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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
: C0 v3 T( A9 p+ w" n7 m1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 3 x8 B0 r1 F0 O- d  l5 \1 Z4 R

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 8 r1 E+ u" H+ A' T6 u8 x8 N
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
- `1 G% z0 I# h! FWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 N& t  D' x, {" w' gA is superior in another way, this is…
3 C3 e7 T* |1 x7 y9 B( [It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… " {+ ~* F& ^0 E1 K  ^$ i
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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7 Y0 E" k$ X2 n# [3 pTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
7 w  _3 j% q$ [! I) sFor A, A 的一个优势 8 I  p6 d& ~0 H+ d$ j5 k. n  E# y
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
8 I3 a6 i& H8 V3 P2 PFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... ; I; P8 y6 }0 p
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
! u7 j% v$ j, t  Jmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
' ?& m1 t7 U' J8 K, }1 ^3 TFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. + R( j1 g5 n9 ?3 @

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(二)单一观点式 . P# p8 F; i  O% F
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. & z, _( i3 o  F; Y2 ~
There is no denying that…
" w3 ^9 P& `8 m5 r6 VAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
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Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 7 t& U# V- P1 T- d

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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 5 k" c. t& n* x( _* q4 K
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 6 w  X) B" g. Y. d. d6 R* M! G- t. I
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… " k9 X' k1 \9 _6 g3 P! l
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… * H% ~; C, v: ~1 l. r
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 6 c4 q' B0 ^5 I6 }' E! c0 X0 q- A; V! c

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 - H4 Q. X, A: m
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  r  ~/ j  ]6 @, V2 e5 WThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. $ d( W6 c/ X* q+ \2 ?
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ; o9 V  x) V5 w7 C
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… . \% v- \/ A( c6 E, m5 n4 ^
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… . V% Z6 Q5 ~1 N! r$ o
C is superior in another way, this is…
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From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( a* ^) V1 `) t+ O, {. q(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 9 l0 w* o5 }. u0 w+ n0 S% u

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(四)原因解释型 $ s5 N* m- ^1 s' A. r" ?( N
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 1 U3 h( I8 O$ _; N8 K  ~- G9 {
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. * k; I' h2 V0 H5 f! {- G
One of the primary causes is that…
7 g5 x/ u. c0 y" kXXX also results from…
3 Z" J2 _! R% c! l% p8 ~3 f5 h… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* z5 u2 m& }3 ?' H" }, wTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX , b# m- J' H! U/ q9 o4 ]7 \* J
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0 T( s# C0 x! L) T2 m2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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2 J- G5 t! ], W- B- c; cThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.   M; C; o6 ~2 b2 Z7 K
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, D! i* i. i8 W( i# eOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… & m8 m$ d; s9 Q1 t% l0 T$ S( k1 w
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… % }- Y% M3 O: U3 l& U8 ~6 b
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… : j$ l( H8 {2 m. Z! @$ A

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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* e. }  T. e" JIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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& {0 v8 X" t: g4 C0 @# Z再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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