TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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% J' I# y' }2 ^% t; @(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
$ p8 T7 ~6 R* x1 B5 s& R0 HThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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% V" G$ S& A4 {0 z( B2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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1 Y  }; e3 z& s7 WTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
& [, Z1 S" M& t) {1 qFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
6 B/ G3 x( X% Y( |: t: OFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
; W- N8 ~6 f5 h% i! Y' y4 A) f9 y2 P1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
* `, R* d7 u1 d# o5 N4 u1 bAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
  }3 R* W6 G2 r0 X4 }Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)



(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ M8 p6 s  a8 b6 h8 k" e( L9 }: nIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 B+ F6 m0 x: S" v7 aFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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! M" h1 V4 Q! s5 L* @# o(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



! F: [) S3 {% I0 N! _: g  ~There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
: p3 k3 `0 Z) ~5 S. pThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
3 t1 z/ r6 m: }What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
- i* I& Z' {4 U* F' O; m+ H(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
' D% o0 m( o5 X. c! _, LAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
; i# [$ \7 Y+ k: rXXX also results from…
% p8 S2 G: V  R… is responsible for xxx, as well.
8 h9 E% S& L% _) c( tTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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2 z& h# `. E; J% @- o) IThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
" G6 N* M5 S( j4 I3 x/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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: A/ ]! X) f. ~/ Q: q8 O: za more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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% n" s* x" ^- I9 sIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

9 @$ W! E7 _8 g1 T[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]