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I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

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发表于 2008-6-6 22:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I need help after my second draft.
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发表于 2008-6-7 05:21 | 显示全部楼层
what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.
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发表于 2008-6-11 07:41 | 显示全部楼层
post your draft here, a lot will help
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
万水千山总是情
. p: I, y8 t5 z6 i1 ?词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
* m2 U8 K7 R$ A% e9 ]/ E莫说青山多障碍3 b" i) q, ~* R4 Y6 S1 {7 n8 B
风也急风也劲
* [1 a+ l3 ~. T: Z7 x- t白云过山峰也可传情
# Y* |0 s, \9 t6 D莫说水中多变幻, Z3 `- G, X1 C* {$ Z$ z
水也清水也静
- ~1 l& e* j9 Q柔情似水爱共永; S# D' r3 g: x0 O* J$ @
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
& C! `/ y3 M( D; w) Z/ [万水千山总是情' [1 \" |7 o  ]7 J2 G1 m
聚散也有天注定) D* x/ w% t, k) i9 o: `) p
不怨天不怨命
/ J  `2 j( ^; ]1 S5 K$ c  t但求有山水共作证6 {$ g+ s) @8 u1 n* H; F4 p
There is love everywhere5 \" \, s; w6 Q+ ^
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2 G& d7 y* Q: L1 N4 XLook at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.: V, }& u7 w1 x
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
, V6 m+ y0 L- o0 rLook at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.: k# S" w& f7 p) d- t) V* B
However, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure." u7 F4 |6 ^5 g2 u5 ^* x
Maybe some failure will disappoint us. $ }* {% D. e7 L: \
However, there is love everywhere: g4 n, K3 r. E! j6 ^0 _( Z6 g
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.( w8 Z& ^0 p7 ]8 o# o0 `! j
It is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
. P. U/ m5 }3 b' J( M# I" k' O" ?- bWe do not worry about too much future. # F/ _% f6 b6 t. X4 m/ C
Let’s just enjoy this moment.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
阳光总在风雨后+ r0 i$ B9 i( V2 z1 r/ O6 {) Y( ?
人生路上甜苦和喜忧7 }9 H7 K: C! l, y8 N! b
愿与你分担所有) i: y# b6 q( e! o6 ~5 r
难免曾经跌倒和等候
. n; ^& ^- c3 O% U; E1 F# n要勇敢的抬头+ B  A9 I8 R" b! C: K- N' R+ o4 K
谁愿常躲在避风的港口; U0 O; n+ m+ M/ Q
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
& `. B+ i$ i" n0 v8 B  Y  ?7 Y愿是你心中灯塔的守候9 T" T# x! q: f! a
在迷雾中让你看透
) W8 G7 a0 z5 b阳光总在风雨后( U/ s8 J# B5 K1 r  L( F
乌云上有睛空1 @0 o  Q( e' ^* j; O
珍惜所有的感动
6 U. _3 U4 {4 R6 B# P" y3 ?每一份希望在你手中
' m6 P( E* n5 O6 t$ U阳光总在风雨后
9 G+ C. e6 {2 y9 n+ ?请相信有彩虹
/ q1 j1 j  g7 F( T) c( d( `风风雨雨都接受# Q( D8 C8 O( H0 U9 g
我一直会在你的左右
1 M" D$ |# n/ y* j6 R* e. f- E% `1 bThere is always sunshine after raining( o2 O' ]7 l: G4 c! P2 i) f0 I
There are happiness and sadness in life.
. S) K: o, a& Z! N9 L: |I will share with you everything.
$ y' E% ^# W# o& D# I! KIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
8 }7 J$ ^; {4 l3 EWe get together and bravely face them.
4 D0 s7 p& m& H- |Everyone does not want to have a common life,! i; H% {+ H; [( t' z! E* \
We prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
8 G0 e" a- v4 V; w! OI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.9 {, D. T6 w  Z' y% \6 m" g$ ~
There is always sunshine after raining.
) y6 X" Q4 d; u) X* H& XThere is sun above the black cloud., i9 Y1 S) O, o8 C3 L; y6 ]
Please cherish every moment you are moved.1 F& ]/ ~. \" V0 \4 Z7 O7 [( X
Take chance on every hope." p3 z. u3 h4 V( J0 p
There is always sunshine after raining.7 O0 U: @2 D& b" I9 `# }$ X
We can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
5 R0 Q: R. K$ QWe will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.# @1 c# t& R1 [% v
I will always accomplish you in your life.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
让世界充满爱
  u8 K0 B3 K8 @& ^  X' a7 W8 a' j0 f$ O
轻轻地捧着你的脸2 ~2 X; w5 }& G7 V; m
为你把眼泪擦干
8 P  ]. S2 t. }" q% i3 z* }- D4 o这颗心永远属于你
. U$ x5 y/ B/ p% u; {告诉我你不再孤单
$ V3 s& h# I% i5 ?, `, `, I. [7 m深深地凝望着你的眼
: P/ W- n; L/ R; U不需要更多的语言
/ j1 u+ R2 b: t9 Q) w. F7 E紧紧地握着你的手; A6 M6 `2 n. ?, L( H9 y5 ?
这温暖依旧未改变2 D+ V* w9 c4 ?3 j6 n- |0 f
我们同欢乐我们同忍受
- J# G, }8 v' B我们怀着同样的期待
5 I! G; T  O* R/ [5 a1 \9 Z* X我们同风雨我们共追求
8 h' s' h4 G1 M我们珍存同一样的爱
, O, D3 Z& i0 E$ d无论你我可曾相识/ l4 I' R& B+ D1 `
无论在眼前在天边! P8 g7 Q& x( ], ^( F
真心地为你祝愿, e7 X0 F" g1 m* E
祝愿你事事平安! b, J3 O0 h( b6 x
6 o! e' ~; @/ N
Let the world full of love
0 W4 W3 B/ {" i+ VGently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.% G" C' M, j% Y$ [
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.  P& ?- G0 t) b
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
4 r5 g% \2 @# w/ e" W5 {7 l( ~Tightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
& w5 f1 k' E  R) T" I6 C* MWe share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
& s$ U2 P: y+ L$ wWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.( [& y2 M4 B, U% U
We treasure the same love for both you and me.8 _/ g+ L) G- l& M' b/ o* q: @
Whether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,. g- Q4 U& U" g5 r8 P( E
I sincerely wish you are peace .
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:03 | 显示全部楼层
明天会更好5 E2 I2 E, u  @7 T" |/ ~  y. b$ ?/ |3 [
轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵5 w9 ~7 l$ L& u. h% o2 O& B
慢慢张开你的眼睛
9 |; v. }, @# F, [看看忙碌的世界
0 Q5 r2 _  ?& }: S是否依然孤独的转个不停
  P, V2 m7 n+ w# |春风不解风情
  f5 B: v, c8 z9 C6 v吹动少年的心
2 r' ?* w, c# {让昨日脸上的泪痕$ a, q" w% e9 y! g; u/ n1 I! U
随记忆风干了" o" H! w  h( w( R( I3 A
抬头寻找天空的翅膀
% @; j; C4 B' _7 G1 f) W候鸟出现它的影迹
5 i( g  q2 d! d& A带来远处的饥荒! T2 q, I) X$ @
无情的战火依然存在的消息1 A8 S0 a: t" S. j
玉山白雪飘零  |! J) t0 \8 q5 a  M$ y) Z1 n0 n
燃烧少年的心
, v2 Z) O: d- i使真情溶化成音符% o7 E* q# h/ l% ^: h8 E0 {
倾诉遥远的祝福6 ?* o4 w# P% A) F: |
唱出你的热情
/ P% Q% V# T4 X. v, \伸出你的双手
' h+ ]- u4 b: f* y" A2 E让我拥抱着你的梦- h4 X2 w/ j* `/ y
让我拥有你真心的面孔
$ `0 z% H) {: H: X2 w9 H; @让我们的笑容1 K5 k9 \7 J  f# i% n/ z2 E' X3 F& @- [
充满着青春的骄傲
9 t& o. T8 I7 _2 P9 i) J为明天献出虔诚的祈祷. q' k" q, t0 H& ?
谁能不顾自己的家园8 B2 J$ v& M2 u3 ^+ J
抛开记忆中的童年4 ]5 D' P% z+ d$ |
谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
+ Z+ `5 `' z  J" q& N带走我们的笑容7 s# @' e( V/ j+ G; |
青春不解红尘
& e6 E% n% a, I1 D胭脂沾染了灰$ J; F! V1 _- ]: A5 y2 s4 V, ?
让久违不见的泪水
7 U+ d9 w% X- r5 D6 A3 m6 q滋润了你的面容5 e  K; U; |3 u, j$ M
唱出你的热情0 D) F+ U9 c/ l% G& w
伸出你的双手
0 H* m+ |% I6 G7 \! E让我拥抱着你的梦: I- T: `0 m& i( E: H2 L
让我拥有你真心的面孔
% u" R( a) U% g让我们的笑容% U) l& m9 M% p. U6 `
充满着青春的骄傲
" Q' ~; z% R; F4 L5 g为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
: e# J2 f2 v7 G  I+ O( ^: h轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵  Y( o4 b! @. g+ b4 f# g7 ]6 ?
慢慢张开你的眼睛. W  a' v, |$ u' @% z
看看忙碌的世界" C. g/ J0 s: s2 W3 t1 n* b, g9 H
是否依然孤独的转个不停
5 s6 S" `( L' h6 d日出唤醒清晨
9 f5 c9 D% G, I/ X" s2 l, o大地光彩重生
' l7 k& {( T2 U1 b" D让和风拂出的音响
% u% q0 \0 H9 \6 [& _谱成生命的乐章
9 W6 C% R2 F3 S& O- u唱出你的热情
- L# E% G6 b: s  U8 I3 l+ V伸出你双手& F* M) w7 B2 e* r
让我拥抱着你的梦) Y8 G# ]7 ]( v
让我拥有你真心的面孔
3 h* L* C5 A) b7 r2 J4 Q9 {让我们的笑容
$ b; B! _9 D9 r) l1 s充满着青春的骄傲
* {" h; u1 |$ ?4 W( ~8 ^让我们期待明天会更好" C+ |. g$ f- |# q/ a4 Z
Future will be better
' n; K5 A; q5 g* N3 GI woke up in the morning and open my eyes, * J- _" k' _" D! k
And see the busy world whether the same as before." i" M! D8 ~6 X- L
I cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.6 T! j2 @5 b, @; \( K( V2 n
I looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
2 k! v/ w$ Q$ Y# {" g# F5 GIt told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
, \7 h# x( P3 \5 e/ Z! g" tI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
; C1 B  t/ G) w# \- o7 e8 ]5 G' k! ELet’s sing with burning passions.+ r  F0 m& q# Z! i" {% Q/ d$ s
Let’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
( b, g: T7 }8 `' J- u" J- xLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
3 F1 M$ w5 H3 A+ V! b3 WEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
4 M9 M. F- S- m) @4 MNobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
* U$ u& z+ j5 O, V; v& f/ h5 Y, hWe got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
, b# k3 m, H* PLet’s sing with burning passions,  v0 a; k0 Y( |9 F0 j
Let’s shakes our hands with each other." k& j1 g+ v8 N
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.) y) z9 z% M2 S0 j5 l+ ]
Let’s have the same dream2 ^8 ^; H8 h/ T3 o
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.) D9 f7 B( H4 l
I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
4 v) z1 }; a7 v2 z2 F: mAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.' Y8 }. X& o6 @3 v: }* e
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,$ L. u% r$ e3 L5 R, E
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.. W- {+ h. k% f4 @+ n
And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster." y/ a  Z0 U0 g$ K, p1 J) f1 _9 o
Everything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
2 V8 O( X: o0 rLet’s sing with burning passions.          `# U3 @( L! }  r0 K9 O
Let’s shakes our hands with each other.
) i! s; y( r9 O( Y. {Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
& @2 V3 F( \6 rLet’s hope future will better.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-6-12 21:04 | 显示全部楼层
Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.
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