锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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, X' Y! q& i( B: v- F4 e　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

' H) E; l' k- W+ @& _7 S0 X　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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( a9 N9 ^& p$ S　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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$ U+ Q' k1 ]0 b! o7 O3 p　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

) H2 A% @8 X! v+ C　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

" n2 B7 v0 N" Q8 R+ [7 G# E* I/ }　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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4 X  P$ J& A+ ^* P　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

' u, p" e' W) y3 c1 p　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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8 h/ `$ W7 f  \( R* A　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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* g/ K, g5 C  y$ H　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

: b( |$ h# c7 S. G' I& M7 q　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

& @! [2 T+ }! b- N! E　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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# z1 @3 U: ^) ]% ]# e　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

, Z3 ~5 u" d9 k2 \( E) Z0 ^7 m　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

# P/ B2 {7 e: Z: t6 ?  w　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

) P8 ^+ W  k' M" c5 I& }　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

7 f) |: f3 i% b& S- O　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

, A; v: m. v& X0 ?/ z! ]/ v　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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4 Y' E6 _, C! p- U( |7 a( q　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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# K5 T- O2 y) I& }0 L+ q- T　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

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* c# e% J% n$ `  [% d4 j　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

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2 |! f  @# _" _5 x, S, p　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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2 Y( S: u! x4 s: `　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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5 \$ @  [2 R( a  D7 _; v! U( f　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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4 F# J4 j( F) W, K, c8 _/ L/ u　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

# b8 @) P( V/ ?% {0 p　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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# s0 V& R+ P- u; w9 M) s% @　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

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$ N3 E4 o7 v1 D9 r& x6 I5 U# D　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

9 n* }( c5 I- [0 @6 u　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

9 m+ P3 H/ t' a8 ^! }　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

2 b5 Q8 i% U1 U: R; R$ q9 `( f　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

4 H7 Z6 d" h. c  ]' p　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.

: I, ~( m4 q  {- J1 i' s　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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, m  p' o$ _& W7 S　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

! D! m  ~) C/ u2 B　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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3 k2 ?+ R' c/ W4 ^1 E* G　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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6 L7 ~! U8 X$ `& w- Y# L　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

2 Z% W8 k4 C7 ]7 {8 u! _: H) e. Z　　38. No one knows all the things.
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0 Z; X& L1 `. o* `8 r% H　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  e4 g- K: ?1 v( z  L　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

5 y, u& v; G$ `- f" F8 t) r( y1 q　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

$ M: d: \5 x& c: Q1 N, g( _; K　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

: r- E1 l( [" u- M% W　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

+ N# N# B9 {4 f7 _7 b" G* s　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

! A) Q+ F4 K3 v# D5 j: @　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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4 N! D/ k- b' X% S# m6 K　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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( ?' l( |5 m; W& E" _  a/ o　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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* s( L' ?( ?5 o, L1 }! h　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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" G' h5 M, t1 S1 m9 }$ L% t/ a8 |　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka