TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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, i+ s. S  N- X* V' f  ~% M(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
4 x5 Y8 i' K5 K4 x, o; [9 H: Q: DWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# F0 g% o' s& HFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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3 D8 Y# _, A, t% f9 }8 MTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
& R) t6 h, i+ u/ @For A, A 的一个优势
/ I6 U% m  k2 I- D' lWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
4 A# b6 G0 p: }  {1 Z  {Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
; h' V& m$ Z( z  G9 ^4 P# Mon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
4 p3 X; C4 P& pmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
2 X8 b8 f) p4 K/ B3 z' ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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4 W* X+ T& [: J$ T(二)单一观点式
9 S( `+ |8 Y& i6 R! f1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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0 ^: [! Y0 U) ?4 b7 `7 `7 H, U# Y% u首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
' Y. t; T1 L- g4 x# e8 zThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
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" J7 ^. F5 ?1 U6 KBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
) x" C7 i0 B/ h. zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
' m2 w/ S2 K4 {  @, X& R- _. k1 sFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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: r4 S8 w  b- ?. e( o6 e(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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: a: |( z3 s% D' P9 W. YThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
" L' p* d) S. c  v$ j% U8 ?) ~The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
+ F! o  P# i: e+ g7 @2 VWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
. w9 k3 j) u* ]. V$ [From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
0 Q/ |% B2 V$ Q' @" C(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




(四)原因解释型
* U1 Y' _3 p$ r7 D7 o: u% N: H- F: o1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
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… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
7 I% x* }+ v0 k0 u8 ~1 ~There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/ r1 d! ^; A+ m4 q6 a/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…



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3 r4 }( \' y2 x8 C7 K6 aIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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! h& A, |; j% m9 H: b+ a2 Y再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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