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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)7 |% q1 g: \. w
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     One day I always remember1 N- d' I3 W5 {0 l' W

! G+ d0 s5 L9 G9 k  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my! S; U  N4 U* o. M0 y: F

! ]- [. N0 e4 U3 v5 l little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,& w7 A6 i8 V8 b

8 f+ D" s4 l1 j7 h every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid# Q" y; H* N) _0 p& k3 p
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ) Y; }/ k3 y% k

* J5 I8 b+ n1 ]# {8 B) Z0 ?% Ethat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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8 ?& z' o0 a3 V4 {3 o2 o) a- ?for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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' J  M+ `! O  U. a0 D2 Pdeaest daughter.
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8 l1 q2 q  ?3 T/ P8 G% CAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ X7 f: L  D, k2 Pwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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