儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2 D4 q. o1 ^! e; E, h( n2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
' Z, c: y$ w" X' f4 I3 ^: \4 sI have written you this message because:

" G2 a/ Z7 S8 d! Z, e9 ?I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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; @  ?4 v" ~+ `  HYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

/ r3 Y3 `" Y9 M) MI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

2 n# v" g* U/ X$ n9 FI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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% g! k# J2 f- k# r: P7 V7 a2 d* |You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

4 m* Q4 h1 K2 ?/ j# w2 L+ {I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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- Y5 ?. n4 A; D+ A0 p- D6 g2 Q0 kThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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  J; _2 e3 U; _Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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, @9 J. Z2 H3 @% ^You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

% c; f! U4 z  s2 AI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

& z2 d2 G8 _  J( I: _: yI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

! R) `3 [3 r+ G7 P; ^& cYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。