翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

海鸥飞处

你是老杨的话，你会怎么回？翁不愧为才女，英文情书写的如此煽情，就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的，把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
withered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
4 n2 d3 L' S2 w2 Ueyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
out.
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% m# x. `2 H6 w此处冷，彼处更冷。枯叶凋零，君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁，含泪而笑。君热泪盈
. e8 U' K% w0 `9 A6 k) A眶，喃喃自语，难言再见。妾心沉落，泪涌似涛。
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Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another
* X/ T' d- {  A6 }/ cworld. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
8 L. t  ]: m  A+ [/ z3 s* @hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手，共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧，长发束于脑后，英
姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转，君执妾手，疯狂舞曲。
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0 L3 r9 P2 C5 p/ q3 M1 ?( C  mLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A　masterpiece
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.

灯酒相辉，芳雅相应，祝辞笑声此起彼伏，芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁，美目
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作，使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相
近。

* }$ o2 j$ V' n9 y; Z. E1 H. pDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
1 g2 |  Z: Y& O- @* }ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a
7 S2 Z* m* N! Y* Agood-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
7 e2 k5 \6 _0 V& h; ^$ y2 Omy pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
7 D9 V, J) N+ \& R( Pshouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
6 b& ?# o3 S$ |1 S# o: q5 @- idisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
feel all the same.

) J4 T" m: P' a, Q% b# ^往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾，滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
休，但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝，妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹，君已窃妾心，妾当不可漠
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/ s9 d& p7 i7 a0 p/ V& n2 F于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失，然无可善终。妾信某日某时，妾将告君妾心永驻。

: p+ {1 @1 s) H# G" q1 p; BMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
$ N" s7 o8 J* N4 u0 y3 \' W7 uflinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
1 u9 J1 p; S! Y6 ^' T7 Lmeasuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
  K! W7 L1 ?3 [( n0 @5 x$ K! u8 iChristmas bell!
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9 s, a  l% v- s( h7 I4 l5 n8 R' M妾于忏悔中挣扎，不时退缩，犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚，然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
( t' o7 X1 M: d' o# y# l0 K皑，君挽妾身，妾意甚欢，共听圣诞钟声。
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1 X! {% K3 q1 h* {1 {1 QThe bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
& {; y# ?( R1 x! M! I3 J9 LSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
+ ~0 u+ G. f* [trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
! J: g/ G( m" `' z/ g* Y! lnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.

钟声忽止于急雨，乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑，黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪
而不可。妾伸手欲触，无他，但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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Snowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
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三思

有人问过洋人吗？这段英文咋样？

猪刀小试

刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
刚问过俺同事，说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing，但老外惟一不理解这句，他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗？俺无言以对～

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jeremy

翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用，即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表

3 D6 i7 _' Q* _0 U) n7 j你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来？

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6 l) m9 c. A* i* l0 q3 p3 ~+ C俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

辣椒

你又知道是人家的情书！

APPLE66

为什么要翻译成妾啊，那么别扭。
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无心呢喃

看了这篇情书，偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。

bigwood

此老杨非彼老杨也！

海鸥飞处

原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
此老杨非彼老杨也！

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相信地球人都知道吧~~
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其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”，俺故意改滴~~

三思

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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俺直接把英文提炼，打印出来给老外，她们一见就挑大拇指～

是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

猪刀小试

原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢，就算文字晦涩也不在意，挑大拇指，意思是：今天晚上没问题！

我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

海鸥飞处

原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表


  Z$ h: A6 {8 i) B! @我们公司有俩女的，那叫一个胖，一个人能占一条机动车道，如果俩人并排走路出门，门口的50st就该塞车了。

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听雪安妮

偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.

听雪安妮

翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.

听雪安妮

怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
晕.

猪刀小试

原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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不看年纪，看地位～

Justing

初看标题，我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢