儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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  Y7 A3 W( F, E$ _6 y+ L2 \# fYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

0 L7 ?  C4 h! z0 VThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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155 words

老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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/ i( _) N- ]& J7 R. w3 ^I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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; k+ m7 j- ^0 Z4 zYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。

Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。