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儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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发表于 2006-1-13 10:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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$ u2 F8 [- x& A. b儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:, y) y" }' A0 ^3 O
1)多少是他妈该改变的?3 {3 Y; U3 i; g$ o: b+ @0 Z
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?7 }* o% X) R/ M3 s2 b" b5 ]

4 }# O/ {" ^- M# y8 tHi, Mum, aka. Isabel ! o& y! `3 u/ t- I: V- P% G
I have written you this message because:1 j7 F! t" Y* d# O, i7 ^
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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2 r( x1 |( I) g0 LI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.2 e$ M- S$ Y0 \  S4 F8 J% }4 y

# @$ R! Y0 e1 f& z& hI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.& w8 f& h6 j; ?0 Q1 e! J; M

: M3 V1 p4 d$ ]5 _0 HI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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+ Q; q+ s9 j9 @5 }$ `You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 3 K6 v' J3 o: s2 p

: U( h& d! \; ^# B% ]I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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' W$ i% w+ {) _The last thing is that I should do less chores.  ]+ z+ [# t) S5 N' q3 F

% t& `# `1 O. T0 \7 }5 c/ xYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 0 H2 s7 Z0 o6 @3 {; Y1 K
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发表于 2006-1-13 19:18 | 显示全部楼层
I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意,小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。+ ~. A$ h- ~; t' M/ z! {

7 w: S  [2 k! E+ wI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。1 I/ e" |7 f4 R  q4 V9 _* N

$ U! h4 \1 W( F# N* L1 kYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。! J" P- f) L3 s) o0 y9 q

- o& y( K7 A; A# X. G6 W& n" vI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。( H% i: f- _2 |* N

& ]: e# @8 J8 y' }- ?5 mYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。% r2 x/ s4 Q6 W  j/ H" o% ^
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。% z- p7 X- H1 g9 q9 u
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。- U! p8 ^. N$ ^, r8 b
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。
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