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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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  Y- ~' s# [) H7 H$ h$ Z     One day I always remember
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- M9 L) }, _6 P. z5 b" x& |  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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+ y! m( d6 d/ f8 Nexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to% |$ o9 C  u; p1 a
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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7 D" v: X) v9 D* g little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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* Q" S$ D# d% [ every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 3 s6 n/ m1 K9 }: Y/ Z0 }
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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3 P9 S4 ^2 o$ c; a0 W0 mdeaest daughter.$ l4 t. o- ~- T* D  C8 m
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!4 m) ^+ `+ D( [
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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