TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1 ^9 [' `  W9 q' h( I# Q1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
3 k: s# V' Z: K. Eon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
  Z  x- M5 M2 u8 a4 J# ]* L! ^! A3 ?moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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/ l* A1 X3 o; n9 X(二)单一观点式
8 l: N& t1 j! Z% a1 H1 L1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
  Z9 M0 w( m$ a" I7 G6 ]2 W% Q: {) }There is no denying that…
7 ]9 T; B# C: r* Z) eAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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- i' z, z' e" B/ ^! i7 tIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
- i4 y2 |5 u, l  t' g- _9 cWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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; E8 R6 W5 |5 x4 c9 }5 Y( _C is superior in another way, this is…
5 B/ R5 P* C8 IFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
! D# X6 O; e9 ^  }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( `' X( M: l2 t(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




(四)原因解释型
) j5 d, c- k* k$ T4 ~3 G2 X1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
. A- G9 W" U. NAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
# w/ }5 v" p8 K6 w/ A9 @One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
( d" j7 x/ @  e2 G7 OTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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1 h( B+ p, q/ ^1 z& t2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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3 z+ n5 c: l3 |$ J. F7 b& N3 K; rOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
  H% `6 S3 ?" {4 {5 O- u& ^/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
3 n1 ~% N0 I) M% G0 I4 I; [1 ?/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]