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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, & H1 T/ C- q* S" F' `4 o
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
6 A% N5 w* K/ N/ c2 k3 H% t+ DDreamers
; e* D0 q& o1 @8 SSavages, s) T- L) W2 M
Poets
" v; L" m. `! S! @0 d: [; y* VBuilders of canoes,
' ]6 _1 }+ E/ V( yBlack smiths9 k9 k0 P7 ~$ J5 }2 ?+ T
Murderers,
( r( b1 M* u: y5 u& k% WRisk takers,
0 H2 b" U3 o- G2 fMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
5 S. J% J; Q0 ]( o1 x; t7 j" LAs I think of what could be. + p: l! s+ `5 M: _* d
The world is so big to me
" Z; a: Z9 N) _+ t$ B- |3 oI wonder what it means to be
8 k6 v7 v4 \" H4 G# o) z& bI looked up at the star and smiled $ N9 f1 V! u3 c# x5 A! ]
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. & |/ h6 N# y; O' V: Q6 y, ?

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
7 k  Z6 |& ]3 T3 A5 @! q  ]" B% s7 A  y评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
' t+ r2 A8 H6 t顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
: V: i; `; [6 Y$ _A poor old Guy;
: N  J( N$ V% Q( t6 ]3 c' i/ NLegs in a bonfire,3 h  }$ f' }- K' w2 Y- ?* p% S. x0 W
Head in the sky
6 C2 ^5 Y5 ]( m% J: aLonely, with the feel of betray: U% r1 ]  E; x) B0 Q
Heart empty and hollow
6 `: Q# d( ]3 f3 S: y5 A" R/ R. e) ]6 tAlone I stand
8 k, \/ r  t: II am useless to all
2 c; ?$ {- \9 S/ S* dBut I wish I were a dove : e1 c5 z3 J& u3 w: k$ w3 K" w
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
8 q3 C: P) r1 @8 i# PI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind) W) N- o; z. u
I sent prayers to my god
; R0 R5 p2 L" _$ D+ eThough he does not answer" y$ m. Z1 Y2 L7 M' G9 k
He bless me with the gift of hope 9 d0 x2 x' Y; j3 {

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。  o4 m$ q; j& [5 _/ k. v/ M$ n9 Z) s
加油加油,经常写写!
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