锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

. [2 M+ S' L& c　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

- F- Q. S3 A$ a. q' T5 z, q　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

3 a: a( e0 z: \! v* z8 F: n% D4 g5 F　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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8 t" _4 p5 x" ^3 e) Z2 n, [- k1 ?　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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: x" p8 d" F$ H2 W6 ?0 ]* y% a6 t　　改进: They are still immature.
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9 k% o2 A/ |4 S! u2 l: {# o　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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. ~) t+ C. T8 `9 @) ?9 @6 a　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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' g) F( v4 M  Y  @+ [& f　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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2 ?3 t( L% U! \, K$ P8 z　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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2 G( ~" M( a& N6 |7 ]　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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  z& z1 c) c, n9 Q, [( ]* E　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

' d4 F5 P, Y3 Y( Q* M　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

* c% I0 d2 f/ _: \& G　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

* D& T/ |+ s, {  H$ S* L　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

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5 @% n4 J8 L& m! k　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

3 R& f  o) C' G# g' v* y　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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6 W( [: V: w5 F* j8 b, l　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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! l" |$ e+ G$ _, o: j( Z　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  W9 P2 j8 Q" }; I　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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9 V9 n' H& a* V5 h& G& `　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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6 M( W' u( M3 d% b　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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2 a9 ?: I* h3 S  h) o$ x5 H　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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1 n2 m! \3 q: Q" o. j- [- `　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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  j5 S. Y! t9 P) \- o　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

/ T9 I9 @2 S% C: ]　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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5 q* `6 Z. X/ z7 g; d& {* F　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

* E# m# X& Z5 f! Z  q　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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! c2 S. R( K4 y! O　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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  P* x+ t: Z. W; n; e　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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6 E/ T, O* o3 u& r% W# `* X　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

$ m3 Q) n1 F2 D/ S* o5 a4 \( p% ~　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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' n9 P2 L' ?# K5 L# F6 z3 I　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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$ v1 w8 M4 W) ~- s; k& w　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

9 {+ A- K. d8 _6 y0 U: N1 C' i7 K　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

! u. r1 d. n& s* |& l0 F; @& o, a; X　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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$ j* A  b  P( }. k/ o　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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! q4 _! f4 s/ r; R　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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+ r( y: Z5 z( R6 Y　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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" h4 E& i: G. D7 l2 z# r% x　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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! t1 {2 u7 r8 C9 }. V# r! a/ L　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

( K' D: @6 U9 _. g! P　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

/ y2 x2 u, c' Y; b1 u　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

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8 \: R; ]* I" l: P　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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8 v, R' @2 g) q" Z　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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; s) D1 q4 |$ N) f8 y　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka