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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
; z. O- A6 Q2 s5 m1 yI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
6 c5 l& }/ T4 Z! \$ F+ FDreamers
' d2 ~# o1 M2 T* HSavages
" w) U1 I  G+ z, B% ZPoets5 c. f% D- {) m& D
Builders of canoes,) ^/ ?+ B" y8 P! G( m+ H
Black smiths* q" b1 Y, p- w
Murderers,, M% e8 ]+ ~/ q) `; q! o- P
Risk takers,- R6 C$ r7 O8 {
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ ]8 y- j" I( F2 ]! w0 v
As I think of what could be. 1 N% R+ \! B  t$ w5 v
The world is so big to me ' U( {8 @5 G! @0 o" _8 b! ^
I wonder what it means to be
/ y. R# R1 T, S1 W* qI looked up at the star and smiled + A/ f3 q5 I9 y, C  Y. A2 F
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* R3 g9 L( a4 H6 O/ E7 W  F评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
0 G6 f5 h9 h7 S) Q顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
6 h( _6 s: ~. Z' E, ZA poor old Guy;
, L' D' s5 P6 rLegs in a bonfire,5 c# O% E( V) c5 L$ Y0 H
Head in the sky5 q8 `1 ~1 g* _4 g% J
Lonely, with the feel of betray
, a: X; v% v6 d* gHeart empty and hollow
/ x+ n' ^" ]' Y% P) s3 w- B, V/ Q" k. tAlone I stand
; |4 C: n/ i! Q3 G# O) T+ g, tI am useless to all : ]3 a! ?1 Q3 h% A9 a  k
But I wish I were a dove
6 l& O+ j" n* ^% \" |Giving myself to the world, to the fire
4 a$ s1 j/ ]2 r: l! R9 A7 iI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
! U& _6 h% L; z2 n# U4 @$ II sent prayers to my god
9 I: R9 c" P; Y. nThough he does not answer
, O; R- g5 ]2 d2 O* xHe bless me with the gift of hope 1 K7 K! i) u' H$ O8 d, Z- N6 v7 p7 V
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
2 Q7 f' c4 G5 G' [! i加油加油,经常写写!
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