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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)8 M9 Y( H- |5 e0 P# t4 |0 J
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to# _! c6 l  E) q3 p2 i0 @

' V3 k' [: \0 p5 O8 ?3 V, Sput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my. ?# a% j! x" p7 H7 P1 }, E/ W

$ J: J+ X+ X" M0 _  {0 G% d little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,9 {: p; I2 \. b4 ^3 k; S

+ r# n& ~6 R/ r, O5 i+ m: M every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid$ M( x" l- B! |

6 A+ t5 M- t% A4 D) \ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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- i8 E2 G) n8 j, m* {' ythat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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5 }- g+ `2 _4 M6 T% D) s  \ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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6 j) B7 U2 M/ hfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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0 R. O7 v6 F5 a) I. ~deaest daughter.3 ]6 r1 \+ ?) Y* {( q7 H

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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, e5 ]7 n, \1 |$ [, T  B[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!! G* R$ M4 T. u6 l+ K6 e
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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