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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
& `- _" q* h* I: G3 W* j! B/ zI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
4 Z+ E2 D1 J) P* ?. KDreamers/ R' [3 N: q2 D; v3 ~
Savages
; q8 \, x! Q0 |0 C2 L7 oPoets
; h7 P8 O# o' h) p' q. bBuilders of canoes,4 |: E' Y' C7 x/ p8 x/ H
Black smiths
" h. X) _1 E4 N7 m6 v/ r0 WMurderers,
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My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
, T7 c& B. \/ LAs I think of what could be. ! ]& k5 n7 D( B0 Y4 `6 N: s# L  R
The world is so big to me
3 Z+ c4 k- E* F4 d  D; ~! L5 z- xI wonder what it means to be: x( e* [: f' w
I looked up at the star and smiled & E0 X' k+ R& |, P& l
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% X9 c9 u+ b/ p. G# z1 d$ B评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。9 I; Y! g- g; v) S/ U
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
; C9 y3 Q" a$ s) v. r8 nA poor old Guy;& ?/ @) |1 p8 ~$ p
Legs in a bonfire,0 O  n3 Y6 K4 O2 `% |8 G
Head in the sky, v$ G# E9 k7 }. g- }  C" a
Lonely, with the feel of betray; L0 U2 J  A9 L- I: i: w4 z
Heart empty and hollow
5 e1 x1 z9 p/ l- {2 I! [Alone I stand
; Z( [" M, L5 s! ~+ ?& {9 u6 YI am useless to all ) Z8 [5 ?' Q+ w( P/ C( c
But I wish I were a dove % t$ }. }+ v* {& i
Giving myself to the world, to the fire$ j) L4 ]' M1 P1 b/ V1 @
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind! x/ C5 x+ f# X( y3 v4 z
I sent prayers to my god) }4 i. J; `  k% Q, c  a
Though he does not answer- p& U! {4 b) K
He bless me with the gift of hope
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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。5 R4 z' b- m; d4 T3 d. h
加油加油,经常写写!
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