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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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# s! {) }- @" f7 @" b我尊贵的邻居
4 ^3 R! n; L# W: S' ~" O* m, b0 ^是我们小区  几十户0 l( p' Y! M. a0 U, w6 G. M- a
唯一的元老
! q/ h7 s6 V" Z7 V一住三十多年
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/ c/ H# u' k$ x! B; p邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
! z( L7 Y; _3 n1 ?- M  P: n白发红颜  不见皱纹
: x/ }/ K, C. f8 O; ?7 A+ I开车铲雪  挖土栽花+ I" y) [' z! {
似不识  岁月为何物
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4 P$ ]  s1 P" r头顶英国文学硕士的光环
8 A& _0 }5 j* p" A5 q4 Z邻居气宇轩昂
4 J6 `5 d/ Q  M( u8 J; n, K如同女面朱熔基
. v- W1 R9 ^" e$ A邻居的字, v( {' U  m/ s- D' w- X: f
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤6 s% Y0 U  _+ ?6 W, T2 j/ ]) D
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邻居酷喜中国文化
; n. C/ h* j& R5 M* m说她属土龙
" u/ T' H) Z. o其笛声也悠扬; M4 ^) X+ b* S# [! q
那是从隔壁传来的1 @  t: E2 ~, V( h1 o4 Q
唯一的声响7 p: \4 a( V3 M3 G! m" L8 ?4 K
那不知名的曲调5 z  F0 p3 x: [; u5 ~
反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 : t. T+ u# {7 x1 e
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英文版,欢迎指正:5 n( K9 j7 ~/ h+ B- z4 y
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Living here for more than thirty years,) V; r! u' V0 n6 C
my prestigous neighbour1 B- g" z2 i8 |) o# Q
is the only first owner of the unit properties
! }0 \9 I9 x: K% q9 win our community --- $ c3 n6 Z9 Z( Y* |3 V4 B; P
tens of townhouse condos.4 x) Q6 B' b. J, a

9 M) h  Z* X# lNeighbour is more than eighty years old,* W4 R* G3 O) W% {4 J- N
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.9 j9 S. a! _. a4 ~# R/ W3 z" U
She has white hairs and red faces.4 h. r6 W% T* z5 @; \) E2 I
Her light-footed movement, [: B7 ~* V9 }8 }$ U- t! @$ D
is just like a flying swallow.5 M9 c  c  E9 u" x* [
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She shovels the snow on her door lane+ [. u' H! `0 O' f0 Y' ^  v0 `
before driving her own car;
. O& Z* A* g; Y* d# r; W4 T- Fshe digs her back yard
3 s  P; v" r; {! B+ C  Lto plant flowers ---; O5 ?( d! _; W! y) B5 C
as if she did not know what years mean.+ G: p& i4 M( s
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With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,4 R5 @  k$ D/ W1 H$ R$ E( F
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---* J2 U# |+ ]+ T3 R3 t. f" p0 X
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.0 p& ^3 Q3 z- y" v+ X/ T& n( c
Neighbour's handwriting
. _: S( H: {+ ris so vigorous as to be the old trees
# Q; ~' o" t+ ?; Y: e" \- |! iinterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
% ^8 F& n/ K" _+ T; ^She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.- H5 e# Y! p4 f# @! A
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---& N$ H' @  I7 X1 E% M$ H
that is the sole sound going into my ears2 |1 a9 O: a- ?  M' V- k4 l
from the next side of my wall;
' A9 Z* N+ z- V9 t% Hthe unknown tune is extolling
6 D4 H0 x- h; y& r4 B0 k  Jthe magnificence and brilliance of the life,
2 e- A5 a/ t! G7 F/ x! V. m9 ?again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 % Z+ p1 n7 x( B/ t

) }8 A( u: P  S' B2 r( d3 G土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑
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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
2 D: @4 L" l! `) y; ~Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

: }; L4 O3 {' R0 C/ a2 J* A, a# D# Z( M从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
* F/ i) b/ R) n$ r4 s& C另外,翻译改动一处:
  Z# Y$ j7 i; kHer light-footed movement" n2 P5 _, q/ r# V* o
is just like a flying swallow.
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# S4 S' }# r  Q' \  m+ U- [7 MHer light-footed movement7 ^/ m, g7 h  W0 `9 f5 y
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 " d5 t& F! {3 J6 d! K0 c' b
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真的是太像朱镕基了!
- H9 y* x3 a/ \9 H% ohm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

+ y0 L  T- G4 k6 x; ~7 m. E我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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