TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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8 ]; r7 R2 G$ m; S* Y' x) f0 u(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
8 h$ y1 I/ R+ |; P6 N& IThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
& m, q( d) a: h$ v8 yWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
: [5 ]; b" {# d  N, r+ q7 VA is superior in another way, this is…
2 r+ ~# [5 ~% j8 b4 ?- I& oIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
1 F  \9 A3 l# l: r% ~$ k+ \; |; oFor A, A 的一个优势
+ z/ b1 G6 ?6 H" MWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 k3 w( `1 _$ c! |0 a  Q1 L& aFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
9 u' V( P/ O1 K. \% ~! _1 Q4 don the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
9 `% i$ `) g8 z7 J& E# S9 q* bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
, @1 i/ c! g; d4 g% ?& W. h1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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) T" a  m6 g7 b2 O首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
! _! H, ~- i0 T( y  y7 LAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
. i4 k3 O, L* xFinally,…
% u/ K" ]8 e1 w  `  [8 |+ B+ LBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
% ~% u% y. m9 C" RThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
. R# J2 {, T+ @. u' `What is also worth noticing fact is that……
; {+ ^2 M" r3 D. p/ CA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 r; u3 I) I8 C9 ~) @From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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4 c  c/ ]( o/ n$ D(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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- i' M; ^* B. |* N3 C$ n) @5 y/ r* `% lThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ F  F* V4 b1 B# HWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
2 ~( I" z* B! g; W0 HThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
, L- |' v4 o$ z5 uWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
- F! X$ l3 V" I, J$ Z- h5 PC is superior in another way, this is…
( l& g% n" ^# M' W/ c( G2 r  zFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
9 c7 G/ c6 o! Z/ F- X( cFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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(四)原因解释型
! f  k% j7 K& j1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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- B/ U3 T2 U. O2 a* ^3 `陈述这个事实
3 k" @, G$ y& s: oAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
: V# M5 G; `/ I/ S! Y2 D" o' E5 qXXX also results from…
. ]- ~& O4 v' K; O8 a… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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- t8 j) `7 x1 Z) A1 A9 K2 Da more subtle point which we must consider is that…



# R  \5 u3 ]& `, I  c5 aIn addition/ furthermore
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1 E9 r9 R% n7 n, t$ [- V7 [1 DIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]