我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
' k2 D" f* M# S6 Z4 n! gGo to the wild rain
+ F( ?) N& s2 ]3 N3 yWashing my heart and soul.

' p6 P5 R0 x7 Q! YGood-bye, my happy spring;
( N( {- t  j$ M! A; }6 n- ?Good-bye, my childish dream.
4 @, o6 w% Y, T" EI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
' B4 x6 v4 w7 W- Q6 Fbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了