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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪
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! D) t' B! u1 X; \5 C                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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( j6 D0 e* K+ x3 m0 |                                       February 1936
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  North country scene:
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" r! B% g5 d5 L5 f7 ]; w  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.
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  Both sides of the Great Wall
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  One single white immensity.' x2 q$ g% c3 v% M

' \: u: A7 ^# B! T8 b  The Yellow River"s swift current
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7 d" }9 K. w5 h3 K1 \  Is stilled from end to end.
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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0 x6 b, Y# U, _- n0 Q  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,9 b1 T2 Q) v) d9 d1 E1 r( l( O
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  Vying with heaven in stature.2 ?8 m$ R5 V4 Y2 ^0 `/ A% g

* P1 N  t0 x" }; a, F- W0 |- @  On a fine day, the land,
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  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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2 `# I# s8 t9 T5 D! [  Grows more enchanting.
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$ w; G. C3 @( b2 e3 _0 q6 A  This land so rich in beauty$ `% N: I' q! E# l) V6 s: b( {; Q
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.9 X% @! M1 c  u8 W3 D: k* K) @

4 T5 c- _3 I' @; D  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti
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  Were lacking in literary grace,8 r. b) v8 c  S: Q! B
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  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu2 X! t+ T. {) C
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  Had little poetry in their souls;
2 G6 s) [5 ?1 I% W: W* K  And Genghis Khan,* r1 t4 E% k' o3 ~' d8 C' A) J! [: O0 K

* Y( k  b( c. L& E  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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' S& v0 [* l* s/ ~) o# Q  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched) d# D' t! J1 {
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2 Y! \7 q$ D# @, R' R- D  For truly great men
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  Look to this age alone.
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  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.
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  一九三六年二月
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   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽, C: a' r2 ^+ Y; ~  P, M
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高
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( s- C" Q/ O1 ?/ q8 g  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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