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I just wrote a poem7 r$ w% b/ t7 ?4 U! |5 M
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.8 `- J5 ~+ m2 \7 [8 m) ?
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem% n5 M5 b2 z. `9 E. R
Thanks a lot!!!; ^+ c8 n: B- i f
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
' s1 C0 f& _. Z0 x Somehow I'd found something wrong with us C5 b/ E: A1 W8 {7 T4 d
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
4 M1 a3 J8 H: |4 A% h. a: }' [ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 v- X O5 j+ r! q7 m* d ^9 S$ Y Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 8 v* Z" X/ X b
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ; f$ v# ?2 L5 X. t) I% y1 U
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ ]) r8 g0 G" l8 i$ d3 ` somehow I realized you were still in my heart / x3 d) E' |9 b7 ?/ K) O$ [1 K/ K
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
, n/ }' e7 m/ F, J) X somehow I lost myself inside again 4 |- ~, R5 ]2 S5 _# U
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
( Y: `0 o0 P! B2 Y5 X somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion2 B3 z' Z: I) `2 W
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................& ^8 F, H8 _5 R, b, g
Basically, I almost finish this poem" `# m' o# I( j
I am 一个人de精彩
0 w+ @% r# J; U9 x I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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