锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

# A; U5 N' |8 w　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

- e$ I) ]- v4 ]  [　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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/ ?, k( t( A' I6 ?　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

1 B+ w  E6 L/ @( w% N% a% T　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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* ?' U, M. I3 m1 X0 ^　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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7 o7 M) n: l* X. r) i8 A" x# A9 ]　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8 i2 O8 _' a8 J. M　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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& {7 ~( |/ P4 w/ X( F: X: B　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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* i- \) G; N4 a& X$ k" l1 t　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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( k% n6 C: I( m9 {　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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" X  `: w$ C% i% f% O' K　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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+ a5 S- A1 P8 I& U# f9 ~　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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' x. v% j  @  i5 @; p4 x　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

' T# l; H" n* O. f& L　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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! j" t$ u/ E& Q% U' C$ e/ }! L' Q　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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1 H# l; C2 v; \　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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& N+ ]; a+ T0 ^9 s! p　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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! x. j6 W- h/ T8 n  `# ?　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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% A* J* `0 L: U9 g; a6 i6 R　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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$ G0 V6 ~: V" m2 J) `　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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7 W" M# ]3 i& Q　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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$ k3 R' j8 F& x" u3 Y　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

6 L2 Z+ K* g# ?' I: s6 \　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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, i  ]7 n0 k, ~/ Q% t　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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$ @% v' [0 R7 j- _& f# @8 B　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

* b- l% o; A  w5 c: s( {1 n# z　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

' i7 e- a% W, e  Z　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

" J+ H( q0 b8 \& \/ D& o0 W, ^　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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. j$ k. @7 S7 ]. k' F3 J　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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" U1 a6 m/ J, n6 ^　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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7 I) `8 q# Q& A- w　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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  ^; i4 N7 }4 b& B  P! ]　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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8 k. T+ I6 D' _" I　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

$ e1 J+ S; r7 N& d( g6 d  d4 W% R, h9 p　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

; g+ S, C' G8 I+ [* E　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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$ |9 E- g, v' T3 q6 K+ D" t　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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* @8 X# {3 V3 Y　　38. No one knows all the things.
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$ S4 r$ Z- T7 m* [+ W0 Z; U& N" F/ c　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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* o$ i+ g4 p- s: p- A/ R7 ?　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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: ?3 i. }% a, r$ ^* j　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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4 F; ^3 |1 {: T- f! v　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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- \3 `: }8 b/ r2 l& g8 @# o3 ?　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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! I# B  X7 x$ u& O　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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$ v1 F: k" y) `8 J5 b　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

" y1 `5 H& Q6 Y7 m5 v# @+ p　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

- a& E& t4 x$ l( O. d8 i　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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) i+ M% e* y1 H2 U　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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) D0 B8 X* r2 w1 W( m$ h8 `　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

5 f( y2 N' q+ x! D. B　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.
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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka