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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
* N" f/ e0 j; l4 K6 {( rI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  + _6 i* j! [+ b, h# _
Dreamers
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Poets
3 C) S0 o6 E! W+ mBuilders of canoes,
6 V% r  {) u6 C* b8 p& ~Black smiths( A6 D( Y7 [+ F, _* @
Murderers,
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My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 8 K/ B" T6 c. S# \; z
As I think of what could be.
1 z" V+ P# j: L  QThe world is so big to me ! i! u! Z+ g; v+ _; V' q
I wonder what it means to be
; d, z0 _' C- J% Q4 [: y: pI looked up at the star and smiled & u- ^) [' M0 V
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. : r8 t% s% i5 s- |0 w) i

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
5 m. ?0 |+ X# C, x# W( f评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
3 L, z: o8 ^: V7 c顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,* E3 S! [# S3 E9 N1 ]9 r5 }
A poor old Guy;- O; u7 @# v3 k4 A& e# F! q  ^+ S
Legs in a bonfire,
/ C  P5 v' M* E) cHead in the sky
5 ?5 ~( T9 q- h3 `" m: ^$ J. iLonely, with the feel of betray' X1 x1 d+ @7 o  A9 t, w. I& r
Heart empty and hollow: e3 I: c% E% F; |* {: N4 x8 E+ k
Alone I stand
8 B; L' R- Z) k5 U& {1 FI am useless to all
7 G6 {3 ~1 n7 Z' J. }But I wish I were a dove
" S% A, q- J- fGiving myself to the world, to the fire
8 t6 s  J+ u. |4 a% M' Z* z8 tI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind8 R5 G; q8 e4 m3 \" ~4 K2 d
I sent prayers to my god
( l$ ]* I2 X; tThough he does not answer% U4 [8 V2 ]% Y( ?( r/ \0 M. u" C$ ~
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 [9 s# D2 t: Y. w8 J6 v加油加油,经常写写!
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