TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)



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6 |/ S9 v5 _* [! c$ W, o(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ N- T, {5 c; Z3 X+ q, G7 _9 h7 q4 kIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
5 V0 ^# t5 P% R# _! f7 c6 P# qFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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8 T, B. @3 z) w: ]( ~2 T4 P7 E2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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7 L$ f# c) v9 x$ x' }To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 b6 t9 Q2 P5 CFor A, A 的一个优势
2 O9 V8 j! s" uWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
/ r0 p3 K7 H8 ymoreover, B的优点2,for example…
' K3 R4 N4 i2 O7 y5 BFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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. ^3 q* F6 h, Y5 d(二)单一观点式
$ K8 r( d, d1 ]9 W$ N) u  a1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
' R. b6 h9 F7 _& IAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
# [. f1 F6 C; Y7 Q9 kThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
* r3 b9 D6 `2 u3 G: c0 C0 rThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 B8 v: F* F% h  F: B- o, t1 |A is superior in another way, this is…
5 o6 {0 n) J5 S+ o5 [It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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, E* j3 U8 ]* Y; ~* ]! T7 j(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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  ]% F+ I, A5 i1 O6 lThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
& `% b/ R  |3 f; O" wWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
- }; K; e* n' p5 w2 b$ SThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
' j7 F* ^, f$ _1 H5 Q; O* ^(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% o' ?4 }: R& {7 D8 r& X' yOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
5 N+ F, r, x: t. h- @1 Q… is responsible for xxx, as well.
) q, J6 j, q( a9 o8 v8 hTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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" N) B- B" p5 K/ e' `2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
7 r0 K, {% I! {3 Z# R* v7 M) R1 k5 P! MThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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. s: h: e7 G- z4 QOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
# [, C6 _3 k- Y- I( o, s/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore



In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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$ {& M9 g" D4 y5 w1 E. |- O再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]