N% f* H- B+ |
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere ' e9 b( O8 v3 W3 ]4 O/ |! u, _
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
) b# R; b6 B( b" @" [: R2 [记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
: j) w' G, ]+ B$ ]8 ^" u. O) m& }你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! # ^0 r, ?1 s/ q9 B) p7 C
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字3 c; j# `- E9 ?* M; p* I: o
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
$ u8 z3 E$ g! ]+ z一种声音，and your voice5 h ^/ @# e# z" M! u. `+ A
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.# D4 n7 E% N8 b; Q/ N1 ~8 y
掺杂著幸福的感觉。3 J; F) |* a* {/ s* f, C
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
" s+ V6 l7 c5 k) y象雪花般撒落在我的心田，
1 D$ d. n6 K: }( s% _3 F倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.3 P, ^* C4 A1 ?; ]" O
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。% H' L3 ]7 l% k `& C1 i
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss8 D; n* r6 Z/ Z; Y+ L" ]; ~7 h) G
有一个能够让思念的人，
4 {( l0 }$ {: Y9 {+ A5 g Z, i( g其实也是一种幸福。" e/ d" j) R: O3 U- d
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
4 t; l, h, e" H* h- a* H* @ t: v2 W柔柔的海风，
$ |. ]$ x S5 j! D) P8 D; @甜甜的夏天。
8 B1 T" h% H2 k2 @一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy # I+ c8 Y) ^8 m
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.5 d9 {; \1 T b2 v+ O/ t+ S2 q
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
! t) y0 n' v/ D4 [2 g2 b8 S7 a想和你有共同的情结，
& L9 ~0 l+ u+ Z3 ?5 J共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you; h9 C* F+ r) Q$ r8 f5 ` j4 B
一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together
- x/ T' Q2 P* i% M或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
% ~& u7 S5 M$ w( l或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.9 N R: a" |/ I) d8 z( ^/ m
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
8 O2 v# e: q/ `3 v) }, W2 i我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
5 E& X; N( e: k浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
' ]: r1 B$ `, [; D或是轻轻的一吻，
4 c5 N, @0 G; k: a& ~再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』 Q% w4 r( G) q6 A8 P- Y' x
就足够了. That is enough.3 E7 F9 m8 D! g$ L/ J& C
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 2 u; G" A4 p" C$ B& ]2 |
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
" i D" o) W0 ~% l* H! q5 n4 o$ Y萌出了芽，
F3 o$ d" q3 a) E一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
' I( y6 S/ U" g( L m浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure., Z) @4 r0 @0 z' Y' W6 w
如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
1 w# X$ M) `/ Y5 r- l4 C. C* [能够牵著你的手,9 o3 C1 K. g% S
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
) }: E2 Y5 W: y& p. Q& x$ b9 c f让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
3 ~9 W- U. u3 r. h5 L6 t, s9 A5 c慢慢地细读，
* j. c0 Q6 e7 X7 p我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
/ b: g6 Z" R: i, u) E" k在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me ; c6 {+ |" f$ F' X7 x8 k+ m
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor % Q" h' v9 ^ m& o$ u
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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