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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember
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4 e5 `: g' V' z% |　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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7 Y4 u5 c0 }8 uexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

% }) y' \* Y6 S8 b  J5 gput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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) g% {5 K/ b7 d- @ every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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: P: s$ c) R! @0 l on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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0 l1 h3 P' ]% Y) y! Z1 A6 ~  W. B/ Fdeaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

7 A* N* c/ e/ _4 ^ never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

/ ~) s- ?$ o* c$ f! b! ?9 p# j[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！