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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.. R0 z7 _5 }4 W* W/ Q$ Y- ~
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
" ~$ \! U0 z1 Z4 I0 f M( p- ZEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
" C( `$ l# C9 s) EPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.7 [! B; {3 g' |* s! j3 ^) i
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
7 U8 e; d6 M# m& |" NThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.8 u" j# [7 d4 D
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.+ g1 ~- J* }1 O* r
Summer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:
9 m8 ~6 A! G! y, h$ zCats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool $ z) e. e% G+ A9 E% q) p$ v/ X( j
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
3 `% [5 P j6 K) F% N4 i5 ~9 k4 Z9 XI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.% m" h) ] c" b# L3 `" D% n. G
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.0 C% Q0 m3 t) s% b, v6 d/ b) V
That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
: [ v( @2 f. A/ Z l7 P `I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.- H' D$ [4 G+ a: ]9 C
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.) Y; J7 R. Z) g+ y4 v9 Q) ]4 l
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?8 ?! h" T/ v n2 D) z. z
Intoxicated then feel cold,: y+ D4 B& v) w) T
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
. j' h3 o( d& }+ z& ~8 ?( vI am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
7 U' g; Y0 E) b) fThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?. I. s/ N& m! `3 l; r
Why I am always hoodwinked!1 h/ V3 C2 ^* `' q }2 [# g; z6 w
I have told myself many times cautiously
) {8 J5 f1 _) q( E, i# k: Ddon`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
) `1 N# a8 u8 q ^0 M& sThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
1 K9 J2 [, S) N @+ nWhy can`t I take it easy?& J# c: ^+ v' k" N: h# G
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
) L+ t) J; s# E, W/ A) DWhen the quiet night comes
+ O0 T8 A! k. Byour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
; D0 @! a6 A2 I+ f& Y3 TThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.2 _+ }3 ?* Z/ `5 @+ l2 P; c) r
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
& J) x6 [3 ~, T7 r, n, Alight the dark corner in my mind.
" b/ m/ K# G" \" n G& k( a, ~: wI feel a bit of cozy.% {& U8 {, H8 M" T: X& L( N
The deep attached to you in a twinkling
- m) C; T+ ]5 z5 ^3 ~maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.! i7 F. q$ y0 V
I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
# ?! _+ h8 B; H& h% E3 f& hbut accompanying with the time passed
0 T: L4 d9 w9 `( k3 x' \I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
* k, q1 s6 B' K# Malways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
) X. `% q( p( y+ s8 w' o& y7 x$ IWithout asking if you like me or if I like you
) B G2 Z) i7 Y* f1 w: Aonly feel gracious for your existing,( a1 b$ b0 Z, J" \' W
onlt want to do something for you.
& S0 L. v7 ~; _) [1 Q4 `Every time when you meet me. {: B' k/ b+ b% s k' J f: b, C
the sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,4 z( `* X7 M+ s+ N+ z8 C0 \/ @: w
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere9 K3 y' E& g d, A
That live in my heart.5 L4 [1 j- T, [! k& k; F
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?! a* A; y; d- n3 v* l
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice' g, _: n2 {* ~' v
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
6 K" @4 v6 z2 rThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land4 C1 r, c( y7 B: ^& S! S
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.6 y2 M# o ]0 B4 V
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,& I2 M0 h* o7 ?" O7 r
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
$ ^% D8 Q6 {$ a8 `' \/ kSweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy ! n) ]' l7 S1 L! }: `' _
only waiting for you quietly
# v- w5 y$ i- S8 mjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.+ S" l& f' V+ j9 y9 ?7 k
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
/ z! D3 k: x( |and enjoy the rain washing together, Y0 n7 L/ R- K0 m; u! b& N9 T
or rush to a film6 `4 O6 T; L' u6 l# R0 D
or listen to a music quietly.- c. T | k K* Q1 B6 l0 Y
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
. N" g/ f U+ `# w% i6 r+ j5 NIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,- b* S2 Q8 D1 }+ w4 q! F1 l C
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
0 f, r1 u; q* |- u1 IThat is enough.
% u' x7 v( {) a+ j! ^- v3 n/ c/ `Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago," |' c7 @( k/ I" D$ T- H. ~* L
finely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,
; j+ v, I* x" h7 X. uthe same as my missing.
. G- q- A- w, c. R1 nIt comes a little bit of verdure.
2 @. E5 Z; z {3 z1 a1 x' KIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
1 ~2 F* x; c& V3 h& [+ Zthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.0 N8 ?4 }% m2 Y7 S
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully., t& a1 M8 K! R+ o6 M. Z6 N
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.3 Z F- B6 x% R5 y" ~
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,# x5 Z0 C! r! W/ }* i
then I will have all care and ardor.
4 m, i* p* x! J8 sShall we walk arm in arm?
$ i$ ^1 k! ~8 @1 o$ Z呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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