儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
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6 q. C9 \' S/ C3 E% qHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
2 f5 A& `3 ?: {: F( Z6 XI have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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8 G- I. W/ @2 e( b  G; RI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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4 p, `! y, g5 D9 O5 yI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

2 I! T$ `' Z, U  fI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

& Y- {5 c( b1 ^; O: [+ ]+ UI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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' X- t2 h0 q  y1 n* i' y* PYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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! f1 A" X6 W" KYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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: i/ _) q! [" G( GI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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+ h/ C: m4 ]; J% Y0 d- B" b, hI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。