爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love
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I fell in love with you
5 j/ u7 y) [" f) O5 A- p+ W, [* pAt the first week we met

You have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
* K4 B' [! r8 {% ^As spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars

Your lip is so big
/ V: \4 S; \! ^9 XAnd that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
And that is good for sex
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6 c# o. L, L& L3 y" i1 Y! B3 Y/ |I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
You blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like
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/ A; \, U' P$ s7 |) \2 G6 G& zYou could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
Eating with sound is a pig
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% @# n" g9 X( t+ lI fell in love with you
Become a fool to think
All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love

You slash my heart
and I am seriously hurt
9 T/ G2 w1 ?0 d6 r" H/ S0 GI will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
Falling in love
4 W6 |1 g9 M. R$ h
3 W: L  X  Y1 y- h& MI fell in love with you
At the first week we met

You have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
' B6 o( y9 y3 a( KThey are shining stars
9 ^5 J6 Y  d: n$ H# L' O
Your lip is so big
: N5 R* K' s* {$ h* K% M! l+ n% zAnd that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
/ G6 H1 q$ A& x# UAnd that is good for sex
' |% u% S5 E+ b6 e
I was deeply in love
; S  N$ N' L8 {3 [Everything from you is positive
$ w* N; |, I1 D3 l8 p9 UYou blame me everything and everyday
9 z. f* z) k6 ]And I think all girls sound like
* o$ T4 B* ~; S" `" c2 X$ F
You could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
3 x8 q! e; T. C' X2 f- eI think you are perfectly right
Eating with sound is a pig
, R+ l" X+ j, n5 ~
I fell in love with you
/ x' s( h! D- DBecome a fool to think
All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
' a; b" t1 o8 {; N0 v% a* x
you are deeply in love
Everything from me is negative
( c! s% E6 d" |5 x# s"My man should like this,
and I am helping you to improve'

You are loving me
  H4 [- Y1 t6 u! l  S+ Dor that one in your mind?
' B# b1 S6 j+ r: H) o& b1 uMy mind is like a mud
can be shaped whatevery you want
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7 A! g9 X  w& d  a* |  Sunfortunalety not my heart
It is slashed by you
and I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
+ n/ z! e) b& D* p- DIf my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
- V1 J9 r1 `9 V% b+ F7 d) m+ O再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

湿人啊....

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# J/ h. h# ?7 H) ]/ s) [你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
- ]$ u0 ^6 z/ s* a' L够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
0 ~, g! ^% A  ~* A/ f* ~6 h, K/ y3 ^哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
' [  X+ F! V( p+ Y4 Y/ r/ s啊?还没整完哪?
4 W! ?1 V2 \; H: v/ I5 t够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表


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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
2 |# n/ f$ E) y7 e不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.
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3 a+ `; n4 P7 ~4 s& TP.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
看的我毛骨耸然

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& |+ Y. |, y9 t! K有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
3 @0 C1 n# j: T: Z: ^& m( u, E: j% C9 K看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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+ e4 w( q" p" w: [; Z0 m! x听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声