爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love

. b5 _5 y# M+ f8 ?9 {# W/ r. Y$ ~I fell in love with you
8 i) x* W7 ]) YAt the first week we met
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& [8 ?0 A# v4 f& xYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
: o, H* `5 S5 c& \/ Z7 z) uAs spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars

8 B' s( A+ s7 s  Z. w+ _2 SYour lip is so big
" r7 y; A8 R" y: e! `And that’s good for a kiss
% G4 T, Y9 G6 y: FYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
You blame me everything and everyday
( W: Y2 F# k+ g4 hAnd I think all girls sound like

You could not stand my eating
1 ~  Q' U8 B7 n: o, p5 P( N% JSaying no good for making funny sound
; |! |( |2 H# D; x# vI think you are perfectly right
9 g1 Z& K6 w! |. O3 V3 y' }Eating with sound is a pig
. @* ]: `, q+ Y0 n) z# Y
I fell in love with you
% @$ h/ o. P* t. U$ BBecome a fool to think
! m1 c8 s+ s3 D" G7 y" F, UAll trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
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3 @4 X0 q& H# e2 v( aYou slash my heart
/ [. m1 v7 k; O; Dand I am seriously hurt
/ ^; Z/ [  l' E( N8 DI will never love another
  L+ {1 S/ T5 F/ a1 T) Z  i& lIf my heart can be fixed
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+ n7 ]& l! [$ j0 m9 \8 \' B; ~[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
# w+ t3 n7 D* K* o# f. aFalling in love
' G0 K: J4 `9 ]
I fell in love with you
At the first week we met

/ n( W) @" m6 F' kYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars
! ]+ U2 g. I- x9 g4 o# u
Your lip is so big
0 A- M  G% }$ Z- IAnd that’s good for a kiss
; X3 Z) o- J1 R! YYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex
0 t4 i) D: ~% f& z: d
I was deeply in love
. C3 E; w- H6 _) N1 Y7 R: b- LEverything from you is positive
You blame me everything and everyday
. ?+ r/ l' l8 K: O! ~And I think all girls sound like

7 [1 J2 u9 D* f! ?3 F* Q4 NYou could not stand my eating
$ O1 f  s- W2 E, ISaying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
Eating with sound is a pig
" Z3 o2 V3 [" q6 w/ i# u) J
I fell in love with you
$ I$ r$ P2 t* p/ V) N- VBecome a fool to think
All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
$ C9 O3 _! A* }, M& I% p' r# D9 A
you are deeply in love
Everything from me is negative
5 a" ^% R" K3 ~4 b1 Z"My man should like this,
0 h/ r) |3 K. u7 F/ Hand I am helping you to improve'
$ I3 E; t; k) ]* t; Q
You are loving me
or that one in your mind?
0 T- ~$ @/ o% Y% v  J4 lMy mind is like a mud
+ n5 E# ~  c4 H5 K; A  Lcan be shaped whatevery you want

7 h6 Y. b, P. Q& S+ g$ y/ bunfortunalety not my heart
It is slashed by you
/ Q5 I6 h  m; ~and I am seriously hurt
I will never love another
  `5 q+ L$ u- m8 sIf my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
' y+ s5 g: N% u6 @! e, v* l再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
$ b; H9 k9 B" ^0 O- X) \8 T
湿人啊....

" u- y3 Q7 X7 l: [0 P  H

你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
+ y- w# g, ]) n6 E* M4 A啊?还没整完哪?
- p# B, _" n( f3 }1 Z2 j! V够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表



该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.

* Z/ K# Y2 k' m! P# uP.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
$ S5 Q' m* O% ]: u& `% V5 }看的我毛骨耸然

有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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# k, m6 ~* A# Y* C/ _. a! r听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声