我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
" w0 ^, B1 g, I, ?0 D是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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4 z9 t% F' m0 t1 r) yFaster, hotter and sweater,
0 o" J* M" R( l% h7 W* L- HSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
# a* Q: ~3 @+ mFrom the colorful nature
8 |! |+ ]; t1 u+ u5 ~To my life and dream.
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& p; Y( d4 n; xFollowing the summer's step,
/ i" i; @% F) Z6 g  lLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
$ b; f' s, [3 g& mWashing my heart and soul.
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& d& P( W/ v0 m" OGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
+ ~$ \/ I! u- }0 U7 O/ t- w1 z+ b+ |7 DI can prepare nothing;
) k7 [& X1 E9 L! r' w7 jMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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$ p7 M* k2 ^1 x' z一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
/ C1 B' J3 `+ {, O0 o2 WIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

$ `7 W, D, @6 m( q! j$ V$ q[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
* M, N5 b  \2 c+ K* ybut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了