SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
7 t5 c# D4 ~6 ?! g- |) S* MRemote starter and heat blocker
" X  J3 {* S5 S# fTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
4 S$ P! e" d7 R1 o/ eFour additional tires with rims
6 }, V: N; r8 A: o" c3 sAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
6 l. B! r. _3 aTire pressure monitor system
Information system
1 h: E! H  m1 w* QCentral control locks,doors,windows
. L1 u& o  r# X+ M$ MPower locks
Power mirrors
+ B" i1 G. r6 e9 e; vPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
/ V0 v% a$ c/ B: cBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
* F! j8 c! |. t6 @+ Z9 k* PAirbag: driver
) \! L; M' C) u' T# j" SAirbag: passenger
/ C/ R( [3 K7 Y( XAirbag: side
5 z: V5 F6 R, i9 ]9 S: A% S: [4 e4 k- \Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
' L- ]' t% {# a) o6 z# _If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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% [0 K0 ?! r+ M: Y' f+ r. T( e$ JPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

2 q4 `( Z" W- P$ d+ P$ }. LDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# a( s$ P0 V2 ~+ s( z" h% b这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

- b% `! j; d2 D! K, x3 z% H6 n哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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4 c$ m' Q* a( _$ w3 YDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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! Y, r% D% E5 iSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
. O$ V+ {1 Q: d5 qYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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' j  L  Z  Z* KLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

' O/ k' E/ l8 v  A! V% s/ `"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

1 y* q: D2 b8 I# M, w$ uThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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