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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)0 u2 e+ M; T) y8 t2 \$ d/ f- j4 i
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was# g+ v" M1 A8 z+ f

3 u4 o5 _* S" J. J9 Zexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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, U( _7 P/ a- p; Q  E2 ^1 m, X little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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% B- q2 Z9 \" y3 v5 P' Q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid  y1 o; r# d& S! p# ?
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing8 l! }" \  T0 R9 L! |

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3 n( d! L  P( t9 gfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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! B3 Y4 e8 N- V. cAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.1 R& d6 T# w2 n  \9 V; \
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
& p; N" T) n9 W4 ~we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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