锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

' U- J8 o& \9 N7 \　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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' k; x7 w/ N) M& f- u　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

7 e& X9 ~5 c0 R& E1 G5 f5 o  ]3 t　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

4 ]# @: N! d: }2 X! F% }9 H4 F　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

: [  w3 m, V+ u3 }　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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3 r, m/ d4 \1 J+ }, |7 x$ r' Y　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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; H5 S7 U3 Q9 w  c# V　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

6 K! ^7 k, r* k) G2 f* v　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

% L4 @( m0 \- s7 y8 P( U　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

0 `( p) ]) i2 D+ ?3 H0 [　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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: \$ t, k# _5 h# G8 J1 B+ _; @　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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' ?) [4 B1 c( F. r7 K- E- \　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

0 v2 E: _  |8 U0 `2 r/ h8 _  E+ N. v　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

! S3 E; H; V6 y　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

' G& v: h- t! B  a6 N　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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, b$ _+ [7 H2 X7 j+ z' V　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

# F/ [( f/ V& a　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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) z5 P' n8 x2 J) m# P& E4 `, @　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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: m  I1 R( w" \+ Q& y+ V8 n　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

( ]- y( _3 b5 F　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

/ j# N, y. I- j" ?9 c, r" o0 S　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

" ~, U: ~1 i* i; y7 Q  @　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

$ w% H+ Z$ }: [% t  N) l# U, t　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

% u( U8 \, C2 U　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

* m# ~9 g1 o* z: g. P　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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! e+ {* i/ l2 j0 q* M1 ~( M　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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' F$ B6 x) J  r, R3 a  Q5 }　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

6 n  H- p7 U/ {/ L8 H3 T% |- K: X) X　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

) Q: p$ Y) s% X$ A# o( I8 ~　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

: p# R+ m! p- E% d, t　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

: h/ p- c  O; E　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

9 J1 T( Q/ c2 B( b　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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. k4 h" t% k" n; V　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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' y  n% r& D( z# b& C5 B　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

" d# l0 [0 i$ {9 i2 Y: s　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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8 B, ^9 G; e' C6 S- s" ]. _　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

2 }( U& v6 r2 P+ S5 j; C　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

! J, j: Q, y; E3 B　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

9 \- Q% A8 C, u8 R/ |　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

8 X9 G$ @) f1 v' K# X6 T* u　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

- a' G+ ~) c! q5 r" }3 q! d　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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* @$ j1 [, v- h, W! a" `6 a5 l　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka