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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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9 H# \- n9 }4 Y% U8 q$ ~     One day I always remember
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% E4 g. t1 A) C, M& q1 l  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was3 o& J6 p3 y, h2 y
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my. Z9 V, Z) L. b4 Q

8 t% x( w+ C6 W/ }, _ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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0 Q; F- F6 |, `$ }8 U4 c1 W) g was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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' ?8 ?. R1 L5 d  a; l) S. Ztrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 7 t6 S( t7 T5 K( p7 J. e

* f2 t) u4 k0 j3 `: k6 S( j+ y7 cthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing0 ?# j1 K8 `# v3 |1 e

$ `. R& Q0 K- @1 B on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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# u6 N0 h. [/ h; cfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter." G7 H5 z! d# K" Y7 r. g

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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6 m$ A# b6 M; Q( l1 I+ t5 \( Z never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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: m1 W4 ~2 N; Q, f[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
8 U+ _' U& h! B# R" ~we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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