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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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6 e# T; c0 k- i: I& w6 vexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

" p5 _" H8 D. C7 \0 D" nput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

9 t) w& I" W3 \! o' ?2 r- ~ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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* a/ f6 @0 a& D0 U was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

1 z5 [; Y. V1 i$ E7 |3 l; itrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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  n9 E! m) H* d) q. @3 t' cfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

# c+ u" X% y7 D7 y, udeaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

  P: ^) H: g. m& `! G never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
3 }3 N3 B1 u) Z  W- Ewe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！