TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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TWE作文模板汇粹
7 l9 v+ P- l; r+ ?9 K(一) 对立观点式
% t, o% k1 G2 E7 t1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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( D0 p- {4 J6 r( _7 i' K(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
! E; l% W/ {, d% t* uThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: I8 S- Y' B  W) Z& w+ B1 fWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
+ q# Q6 D0 H/ K3 X  |  I3 H6 mIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ p; O0 E1 k. X! l! ^# Y4 ?From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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: @6 I8 G" j( U2 K( D5 b; h2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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1 }) z) C6 E. Q4 l* _To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
2 k  M3 k, v: a* LFor A, A 的一个优势
  D$ O0 l3 t& v' I4 EWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
. p' z1 M: J" G9 S) V* @: _# Z  qFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
9 u3 U$ a, k) ^, g& L3 ^# h( o8 nFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
6 Y* W# {2 B0 s/ ^6 Y; ~( }After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
+ Y+ x4 \- S: [( p$ EThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
- C5 P" I3 J; n( t4 [Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
, O/ u9 r% j- T- o% s' _: a+ IThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 {  ~9 n1 R4 |  C  VA is superior in another way, this is…
2 `4 S. [( b& XIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
8 G. N& \* B4 J7 i3 A) VFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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; A& o7 X) W" y' A8 A(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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3 r3 Y, c$ j0 @9 t0 zThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
0 n) X  m. S7 GThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
5 }" p& ~+ B2 N1 K+ @! HWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 ~* L  T& n/ q; G4 \+ R" z, ?C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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' ?" N0 y. O% V2 F) v# K" ](四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
5 F/ P) W2 D+ l' o; RAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
. p" G: W3 z) X1 q. m' EOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
; W  `$ k- ~: a5 B+ |… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
$ x* i: ]% m5 C5 D/ K+ U/ z/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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1 ?! p' w3 B- X  ]$ h, j9 B( J; ^( AIn addition/ furthermore



In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

! L; B* E& M" V8 ]再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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