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I just wrote a poem
1 a3 _6 U# E+ `, FBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
% q; {& N& G ^. |! IHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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# @2 _: ~3 O7 o9 S4 a' ^( ZFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
' T" w) U( c9 }* w# q7 I; ^ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us # K4 `! Z' V) g# v- @+ Y
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world . ?* }' m5 h& z
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me / O3 y7 m# [! Q, X
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind / o) O. V4 o8 @4 S% E% U' r" f
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness / I+ w8 y+ u: ~3 ?5 @7 q& y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday & S; ^2 C* U- j* `8 F$ K' |3 Q
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: P, t1 l3 T; L' p& G; [& @ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness5 J3 k8 G- x2 u4 o1 S+ ~7 }: I
somehow I lost myself inside again " I" @7 T9 ?& t) U+ I( @9 Q
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 6 R* \5 V- U+ E/ L8 S
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
& Y |" e5 A+ h7 k$ DFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................# i# \2 u8 X* C% t; K5 C
Basically, I almost finish this poem
, O( `* Z( N% [/ B* ] I am 一个人de精彩5 f% V0 a4 r. s# J& `* h
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' U+ n$ a; z7 ?- Y( l
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
