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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.; h; x! J- M( J
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
0 D U2 t' T/ A$ CEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
0 v/ u4 G6 L6 O1 DPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
; y3 I6 d$ y* f: c5 c3 y Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
3 e) Z7 K6 B( F/ u PThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.
! Y* w% d0 Y& p1 k, c- p jSeemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.5 z C; _6 t7 y f' i
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
5 Y0 G' S+ P3 h# ?* cCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
3 G. V: b5 R; flike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.7 e8 @+ w/ k2 C% L! T: t5 S: Q d
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.
) e' j. e* A" ]7 fThe emotion and the carma only is a dream.6 j4 m R, e7 u* N$ L# o, e
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
/ F+ ]5 g- N) d( g EI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
2 ?3 U+ q+ t+ `2 O, mI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild., }& I% f1 X5 \: u; Y- _
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
; } }2 i, h" ^Intoxicated then feel cold,
2 h/ h9 S1 c+ g7 P% T: P8 o; Bthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.: k; p, W6 y, s' x7 l
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.7 W) r- O6 q3 n) p/ j
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?5 }. U v2 Z, u% g2 Z% N! @4 l
Why I am always hoodwinked!3 D) S! D. r! |1 j* G8 Z
I have told myself many times cautiously ; Z c$ E3 i4 g
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.6 e/ U# }, O/ z* W# P
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.8 w' `/ Z9 t, E& o! h B
Why can`t I take it easy?6 O. d( q: J3 Y/ w2 q
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!/ V" |3 F; f0 e& o( B3 M$ _, N
When the quiet night comes
- ?3 d$ O( Q4 p* wyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.5 ] A& g/ n* E3 j& N3 y# |) F
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
; T1 P2 I+ r) q( Q. \$ JYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,' w+ j' U. S+ ~; d: Z# j! U+ l" F
light the dark corner in my mind.
% F) S" ] F9 xI feel a bit of cozy.5 L4 p! k$ e2 v$ k& {5 A
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
2 L, |; h% S4 [maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.+ G p) F+ `/ ? q
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
1 P: y) A* N6 x; e' bbut accompanying with the time passed
- [( M. ]1 i4 rI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
* V( Q. {4 Q/ ~: p& t ealways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.; M8 ~/ @* F& m
Without asking if you like me or if I like you; K/ H5 z2 F! `7 G7 |: P
only feel gracious for your existing,4 y- X$ s( g' d5 c% W7 D9 T
onlt want to do something for you.
4 }; W5 S. g/ n L; Z1 ZEvery time when you meet me
0 @! i3 ]0 a# }- @& v1 ?. ethe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,) y) p; x7 o6 N
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
$ q3 R9 w1 W" |! WThat live in my heart.
! i: [4 j, b( H8 vDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
9 Q+ w( s1 q1 G; k p3 _3 @Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice& r0 x- R; p# `, u2 x; u7 G9 ?
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.9 A; i- x/ |' n. W7 Z8 A; Z
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
, A2 t! o% h- j! V$ bsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
$ ?6 k- h% F) A& e7 N, }/ ^Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
* D$ k1 n3 y4 l9 Y/ }3 k: w1 mespecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
3 h+ v j8 q' s) ]) E$ o9 k; n) F- J8 TSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
) ?- E, A9 c# n( b* lonly waiting for you quietly0 ?7 W: P2 J( P o2 b( e
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
& n4 s; ]: v/ r/ _I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
& E9 z1 l" ~* E6 s; Eand enjoy the rain washing together0 [6 t) M3 P$ c6 S
or rush to a film' e( a7 V; W+ h9 d d! x
or listen to a music quietly.
7 _; c- o) s9 Q0 S z7 tWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?9 Y/ s2 g! ^9 M$ N8 _5 W( F
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
0 ^6 R: s! f& v5 e! p2 n8 i1 n) Lsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".8 R; e. e2 i, c# N' a) j( c2 A
That is enough.
: F5 i, G" v5 y: i6 y7 cMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
( l- f" R; O' Z) sfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,$ v2 W2 S- [ t7 \, U
the same as my missing.
% f4 q& j/ X7 xIt comes a little bit of verdure.
# U3 n; Q- p* v ?' U' \! {( EIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
; h, m) z% M+ j" G+ j4 uthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.. L) P: R' G, l0 f& |. y
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
& x- D( Y6 X ^) oI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.
5 i! c6 D Y3 R+ yAt the moment you reach out your hands to me ,. O6 x8 W3 d! T% \
then I will have all care and ardor.
; ~! m$ r3 E. O6 u: ]6 H+ mShall we walk arm in arm?
' [" S% _ A H r4 ~; R n m呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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