我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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3 \- j2 s" W; ~Faster, hotter and sweater,
% X6 C7 @. R9 FSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
7 m1 h  k1 Y' [% I% A, j) HFrom the colorful nature
3 I% u- Q1 ?6 W! j; O, J1 GTo my life and dream.
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: j# q" a, b4 |  MFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

! v  D/ @, i: V0 I+ cGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
' _: A2 q* N& `( P( iI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
+ G! n( V2 \6 J: P+ pIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
0 ^6 j; t% s& S; [7 n; y# x) jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
$ m8 d. v7 h* s  i) D夏天来了