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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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2 s5 c& x0 M' o) e0 a　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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( v6 P9 `3 w: ?exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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& `3 [2 P# d7 Z& N6 `# s every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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- y) s% E  ^2 R; ptrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

7 {& u% B9 S; O* K  _4 ~4 | on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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- y* v" t  `; z( Y/ h5 H" t8 E& Rfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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, i. n5 l2 `5 BAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！