我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
$ ^' h) T/ n0 l! W( }9 ^& C是十多年前的作品了——
2 h; L  H4 w8 g1 X. R1 a8 ?$ G5 xSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
' B7 X2 t$ m6 r/ gTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
0 n! n/ F% d: d, ILet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
  g+ t7 k2 Z1 R) q. c5 oWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
/ I! d. s) D$ U6 \. Y# m& W1 nbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了