锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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' ~# s+ f, L( W; W* d( q　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

% ?* i/ P0 c4 e" g8 v" B5 }5 V　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

4 N/ {  B' z6 X: I; A8 c( n　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

) T) i. t% F# ]  h6 e0 o　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

, q9 ?% P+ u& j4 Y4 W　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

% `: t4 U8 N+ e% z7 d; S　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

! [8 g% w/ V# z5 _2 u) G3 f( R　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

% {2 W2 a8 P$ W0 u6 T) W　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

4 G( c2 _+ H% s6 ]- w　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

( x. T  d/ e, c# i　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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2 \8 y# `! s8 [$ n# \: A7 I　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

3 F1 s. _  ?7 @( d1 N9 v& P3 s7 w  C　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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* u# [5 _9 A( i, B; L) }/ C　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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; l/ g9 K) c. Q　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

- F4 ?1 [  S; U9 j  @7 k　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

: A' D* s8 q+ F" x　　19. They cannot think clearly.

) H5 T+ z( R! f* ]& |# N1 K& w　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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3 K0 h; g0 o+ ^9 B! c8 A5 N3 o, e　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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) W9 F. U# m( x' T5 F: h0 A. s　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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/ \3 E2 O1 n# o1 |1 Z　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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1 ]! G, r* |6 e! V5 P! L) o+ b( e　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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% p4 p" F# u2 |/ d' j　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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( T& l# c# V) I2 P- S　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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1 `; H2 k! X; I  W4 H* {　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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7 j+ {1 H" K9 G1 S  ?5 j' L" n　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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& e; [1 |8 `, x" R5 V5 ?　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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0 E/ W: n% y% d7 N　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

; d0 _9 s$ D( Y* g5 v　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

; H* ~# {" [1 n. A) A　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

, ]# j+ ]0 u0 i6 X+ P1 M$ d# x　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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1 }- j* h0 C- C, b9 U- ~8 U6 I) c　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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* Q' ~6 [/ J& e2 I* x　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

+ `/ ^2 ?0 z: {　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

! n9 l! ]' Z0 A0 r2 f, ?) a5 _　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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6 x% b0 J" t: a; w4 |　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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3 J  _. i# X( Y9 e3 i# a　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

+ {9 ]9 w2 h6 c6 N; I. B# h　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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) E4 P5 t* H0 c* j, O1 V3 M　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

. w/ X. U. l. R$ A7 |1 \9 M　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

* S- K  \- p8 V& N( V, A　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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8 t6 s( Y( `" P3 e, q　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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7 R; N2 B+ N$ l　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

5 L3 |& P+ Z1 f: B　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

, k; Y9 M- O) k9 C' }9 u( ~1 |　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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6 V1 C# X& i5 T0 s5 l+ h　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

8 u& O# M3 [! f6 {. r　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

( j' c) n4 G. F1 L2 k7 o　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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" G, E. B1 k; Z* _  L　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

2 [; _, X& y) W! e　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka