SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

  m9 Q4 P) Y) `7 vVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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  J8 ^5 U: r7 f; k/ I6 fRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
1 h" n; z. e. W6 BInformation system
& s+ K, O+ l; i. X* XCentral control locks,doors,windows
7 t9 ~1 p* b- E  L" FPower locks
5 D% v& y# V* J+ hPower mirrors
Power doors
7 c. y* Q0 I( y) u3 {2 q; a. x6 YPower windows
Child safety locks
# U( y" h- F  U; V$ qRear window defroster
4 _, T3 ?# H9 S9 V7 OBluetooth hands-free operation
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/ Q" ~& W6 n  B+ A& W* S5 B3 Q/ uAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights
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: P3 R2 Y- H/ Y**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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) o" a) F, K8 uBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
  K" D/ e! @, _4 `1 m/ U2 q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

- q9 x: Z9 z3 @+ x* N& J哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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5 V0 [6 ?& _9 b% cDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

! V0 H% a+ R5 q( Z+ h  jLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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9 h$ W1 Q, g: n"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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' ]; @7 Y! Z7 }There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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