恳请各位老师帮助纠正下发音，谢谢

beforei

请各位老师纠正一下发音，谢谢。

竹声

I was unable to open your audio documents. What kind of format is it?
In addition, why does it cost points to download?
You can try www.box.com to upload your recording.

beforei

2 z' V* {( G* }+ A! _, QThe format of the track is flv. You can open it by VLC(software,you can google it). Btw,I do not know why it costs point for downloading. Could I send both of them to your email?

beforei

, Q6 W2 O/ p. ^) Qhttps://app.box.com/s/08sgwmzr8dbalcf6xbqz

竹声

听了你在box.com 上面的录音，觉得语调方面似乎更要加强一下。建议将原文附上，有利于对照。

beforei

谢谢老师，1.Men are anxious to improve their circumstances, but are unwilling to improve themselves; they therefore remain bound.2.However hard you try, you'll always miss out on something in life. Let's just enjoy the moment.

冥顽脑袋

我也觉得是竹声老师说的语调问题。元音也可适当夸张一下说饱满一点。
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beforei

谢谢楼上的宝贵意见。我自己和老外朋友也说我的元音发音不到位。可能牙不好，不好意思张嘴吧。哈哈。

雲吞

beforei 发表于 2014-6-13 13:43
谢谢楼上的宝贵意见。我自己和老外朋友也说我的元音发音不到位。可能牙不好，不好意思张嘴吧。哈哈。

) @* X! a% v! V' \1 p" W有道理。我以前的房东年纪大牙快掉光了，元音也发不到位。

beforei

That is embarrassing.