儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

用心去过每一天

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6 p6 ~' B' x  i& U- D. U儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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, i' L- V3 ~9 [' eHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
0 s. b3 G. w2 C4 ?4 H2 i- n7 GI have written you this message because:

* F( K9 a% y1 L# g4 ?2 aI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

5 F& j  S+ O  nYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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0 o. w. R0 L- d6 ^  m0 _. |I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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5 e9 A0 }& K9 fThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。

$ m" e+ [: _9 u; {+ k6 s7 jI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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0 ^# d3 h& c: Q& OI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

% \( T$ {5 I4 Z' tYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

" S! T$ A3 E: ?" nI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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( n4 Q0 J; v+ aYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。