儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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9 x: L6 A7 p  a& r# T儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

4 p% v  a$ c  y3 \You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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: `+ {1 g: D, {4 \7 ^/ j& WI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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# L" E% ?7 y. g  v$ O  D9 bI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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* |' l! {/ K1 k2 \# B% O; |The last thing is that I should do less chores.

" P- }0 F+ ~+ ^Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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- L+ l3 Q# p! ^" Y% CI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

, ?! m$ w7 W. v2 J7 J/ W3 C5 ZYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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# V, ^, w2 J+ PI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

1 {8 ]! R/ q# }7 L1 o$ |The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

- y- [5 w& n0 E# S+ N, VYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。