儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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  L7 P/ w1 J- `: N& l( A  b儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
9 r2 [) W$ J( V1 v- _1 b$ p2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
2 [9 n  }6 `' F+ cI have written you this message because:

* J4 m/ a+ P- O, U  R# H% L" t' rI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

8 G5 x2 Q& c! R* J) II wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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% _0 o9 d- B% j5 Z- UYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

The last thing is that I should do less chores.

! W) J* \) _1 R+ y" r* lYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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/ v. C7 H( T$ f+ tI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

0 j) w3 W: y; E, t% P# ~  L$ gYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

( m& \% x' p* R( N, L( u& |" zThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。