SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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2 v& {" v8 w2 H/ c, u  c6 JAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
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Information system
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Power mirrors
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Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
6 |0 @: P" J& K0 J& g, TAirbag: passenger
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4 i  J) Y7 |0 G* H; {8 R, aAlarm
4 \3 f9 e/ n1 X2 h! O) \# r7 n. kFog lights
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' ~* B; T% _4 e# d: w2 M' A**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
7 L) H4 ~3 L$ H1 tIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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0 h: w+ H( c! L5 x& t/ gPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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5 q3 A- t, v! k+ zDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

( |" M. B8 O' Q8 q: V4 WIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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8 \6 \  ^1 e, U8 ]* d" U( XDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
) a/ a. o8 z! l; X1 C这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

6 i! F/ M: n8 {+ u; t+ O0 q哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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' P: \( u: D" Z9 H# f  xDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
+ Z/ K5 a$ W0 x, u/ F8 Z/ Y) ]4 @Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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3 K6 a! W4 A- F! U1 y"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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% ^: `7 J( D: e# O% X7 L/ J" q% IThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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