锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

9 @- c1 m' n1 s* H1 E" O" A　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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1 E' F+ \3 G6 ?　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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& O( O* M$ s! H  u6 ~( t, V: Z' {5 f　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

. b- S8 Y" r9 D. \　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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1 i- A; T( ^" o' l+ F　　改进: They are still immature.
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3 v+ j& o7 m. U8 P4 G( P1 I　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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% h7 f1 j3 S% v0 ~& v. ~　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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' L/ I7 r% _# J. k. c　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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1 U, ?+ |9 ]- u/ g" v9 I3 J3 n　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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9 y7 ^: D; w* e1 y$ D. [$ r$ S0 \2 j$ O　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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( D' r7 i  R6 J- k" C; O1 L- w4 g　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

* C  H  {/ K7 ~. f4 ^$ @　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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/ C  g; T/ h" H　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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0 X, Z0 B" y9 N　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

4 m( L6 o9 C! q7 O4 f　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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& G: V/ ^$ w, j, a; S　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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) I4 }2 h7 [- ^: L0 r　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

( t) t! d( }/ H$ Q9 X+ B　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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+ [1 x, ^# G: l2 ^. ~' Z　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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- C) n; V8 ~- \4 I* `* s4 d2 s" U  Q　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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) X- M4 B( R2 U# J% W/ V9 [  [　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

% M! u( h/ d3 G　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

9 \  ]7 B4 j) F/ G8 T　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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& g1 X$ l3 g6 i6 {　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

0 J" b' o. q& B" ]% h) ?　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

* n7 d# q& H+ t7 Z4 i　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

7 v( @7 _# W, W3 x3 j, b5 G7 l) o　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

1 Y! S2 x; H$ ?0 P( W/ h　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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; O' O% N. D9 S( @& a　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

" x1 V7 }- X* V& [　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

6 {" }% A, t+ B  `　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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5 I8 W; ^* [& l　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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, G! M, E- i% _6 t( L( o　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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; M2 d6 ?! R8 _9 h; s　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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6 s* d" S: A( g% U　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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. B3 ~4 [. A. ], _, |( S　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

, n' n: O! K" c　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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) N& x2 E: ]; m. A" F　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

7 Z0 g6 \/ I/ X( Y　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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: w) L) @: m0 P& A+ `　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

8 T" @1 A$ l. l8 Q4 @5 [/ c　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

% V+ R  y5 q9 Z' m, K　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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3 a4 M/ \, ~" A# Y1 }9 `5 e+ u3 h　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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$ o' h4 k3 s9 n- k( c9 a+ t: U　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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- c( Z3 a% t- w( h　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

6 g  X6 [) J- N' _! d　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

9 @" u4 C) `) P　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

4 a  x" t7 O0 S* ?6 }3 `, a9 r　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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1 [- O- x/ |/ Q/ @: ?5 B　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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9 W% z6 e* }9 H: y7 S( v　　50. I felt alone.

" Q1 }+ `% X! s) [　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka