我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
" @- d& r8 ^. w$ F' c4 F- }9 i是十多年前的作品了——
. O# j4 }6 N% U6 ]Summer's Coming

* k7 E+ t0 I% ]$ eFaster, hotter and sweater,
9 u  c7 O' N0 j' HSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
( t5 v+ F2 D( u* v5 Y- }From the colorful nature
# e+ J" A" D, E: x  lTo my life and dream.

, W9 J- c  x; J+ A$ ^Following the summer's step,
! l$ g. u) v. H- x+ Q) o& ~Let myself go ---
* \# Y/ F, C5 w8 T& e4 A* k" YGo to the wild rain
$ a8 _/ k! U2 h2 zWashing my heart and soul.
& h# }% r3 o: G" _
Good-bye, my happy spring;
  F: g- x0 G8 W( NGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
9 E% l4 l- E+ |7 O! ?My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

) {: H6 F) ~1 z- H. L+ j8 H, h一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
& b# l1 P, C- b5 |- m* WIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
; C8 G/ S5 E/ W) p: T夏天来了