作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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$ H9 J( i2 \' }* C  G# A0 g  o+ S　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

$ F% N7 c& E- t6 ]9 \5 Uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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2 h7 K8 l/ @2 _! E5 T% ]put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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0 [" w# ^$ `) T/ C8 a0 Z7 S" r' g3 c little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

3 B0 G. H8 e& C3 X  O' c, A6 M every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

7 N* k3 Q% K$ Mtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

$ q' }' M$ d4 B# Jthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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2 B8 p" `9 m( f; A; F' w1 h3 J on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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% s- P0 m) f0 A$ _1 h3 jdeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！