儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

- `# q* l% |. c8 xHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
7 ]3 U' s. Q3 K  kI have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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$ J2 X; Y) k" q( jI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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$ p8 }: }- o0 ]" AThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

4 }: J4 v; c! ?$ Z7 a1 YYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

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- d* w2 |. `, B5 F9 @0 ^You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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5 ]' }. E% Z1 [: ?( b! L) ^I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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, @9 Z" p7 P. i* G3 GYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。