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I just wrote a poem
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
" \9 D, x2 q' ^2 J; ^9 T, B Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! {6 F2 ~( q9 n& S6 W; v9 c Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world / y9 R+ D9 }$ k0 @. L2 R" \, O$ y
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
8 f: S8 L9 A' e- R Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
- k! u, E) e) v& A Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ' }5 ^ M8 Z. ]" Q
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# b6 n- t/ E0 X* h I& W1 X9 ^ somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ e& Q7 ]' o% X/ c6 Q somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness: n/ M6 _9 Q: ]
somehow I lost myself inside again / ?4 B1 g w. f2 e
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 2 T' e! G- y+ ]. t# T
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion B) e& x" P. z' n, i8 ~1 h$ @ ^
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
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I am 一个人de精彩
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
