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儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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发表于 2006-1-13 10:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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9 N9 ?# D0 @* ]. C; x5 Y. W儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.
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( H; D4 z5 ?6 t8 m5 K$ \好心的读者帮帮忙:! d, T/ d# ~( |" T" E+ _$ n" F/ Q4 Q" s
1)多少是他妈该改变的?4 \. c& e& j! t8 J& [; ~1 M' d
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
$ B3 e; O, ]4 `  P7 _I have written you this message because:' M/ N& z" c4 J: K( S

# h8 F5 B+ x5 c2 ~! X3 F( q* kI reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.; j  h* j. i* b" `% s' G5 [( ~4 x

/ \+ f. p6 p1 r4 l$ yI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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3 t$ s# {3 b: dYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.$ M0 H4 r; V2 E' o
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.( j4 r: `  S) o

" ^" I8 p3 t- U4 Z; N9 YI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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2 c7 v% }0 y- P: s9 EYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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9 w; H2 R: ]6 h$ Y1 hThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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  i9 \% ~5 ?5 U) }Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) ( Y% \! o- Y2 @' n* r
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发表于 2006-1-13 19:18 | 显示全部楼层
I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意,小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。* d& T- L* Z' y. I9 e2 }
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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+ a9 ~9 t) a" ~4 l. N8 xI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。' |3 s, X' e2 y

1 Q7 ?; N$ _1 D8 m7 f5 `2 B( Q! @, eI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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" h, {+ C0 N8 _5 C9 E0 QYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。/ X5 n6 N+ Y8 v9 S7 I' k) M3 j

1 v# K* K; y, s" NI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。" ~2 B' }3 s3 I- ]3 A, {9 K7 b
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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7 w' t5 A( O9 f7 i. lYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。
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