SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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+ Q' `& j6 H3 L) ]8 }) q& mTire pressure monitor system
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9 E0 N0 [- W3 T3 T; P* _) E5 HCentral control locks,doors,windows
0 Y9 K5 d7 o; |( d0 I( }# APower locks
' t: Y5 p6 k5 v* h7 g2 o: dPower mirrors
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Child safety locks
' i" t  e: U3 s' t3 c. dRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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Fog lights

2 H  k2 W9 ~; l! \# {**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
" \8 E/ u3 k! C) j  E) [If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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* }% q9 E* C6 V4 A* Q8 B1 [Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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, K5 H9 d  k5 {* [If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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$ }! {/ R/ D( w+ y  T. gIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

/ B% M, V" U, H& i) pDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

: b/ D* Q: s) J$ _6 q这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

$ M$ y: ^3 E' B! V8 a3 ?哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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( B4 C; ^' U" cDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* B! I& j# p+ B* m& [+ M3 s* vFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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- d2 H/ n8 o$ Q% \/ d, U5 j" lSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

; S$ X1 M9 E) `6 K3 O# C- Q5 T"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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# n5 C. D4 ]& o- ~8 D/ L' zThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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; l+ p! K8 s. |, N) t3 {! l& QSorry to give you "HARSH" again.