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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
- y. d0 V2 H+ B4 a: B/ W0 VI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  : |* v( M" Z: X" r
Dreamers
, j$ i! b5 @" s/ YSavages& l4 L1 H, \3 g: U5 u, Q1 i# }- L* P
Poets) u6 \: r+ j% h" z, |* u
Builders of canoes,/ b9 D1 ^& t1 o6 o4 m$ W
Black smiths
6 g6 z: M( G1 F/ S- f8 WMurderers,) H8 K! b: `9 N0 |+ {9 C
Risk takers,
* X; I; |* A; gMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder ! F- D/ T, L) y* G$ u# d* `
As I think of what could be. 3 C- s, T" H/ [7 `+ n' x
The world is so big to me
0 W0 a, S9 e# n& iI wonder what it means to be
7 t* P6 g; g7 \" @, HI looked up at the star and smiled
: @2 r$ Q+ T# c! ?# Y0 }+ QThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; ~3 Y; X2 ]# J0 ]% `1 n
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。' A+ w! u4 P% M; z% i; i7 `
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
1 w% [. ~# Z9 m1 s. Z0 J$ J) yA poor old Guy;
: @2 p6 v, [& v2 f8 nLegs in a bonfire,
) y, i; \- I9 x% A0 J+ U+ G  GHead in the sky0 A* @' p9 {, ~2 j
Lonely, with the feel of betray1 a; h" i$ l2 b/ V- P" @! ^
Heart empty and hollow
  v- K" E+ H/ a$ k/ kAlone I stand7 v& G" e3 a. X( n
I am useless to all + m4 l* t7 q! ?0 D6 B6 L& E
But I wish I were a dove % A, R1 B+ ^, p2 G" Q& p" T5 |
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
3 s4 C: M' K. p/ E9 j; xI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind5 U* p8 ~: c3 R0 a9 o
I sent prayers to my god
+ |& w& c, \: yThough he does not answer: e, W- ~( _- o. w
He bless me with the gift of hope : a; H6 u# y3 T2 c
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
5 I% {' i4 ^5 ~3 `" Z, c/ N加油加油,经常写写!
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