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I just wrote a poem7 K: u" q( J8 d" Z* t6 E7 z" j
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
* s: g9 p* j$ _' d, q0 D7 JHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
8 t3 o0 M% h* X. [( i1 S1 ]Thanks a lot!!!: w: m" x3 Y) L8 o5 |5 H
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* d% n8 e) s+ \$ Q" j2 c; X9 [Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
9 F" H ^6 a4 L$ E/ }, f. t1 h2 l0 @ Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
' W8 W4 \6 @7 @4 a4 l Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
, @6 w* v0 h: p; J& H Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 2 f* {: s4 t/ I d# \! [
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind & x/ |, W1 b; v: I* |. P' }
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
2 f* n) |2 I/ I7 f. E! t% AHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 8 _2 ]+ R8 U. }# z2 I% n1 p
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
0 Q( B) O4 E2 n" T0 |# c! e: j somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness) h- f) j" e8 G6 b, o
somehow I lost myself inside again
0 U2 ?- Q) j+ g9 Q( LNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
0 p" a$ d7 \# G somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
: n. R) y" ^/ S% F& w. e) L! \: U y/ UFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................% |" a4 C5 H% Q3 ^- v9 T% J
Basically, I almost finish this poem/ [& W Q* D$ k4 \+ I
I am 一个人de精彩; L0 ^1 A7 [* F4 m* Y
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.+ e' K" r+ m, Q% }" a% G1 ^
But........
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