儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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1 ]3 @0 D5 a- |/ r) d2 Q) Q儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

2 d# G  T: s2 j0 M% M) F5 iHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
8 t( @! N, a9 h0 A, nI have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

# G- |0 K9 I0 @2 i; s* n- b/ aI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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5 M8 Y) c& c! |0 B: o2 ~5 u7 oI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

The last thing is that I should do less chores.

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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: F# I3 j1 i+ }8 o$ C6 KI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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; j. c6 ?1 a; k" B  RYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

0 U- m6 A% g2 V/ r% r! E2 W* `I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

: V9 o* x! ~& S) [8 iI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

5 ~" ~4 j  H2 GThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。