儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

$ p* _. p* C% {  W6 O好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

1 k5 a. O  l0 c) _' |- }Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
" H; \1 O' `' f, T) ]I have written you this message because:

' Y3 W; ^  J- a) yI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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3 g; l/ Q: O# [6 S; O9 HI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

# c# X! v2 ?, C3 V5 QYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

2 s; L  E  P2 @: J( m' eI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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3 N" a2 m$ N9 Z, M: U; KThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

8 R! x. M4 Z+ Z0 T+ L9 A0 z( QYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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" X1 i( |/ t1 W5 NI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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' i5 r! Y$ V) g/ `; w, F0 iI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

4 W: U7 `- _$ b) p- bYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

+ w) X* n% N3 B; k) m3 X+ c/ I; tI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。