埃德蒙顿华人社区-Edmonton China

 找回密码
 注册
查看: 2320|回复: 5

我和我同学在学校写的诗

[复制链接]
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 0 m6 U) e& w: c' o) e+ ^, B
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  & B; G( J7 M2 ~6 E
Dreamers: T6 S0 c) h3 y4 h2 }# N( |
Savages
2 e" o: f: P+ K8 Y% W" k4 dPoets/ s9 Y+ S: W# d* Q! X; t5 }
Builders of canoes,
0 _( v* k1 ]. O. YBlack smiths
4 C8 C) i' j- F  |0 WMurderers,
& U+ E8 }' [& fRisk takers,
4 ^9 D% p/ I& W! a- ?5 P& s* [& OMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
" L3 S6 C. }4 g  k) DAs I think of what could be. ) F0 R6 }+ b9 i$ l
The world is so big to me 8 t0 w6 y- K+ D9 N* Y  H2 R5 t3 w& i
I wonder what it means to be& y8 g$ s9 p. @5 k' B
I looked up at the star and smiled : z. T* d- q, ?3 l; }6 S9 I
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. * a0 p! W8 ?  ?/ Y6 u
+ V' {/ p2 R! `: q; Z6 q3 `
鲜花(754) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。8 i1 ?5 a  s1 J3 m
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
5 _3 u$ Z# b' B3 b! S顶一下,支持支持!
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
, e- V) F; x% @, S/ H2 N; kA poor old Guy;
; `" x  G  n$ j& u* y" D9 ULegs in a bonfire,( }( n- w9 p; _- A
Head in the sky
: S1 o0 ^1 \) H7 q6 V( XLonely, with the feel of betray
  \# f8 {! |& o: `  r4 M9 a: K' {Heart empty and hollow7 h, S( Y; ~5 y( M# w
Alone I stand
0 c1 A* d& H$ b# aI am useless to all
. N4 d8 l" d2 O1 h4 aBut I wish I were a dove
' d) c# B3 ]9 |9 Y' a# sGiving myself to the world, to the fire* r# |6 x8 b' s7 m/ \( Y
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind) u/ N& O2 F3 W  G
I sent prayers to my god6 |6 {/ R% K* h( }7 F6 E
Though he does not answer
/ ]; F: R! g. h, z4 e. e3 yHe bless me with the gift of hope
1 e3 K$ A6 w+ Z" w& y5 J# }  z, v3 R$ H. i% X, N- @
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。6 w8 ]; b4 p+ t" u6 w' q- ^
加油加油,经常写写!
大型搬家
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 注册

本版积分规则

联系我们|小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|埃德蒙顿中文网

GMT-7, 2025-12-19 14:00 , Processed in 0.156402 second(s), 16 queries , Gzip On, APC On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表