儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

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1)多少是他妈该改变的?
1 Z/ z( ?8 w- C3 }2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
. C7 w7 u( e2 h1 }, tI have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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" h3 v" r3 a" ^I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

" z; y  e2 V. e- ?% B( wYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

+ r  M4 I2 }! |: nI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

8 y* e" @5 n! m8 N1 kYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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5 ^; P+ e2 o' ~/ B* \: L6 a( A/ z6 ?I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

8 }0 `5 t! F/ B$ \2 E" W6 p' t: CThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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/ W( o8 ]7 }! oYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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2 I6 H1 O1 y( R1 _; qI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。