我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
8 G# O6 Q! O, C  A3 ySummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
* [; I  S3 i/ I0 hFrom the colorful nature
8 S! U7 o& A" f. v$ i1 DTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

7 ^" ~+ j+ z8 t" XGood-bye, my happy spring;
& l$ l* ?+ U' zGood-bye, my childish dream.
$ ]6 O+ {( c0 w! M* z$ qI can prepare nothing;
! _! u+ r8 l4 R2 G8 t+ r; Q3 E, rMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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8 M3 N5 j- C5 b, b& u  S一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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0 m; L+ F1 @5 L6 H[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
6 G+ J/ |4 _+ kbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了