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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 - G* X4 ~; T8 \' s7 g3 H
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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( c5 C* D# U8 E9 \8 O(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
( U3 |, D, y* C; z/ ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 G2 C& K- g$ [  h2 F3 |/ o* ]What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 3 ?3 ?4 l( B' ^: B+ x
A is superior in another way, this is… * ^. q+ O5 g( c3 J( P: P
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 e# H: W7 h5 {  RFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 4 d5 N- F) N2 S: }

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! E/ l* D' j" Y* T+ a2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) - H. \9 L' i. V. E3 O
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. & W% `- M: H+ q
For A, A 的一个优势
: x( Z  n" j. rWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,   |/ s: F" _$ o4 `( Z! t1 l: L0 v7 M4 O
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- |9 D+ U- x; Yon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 T, `/ h" ^$ c+ t/ ~, `$ ^: Rmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
9 `: [; \: }+ n; a1 f2 W% oFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 % o% ?3 Y( }! b0 r+ q* l/ i
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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; H  f+ a: m+ K首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
0 R9 Z. s! i5 b! x( }After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. ( m# X6 i* O0 j0 M5 x
There is no denying that… , D- A; a% n* Y/ o  v
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
8 U3 J# J- e3 D! D+ HFinally,… # B* z/ o2 o6 E
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… " g+ E! j  @) t$ G( }9 h6 B* @

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; X: x; W5 ^( `, v, o6 E2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 6 _" B% H% o% N* S. N* O  ?
(本类型只agree) 4 E& C. V$ d2 S  q1 G% ^8 `, u

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$ \, u& F9 V7 A, G! U1 n' }(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. / \3 c$ p" r' f9 L' m) A
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… & ~" _; c! A1 G) v
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ) |8 x$ u- s- _& v8 Y2 @8 L
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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; R  D$ ?. ?3 q' B6 n$ F  q(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 3 f( F" Z; C' C2 [
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
6 B0 F* K3 m" F% hThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 8 E* b0 c3 c0 s7 z
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ( C' E9 y7 C$ U3 B+ a
C is superior in another way, this is…
/ \, C, M1 X( V4 JFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C - A& ~- _# D# B+ c+ ?
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
7 k8 @( L6 P  u5 f( L1 H* m: B(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) $ W& }5 _8 l0 ?/ y! s; y# A

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8 [/ E( T& T# c: o+ y# f- I1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
( o+ {/ _+ T' w, d  @% A7 |+ AOne of the primary causes is that…
! s5 Q7 O4 L2 d$ X0 OXXX also results from…
4 M( A* q& f+ z- G7 C! y( D$ }" R… is responsible for xxx, as well. " J7 S  n, L, b( V4 ?" p
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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- F( l, q& H/ ^. H) A+ L  R) uOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… " E4 l& S- l5 m3 z
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 5 a- X3 d+ E  Z3 k, z
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… + Z8 x4 v! ]! h% \2 |/ T; [
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that… 8 ?4 z/ ?1 H! \  }2 {9 j

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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1 [( @- k  U8 c) G7 j. q再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.# x4 B9 G, w- m: \. {. I9 U5 m- ^( w
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